Review Reports
- Hewa A. Chomany 1,
- Ali Qorbanee 2 and
- Mohammed O. Rahman 6
- et al.
Reviewer 1: Anonymous Reviewer 2: Anonymous
Round 1
Reviewer 1 Report
Comments and Suggestions for AuthorsAntisperm Antibody Positivity among Infertile Men: Immunological and Clinical Associations in Erbil, Kurdistan Region, Iraq
This study aimed to estimate the prevalence of clinically significant ASA positivity and investigate its associations with demographic, clinical, and semen characteristics among infertile men in Erbil, Kurdistan Region of Iraq.
The authors have conducted a clinically relevant study on a topic that has received little attention. However, there are several methodological issues that need to be addressed before the results can be properly interpreted.
Major comments.
1. Authors must specify whether the study is retrospective or prospective.
2. 49 cases initially classified as ASA-positive were subsequently reclassified as negative because their MAR values were less than 50%. The authors should specify why there is an error in the original ASA classification.
3. The direct MAR test technique should be described in greater detail so that the experiment can be replicated.
4. A significant portion of the cohort has reduced motility, so the antibodies may not be able to bind to them, which could affect the results.
5. The statistical analysis needs to be reviewed.
Minor comments
1. The authors must specify what supplements the patients received.
2. Authors should avoid repeating the results presented in the text in tables and figures.
For example:
Table 2/Figure 2
Table 4/Figure 3
Table 5/Figure 4
Table 6/Figure 5
Table 7/Figure 6
Authors should remove these tables and figures.
3. Of the 22 bibliographic references, 10 are outdated; in some cases, this is justified, but in others they need to be updated.
Recommendation: Major revision.
Comments for author File:
Comments.pdf
Author Response
Point-by-Point Response to Reviewer 1
Manuscript: Antisperm Antibody Positivity and Semen-Quality Phenotypes among Infertile Men in Erbil, Kurdistan Region, Iraq
Revision key: Reviewer 1 changes are highlighted yellow. Revision codes below identify the exact manuscript location.
Note on Abbreviations: R1C1 refers to Reviewer 1, Comment 1; R1C8 refers to Reviewer 1, Comment 8; and so on.
Reviewer 1 changes are highlighted yellow
R1C1 | Reviewer 1
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Major comment 1: Specify whether the study is retrospective or prospective. |
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Response: We agree. The study is now explicitly described as a multicentre retrospective cross-sectional study based on routinely collected, anonymized clinical and laboratory records. We also clarified that there was no prospective intervention or additional specimen collection. |
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Locations: Abstract, Methods sentence; Section 2.1, Study Design and Setting, first paragraph; Section 2.3, Data Collection, opening sentence. |
R1C2 | Reviewer 1
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Major comment 2: Explain why 49 initially ASA-positive cases were reclassified as negative. |
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Response: We clarified that the discrepancy was a categorical coding error in the source spreadsheet. The numeric MAR percentages were not changed. Binary ASA status was recalculated uniformly from the recorded MAR percentage using the prespecified threshold: negative <50% and positive >=50%. |
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Location: Section 2.5, Statistical Analysis, final data-cleaning sentence; related clarification retained in the first paragraph of the Discussion. |
R1C3 | Reviewer 1
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Major comment 3: Describe the direct MAR technique in sufficient detail for replication. |
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Response: We added the reagent volumes, specimen condition, mixing sequence, microscope magnification, reading time, number and type of sperm counted, delayed rereading procedure, and interpretation threshold. The procedure follows the FertiPro SpermMar IgG instructions and contemporary methodological guidance. |
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Location: Section 2.3, Data Collection, new paragraphs immediately after the ASA measurement bullet. Citation added as reference 23. |
R1C4 | Reviewer 1
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Major comment 4: Reduced motility may prevent antibody binding and affect the results. |
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Response: We agree. We now state that direct MAR scoring depends on motile spermatozoa, that marked asthenozoospermia can reduce the number of scorable cells and potentially reduce sensitivity, and that this may bias comparisons toward higher apparent ASA prevalence among men with better-preserved motility. We recommend indirect MAR or immunobead testing in future studies when adequate motile cells cannot be scored. |
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Locations: Section 2.3, new methodological limitation paragraph; Discussion, Limitations paragraph. |
R1C5 | Reviewer 1
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Major comment 5: The statistical analysis needs to be reviewed. |
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Response: We reviewed the analysis and strengthened its interpretation. The 10-predictor logistic model is now explicitly identified as exploratory because 53 positive events correspond to approximately 5.3 events per parameter. We emphasize effect estimates, confidence intervals, discrimination, calibration, and held-out test performance rather than p-values or variable-importance rankings alone. |
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Location: Section 2.5, Statistical Analysis, paragraph beginning “The prevalence of ASA positivity...” and the existing model-performance discussion. |
R1C6 | Reviewer 1
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Minor comment 1: Specify the supplements received by patients. |
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Response: The source records captured supplement use only as yes/no and did not consistently contain product name, formulation, dose, or duration. We therefore did not invent categories. The manuscript now transparently states this limitation and retains supplement exposure as a binary variable. |
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Location: Section 2.3, Data Collection, Demographic and lifestyle bullet. |
R1C7 | Reviewer 1
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Minor comment 2: Avoid repeating results in both tables and figures; remove redundant presentations. |
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Response: We retained the tables because they provide exact values and removed the five redundant graphical presentations corresponding to former Figure 2 through Figure 6. Textual cross-references were revised accordingly. |
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Locations: Results Sections 3.2, 3.4, 3.5, 3.6, and 3.7; former Figures 2-6 deleted. |
R1C8 | Reviewer 1
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Minor comment 3: Update outdated references. |
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Response: Foundational references were retained only where historically or methodologically necessary. We added a broad contemporary review and global survey of ASA testing practices and used it to support the expanded methods and international context. The manuscript already includes recent evidence from 2022, 2024, 2025, and 2026. |
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Locations: Introduction, regional/international variability paragraph; Section 2.3, MAR method; References, new reference 23. |
References added or used in the revision
Gupta, S.; Sharma, R.; Agarwal, A.; et al. Antisperm Antibody Testing: A Comprehensive Review of Its Role in the Management of Immunological Male Infertility and Results of a Global Survey of Clinical Practices. World Journal of Men’s Health 2022, 40, 380-398. https://doi.org/10.5534/wjmh.210164.
FertiPro NV. SpermMar Test IgG, Instructions for Use, Document ID FP09 I02 R01 G.1, updated 30 April 2025. This manufacturer document supports the detailed laboratory procedure; journal formatting can list it as a web/manufacturer source if required by the editor.
Author Response File:
Author Response.pdf
Reviewer 2 Report
Comments and Suggestions for AuthorsThe manuscript summarizes a study of antisperm antibodies (detected by MAR test) of men undergoing evaluation for infertility in Erbil, Iraq. In fact, the data presented characterize this cohort by a number of other sperm and general health parameters, and the authors could consider including broader formulations in the title and abstract.
The inclusion criteria are clear, and the data have been analyzed vigorously by statistical methods. A serious limitation of the study is the absence of a control group but the difficulty to recruit sufficient numbers of healthy, fertile volunteers to supply samples for a study that would not benefit them is understandable.
The results obtained by the team show that the presence of antisperm antibodies does not correlate with any of the standard semen analysis parameters and, hence, requires a separate assay. It is noteworthy that antisperm antibodies were more common in patients with better semen quality, raising the possibility that in some of them, these antibodies could be the cause of infertility.
My main critical remark addresses Figure 8. In its present form, individual points corresponding to patients overlap, fuse and are impossible to distinguish. I recommend using two different color intensities for ASA-positive and negative patients, and breaking the continuity of the vertical axis to allow a better spreading of the main cluster of results while still accommodating the outliers.
In addition, while it is appropriate that the authors have cited publications for similar studies in their region, I recommend including more references for other populations.
Author Response
Point-by-Point Response to Reviewer 2
Manuscript: Antisperm Antibody Positivity and Semen-Quality Phenotypes among Infertile Men in Erbil, Kurdistan Region, Iraq
Revision key: Reviewer 2 changes are highlighted green. Revision codes below identify the exact manuscript location.
Note on Abbreviations: R2C1 refers to Reviewer 2, Comment 1; R2C4 refers to Reviewer 2, Comment 4; and so on.
Reviewer 2 changes are highlighted green.
R2C1 | Reviewer 2
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Consider broader formulations in the title and abstract because the cohort is characterized by semen and general-health parameters. |
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Response: We broadened the title to include semen-quality phenotypes and added a sentence in the Abstract noting heterogeneity in motility, morphology, and semen-profile clustering, while retaining ASA as the main outcome. |
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Locations: Manuscript title; Abstract, immediately before Conclusions. |
R2C2 | Reviewer 2
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The absence of a control group is a serious limitation. |
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Response: We agree and have strengthened this limitation. The revised text states that the study estimates prevalence only within a referred infertile cohort and cannot quantify excess ASA positivity relative to fertile men from the same population. |
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Location: Discussion, Limitations paragraph. |
R2C3 | Reviewer 2
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Figure 8 has overlapping points; use clearer colour intensity and consider an axis break. |
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Response: The PCA figure uses high-contrast cluster colours, distinct geometric symbols for ASA-positive and ASA-negative cases, and transparency so overlapping observations can be recognized. We clarified these encodings in the caption. We did not break the PCA axis because a discontinuity would distort Euclidean distances and the geometry of the ordination; a broken axis is more appropriate for univariate plots than for a PCA biplot. |
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Location: Figure 3 (previous Figure 8) caption. |
R2C4 | Reviewer 2
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Include more references from populations outside the region. |
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Response: We added a global review and survey covering clinical and laboratory practices across multiple continents, and incorporated it into the Introduction and methods discussion. |
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Locations: Introduction, regional/international variability paragraph; References, new reference 23, 24. |
References added or used in the revision
Gupta, S.; Sharma, R.; Agarwal, A.; et al. Antisperm Antibody Testing: A Comprehensive Review of Its Role in the Management of Immunological Male Infertility and Results of a Global Survey of Clinical Practices. World Journal of Men’s Health 2022, 40, 380-398. https://doi.org/10.5534/wjmh.210164.
Author Response File:
Author Response.pdf
Round 2
Reviewer 1 Report
Comments and Suggestions for AuthorsThe authors have implemented the suggestion made.