Review Reports
- Tesfaye Asmare Sisay1,
- Jaykumar Patel2 and
- Kusum Khatri2
- et al.
Reviewer 1: Antônio Souto Reviewer 2: Anonymous
Round 1
Reviewer 1 Report
Comments and Suggestions for AuthorsThe manuscript shows potential, but needs improvement. A clustering test and a Pearson correlation analysis (variables) could be included at the end of the discussion to determine which variables are most associated with biomass increase. The results should focus on the effect of salinity and the response of the evaluated ecotypes, enriching the discussion with more detailed explanations and updated references. The conclusion would benefit from a perspective of future work. Therefore, my opinion is that major revisions are needed. The file with the corrections is attached.
Comments for author File:
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Author Response
Response to the Reviewers' Comments
We thank the Reviewers for their comments and suggestions. We have responded to them all and feel that the revisions significantly improve the manuscript.
Reviewer: 1
Comments and Suggestions for Authors
Comment-1: The manuscript shows potential, but needs improvement. A clustering test and a Pearson correlation analysis (variables) could be included at the end of the discussion to determine which variables are most associated with biomass increase. The results should focus on the effect of salinity and the response of the evaluated ecotypes, enriching the discussion with more detailed explanations and updated references. The conclusion would benefit from a perspective on future work. Therefore, my opinion is that major revisions are needed. The file with the corrections is attached.
Response:
We have included a correlation matrix at the end of the discussion part and explanatory texts spread throughout the discussion section.
In 4.1. Growth responses
" Moderate salinity levels improve osmotic adjustment and ion compartmentalization, which support metabolic activity and plant growth, but excessive salinity causes oxidative stress, ion toxicity, and reduced nutrient uptake [39] [39,43]. In support of these notions, the accumulated yield (FW) exhibited high positive correlations with EC, TSS, and shoot diameter [Table 2, [44,45,46]".
In 4.2 Photosynthetic pigments.
Chlorophyll and carotenoids correlate positively (Table 2) due to their shared, interdependent roles in photosynthesis and photoprotection [47].
In 4.4 Antioxidant responses.
The current study shows that MDA displayed negative correlations with radical scavenging activity, polyphenols, flavonoids, proteins, chlorophylls, and carotenoids, further indicating that oxidative stress is inversely related to antioxidant capacity and photosynthetic pigments [Table 2, [45,47,74,75]]. …………..
Radical scavenging activity serves as a crucial defense mechanism under various stress conditions, and it plays a vital role in neutralizing reactive oxygen species that contribute to lipid peroxidation and abiotic stress effects [76]. Antioxidant-related traits, including total polyphenols, flavonoids, carotenoids, and total proteins, were significantly and positively correlated with radical scavenging activity (DPPH), highlighting their central role in antioxidative defense [Table 2, [47,48, 77].
Response: Table -2. Correlation analysis between different assays.
|
Variable |
Correlations (Spreadsheet1) Marked correlations are significant at p < .05000 N=72 (Casewise deletion of missing data) |
||||||||||||
|
Total chlorophyll |
Total carotenoid |
Total polyphenol |
Total flavonoid |
DPPH |
Total protein |
Shoot diameter |
TSS |
RWC |
Anthocyanin |
EC |
FW |
MDA |
|
|
Total chlorophyll |
1.000 |
0.908* |
0.166 |
0.337* |
0.313* |
0.179 |
0.397* |
0.411* |
0.548* |
0.319* |
0.333* |
0.257* |
-0.645* |
|
Total carotenoid |
0.908* |
1.000 |
0.151 |
0.432* |
0.364* |
0.317* |
0.367* |
0.475* |
0.468* |
0.212 |
0.365* |
0.330* |
-0.496* |
|
Total polyphenol |
0.166 |
0.151 |
1.000 |
0.645* |
0.763* |
0.333* |
0.286* |
-0.115 |
0.077 |
-0.410* |
-0.388* |
-0.064 |
-0.182 |
|
Total flavonoid |
0.337* |
0.432* |
0.645* |
1.000 |
0.919* |
0.732* |
0.538* |
0.025 |
0.215 |
-0.329* |
-0.102 |
0.285* |
-0.137 |
|
DPPH |
0.313* |
0.364* |
0.763* |
0.919* |
1.000 |
0.565* |
0.517* |
-0.015 |
0.320* |
-0.379* |
-0.293* |
0.144 |
-0.183 |
|
Total protein |
0.179 |
0.317* |
0.333* |
0.732* |
0.565* |
1.000 |
0.114 |
-0.117 |
0.087 |
-0.207 |
-0.098 |
-0.031 |
0.205 |
|
Shoot diameter |
0.397* |
0.367* |
0.286* |
0.538* |
0.517* |
0.114 |
1.000 |
0.417* |
0.172 |
0.063 |
0.366* |
0.774* |
-0.532* |
|
TSS |
0.411* |
0.475* |
-0.115 |
0.025 |
-0.015 |
-0.117 |
0.417* |
1.000 |
0.186 |
0.213 |
0.719* |
0.601* |
-0.354* |
|
RWC |
0.548* |
0.468* |
0.077 |
0.215 |
0.320* |
0.087 |
0.172 |
0.186 |
1.000 |
0.278* |
-0.084 |
-0.070 |
-0.333* |
|
Anthocyanin |
0.319* |
0.212 |
-0.410* |
-0.329* |
-0.379* |
-0.207 |
0.063 |
0.213 |
0.278* |
1.000 |
0.402* |
0.193 |
-0.342* |
|
EC |
0.333* |
0.365* |
-0.388* |
-0.102 |
-0.293* |
-0.098 |
0.366* |
0.719* |
-0.084 |
0.402* |
1.000 |
0.703* |
-0.312* |
|
FW |
0.257* |
0.330* |
-0.064 |
0.285* |
0.144 |
-0.031 |
0.774* |
0.601* |
-0.070 |
0.193 |
0.703* |
1.000 |
-0.410* |
|
MDA |
-0.645* |
-0.496* |
-0.182 |
-0.137 |
-0.183 |
0.205 |
-0.532* |
-0.354* |
-0.333* |
-0.342* |
-0.312* |
-0.410* |
1.000 |
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Reviewer 2 Report
Comments and Suggestions for Authors
The paper: Successive Harvesting Intervals and Salinity Level Modulate 2 Biomass Production and Nutritional Value in 3 Sarcocornia fruticosa and Arthrocnemum macrostachyum. 4 by the following authors (Tesfaye Asmare Sisay 1,#, Jaykumar Patel 2, Kusum Khatri 2, Babita Choudhary 2, Dominic Standing 3, Zai Du Nja 1, 5 Muki Shpigel 4, Luísa Margarida Batista Custódio 5 and Ilya Gelfand 3 Moshe Sagi 3,6,7,) is valuable but some points and sections should be addressed to be accepted for publication in Agriculture.
INTRODUCTION
Species names should be written in full at first mention (Sarcocornia fruticosa, Arthrocnemum macrostachyum) and always italicized. Acronyms such as “AM” should be avoided in the text. If abbreviations are needed after the first mention, the correct form is A. macrostachyum.
The use of the term ecotype is unclear. If referring to distinct populations or accessions, this should be explained explicitly.
The objective of the study is relevant. Highlighting successive harvesting intervals, in addition to salinity effects, adds novelty compared with previous research. Nonetheless, I believe the introduction might follow a “funnel” structure to make it more appealing for the readers.
MATERIAL AND METHODS
The use of Sarcocornia fruticosa VM, which has been used before, Ventura et al., 2011a, is not well-explained. The authors should explain what “VM” refers to (population, accession, or locality) and provide precise information on the source of plant material. Without this clarification, the description is incomplete.
The description of Sarcocornia fruticosa “ecotypes” and A. macrostachyum seeds is confusing. The information should be reorganized more clearly, ideally on a table. Do the authors have problems to get high yield of germination percentages? Some authors refer in Salicornia (including former Sarcocornia) and Arthrocaulon (formerly Arthrocnemum) the necessity of seed priming before germination.
The term ecotype should be defined explicitly. Does it refer to morphological forms (prostrate versus shrubby growth) or to populations from distinct localities? Clarification is needed to avoid ambiguity.
A suggested table should include at least:
- Species (in italics).
- Ecotype designation (Ecotype 1, Ecotype 2, etc.).
- Locality with precise geographic coordinates.
- Date of collection.
- Collectors or source reference.
- Ecological/morphological description (e.g., coastal sandy habitat, saline marsh, prostrate vs. shrubby growth form, tidal influence vs. no tidal flooding, low, medium or high marsh, inland).
A high-quality map would be valuable as well.
This reorganization would make the meaning of “ecotypes” transparent and scientifically rigorous.
The description of pigment analysis (Section 2.4) lacks essential detail on the equipment used. Spectrophotometers (model, company, country) used for the measurements should be added.
Data Analysis (Section 2.14) is not sufficiently clear. The authors should explain:
Whether assumptions of normality and homogeneity of variance were verified before applying the Tukey-Kramer HSD test?
Why the number of replicates is not homogeneous (n = 4 to 9)?
RESULTS
Results should be limited to the data generated in the present study, while explanations, references, and implications belong in the Discussion.
Reorganization is highly recommended: concise reporting of findings and based on significant statistical support only, so that should be written in Results elegantly and concisely. With interpretation moved to the Discussion, would improve clarity, rigor, and readability.
Keep this subsection strictly to the data, please.
It would very valuable as well to add a Figure with a layout of different photographs showing the experiments and the best results after 21 days and 30 days of harvesting.
3.1. Fresh Biomass Production
This subsection begins with references to earlier studies, which do not belong in the Results.
3.2. Plant Shoot Diameter
The phrase “Shoot diameter is an indicator of product quality” is ambiguous. This comment belongs in the Discussion and references supporting that statement should be added.
3.3. Total Chlorophyll and Carotenoid Contents
This subsection begins with references to earlier studies, which do not belong in the Results.
3.6. Total Soluble Sugar and Electroconductivity
This subsection begins with references to earlier studies, which do not belong in the Results.
3.7. Anthocyanin Content
This subsection begins with references to earlier studies, which do not belong in the Results.
3.8. Total Flavonoid Content
This subsection begins with references to earlier studies, which do not belong in the Results.
3.9. Total Polyphenol Content
This subsection begins with references to earlier studies, which do not belong in the Results.
3.10. Radical Scavenging Activities (DPPH)
This subsection begins with references to earlier studies, which do not belong in the Results.
Numbering gap: 3.11
There is a missing subsection number (3.11). Please, check.
3.12. Malondialdehyde (MDA) Content
This subsection begins with references to earlier studies, which do not belong in the Results.
DISCUSSION
The word Flavonoids should not be written with uppercase letters in the sentence “indicating a role of Flavonoids…
The mention of shoot diameter in the Discussion it restates the results. I think as I mentioned before that the quality of taking measuremnets of shoots should be justify. If that is not possible, it could be reconsidered whether shoot diameter adds value to the study or whether it should be eliminated. There are a lot of graphs and sometimes is difficult to follow which are the results and parts of the discussion with greater importance…
TAXONOMIC CONSIDERATIONS
Accoding to new papers on taxonomy, the names used in the manuscript does not follow the most recent systematic framework of the Salicornioideae subfamlily. According to Piirainen et al. (2017) considered that Sarcocornia populations should be treated under Salicornia (perennial Salicornia, they mention subgenus if the authors would like to complete the information but that’s not that important for this paper. However, use a correct name is crucial because names should reflect the evolutionary history of taxa more accurately). This nomenclatural and systematic update should be applied consistently throughout the text. Salicornia fruticosa is the most corrected name to reflect more accurately the evolution of these lineages.
Moreover, regarding the taxon referred to as Arthrocnemum macrostachyum, the identity of the Israeli material requires clarification. Based on biogeographic distribution, it is highly likely that these populations analyzed in the authors work correspond to Arthrocaulon meridionale. Ramírez et al. (2022) justify that A. macrostachyum is a tetraploid restricted to Portugal, Spain, France, and northern Italy, while A. meridionale is diploid and distributed across more arid southern regions, including North Africa, Sicily, Sardinia, Malta, Turkey, and the Persian Gulf. By this criterion, Israeli populations are most likely A. meridionale. Today, regarding to the genus level, the correct generic placement is Arthrocaulon, not Arthrocnemum. It would be valuable if the authors could refer to any available cytological-chromosome number data from Israel, which would provide direct support for this interpretation. In the absence of such data, comparisons of micromorphological characters, such as seed size (length and width or 10-20 black seeds), may also help distinguish between the two taxa. Otherwise, the authors should acknowledge that although the species has been traditionally cited as A. macrostachyum in Israel, current evidence strongly suggests that it is better referred to as A. meridionale.
References mentioned about are:
Piirainen M., Liebisch O., Kadereit G. 2017. Phylogeny, biogeography, systematics and taxonomy of Salicornioideae (Amaranthaceae/Chenopodiaceae) – a cosmopolitan, highly specialized hygrohalophyte lineage dating back to the Oligocene. Taxon 66(1): 109–132.
Ramírez E., Sánchez-Gavilán I., Rufo L., Sánchez-Mata D., de la Fuente V. 2022. Morphology, anatomy and phylogeny of the two sister halophytic genera Microcnemum and Arthrocnemum (Salicornioideae/Amaranthaceae). Plant Biosyst. 156: 1422–1437.
Overall, this manuscript addresses a very relevant topic. However, major revisions are required in terms of nomenclature (taxonomy), clarity of methods and an explanatory table, structure of the Results, and in the Discussion. If these points are carefully taken into consideration, the study might be a valuable contribution to the field. Results and discussion should be more concise, and it would be very helpful to think how to structure each paragraph and phrase and order to make it clearer for the readers. I would spend time on that task because the data is important, and everything should be state with direct writing.
Author Response
Response to the Reviewers' Comments
We thank the Reviewers for their comments and suggestions. We have responded to them all and feel that the revisions significantly improve the manuscript.
Reviewer: 2
Introduction - Part One
Comment-1: Species names should be written in full at first mention (Sarcocornia fruticosa, Arthrocnemum macrostachyum) and always italicized. Acronyms such as “AM” should be avoided in the text. If abbreviations are needed after the first mention, the correct form is A. macrostachyum.
Response: Done accordingly. As for Arthrocnemum macrostachyum (Moric.) K.Koch, is first published in Hort. Dendrol.: 96 (1853). This name is a synonym of Arthrocaulon macrostachyum. The current name in POWO is Arthrocaulon macrostachyum (Moric.) Piirainen & G.Kadereit. First published in Taxon 66: 123 (2017). Please see Arthrocaulon macrostachyum in eHALOPH (https://ehaloph.uc.pt/).
The abbreviation AM is provided following the first mention of the Arthrocaulon macrostachyum. Where the plant is referred to generally, A. macrostachyum is used. In the context of the experiments, AM is used.
Comment-2: The use of the term ecotype is unclear. If referring to distinct populations or accessions, this should be explained explicitly.
Response: The term ecotype refers to the different plant types studied to emphasize that they were collected from geographically separate sites (see Table 1).
Material and Methods - Part Two
Comment-3: The use of Sarcocornia fruticosa VM, which has been used before, Ventura et al., 2011a, is not well-explained. The authors should explain what “VM” refers to (population, accession, or locality) and provide precise information on the source of plant material. Without this clarification, the description is incomplete.
Response: Sarcocornia fruticosa VM was collected in Israel from the Ramat HaNegev district (Ventura et al., 2011). VM is currently being cultivated in Israel and exported to European markets. The plant material was collected from the Israeli Ramat Negev area, as referenced in Table 1.
Comment-4: The description of Sarcocornia fruticosa “ecotypes” and A. macrostachyum seeds is confusing. The information should be reorganized more clearly, ideally in a table. Do the authors have problems getting high germination percentages? Some authors refer to Salicornia (including former Sarcocornia) and Arthrocaulon (formerly Arthrocnemum), the necessity of seed priming before germination.
Response: Please see the requested description in Table 1. Significantly, there were no problems or limitations in seed germination capacity and quality in any of the ecotypes.
Comment-5: The term ecotype should be defined explicitly. Does it refer to morphological forms (prostrate versus shrubby growth) or to populations from distinct localities? Clarification is needed to avoid ambiguity.
Response: In this study, the term ecotype refers to the populations from distinct localities. All ecotypes showed a shrubby, upright growth habit described in Table 1.
A suggested table should include at least:
- Species (in italics).
- Ecotype designation (Ecotype 1, Ecotype 2, etc.).
- Locality with precise geographic coordinates.
- Date of collection.
- Collectors or source reference.
- Ecological/morphological description (e.g., coastal sandy habitat, saline marsh, prostrate vs. shrubby growth form, tidal influence vs. no tidal flooding, low, medium or high marsh, inland).
Table 1. Ecotypes designation, collection site, habitat, date of collection, and collectors.
|
|
· Species
|
· Ecotype designation |
Map coordinates of sampling sites |
· Date of collection
|
· Collectors or source reference.
|
· Habitat |
|
1 |
Sarcocornia fruticosa |
VM |
31º N |
2011 |
Ventura, et al., 2011 |
Inland salt pan, Negev area |
|
2 |
Sarcocornia fruticosa |
Shikmona (Shik) |
32.8261,34.95768 |
10-11-2020 |
Sagi and Shpigel laboratories |
Coastal, tidal area |
|
3 |
Sarcocornia fruticosa |
Megadim (Meg) |
32.73940, 34.95067 |
10-11-2020 |
Sagi and Shpigel laboratories |
Coastal, supratidal area, no tidal flooding |
|
4 |
Sarcocornia fruticosa |
Naaman (Naa) |
32.91284, 35.08551 |
10-11-2020 |
Sagi and Shpigel laboratories |
Coastal, tidal area |
|
5 |
Sarcocornia fruticosa |
Ruhama (Ruh) |
32.71746, 34.94855 |
10-11-2020 |
Sagi and Shpigel laboratories |
Coastal, tidal area |
|
6 |
A. macrostachyum |
A.macrostachyum (AM) |
30.96463, 35.37196 |
06-08-2020 |
Sagi and Shpigel laboratories |
Dead Sea shore |
Comment-6: This reorganization would make the meaning of “ecotypes” transparent and scientifically rigorous.
Response: The term ecotypes refers to the plants collected from different areas.
Comment-7: The description of pigment analysis (Section 2.4) lacks essential detail on the equipment used. Spectrophotometers (model, company, country) used for the measurements should be added.
Response: Now, in the methods, the type of spectrophotometers (EPOCH, Agilent (BioTek), USA) is written.
Comment-8: Data Analysis (Section 2.14) is not sufficiently clear. The authors should explain:
Response: The effect of 21- and 30-day harvesting intervals in greenhouse conditions, with 50 mM and 150 mM salinity treatments on biomass production and nutritional value. Representative data (of two independent experiments) are shown. Significant differences between treatments were determined using the Tukey Kramer HSD test at a 5% significance level (JMP8 (SAS, Cary, NC, USA)), n=3 to 9, depending on analysis assay type.
Comment-9: Whether assumptions of normality and homogeneity of variance were verified before applying the Tukey-Kramer HSD test?
Response: All assay data met normality assumptions without transformation, showed no outliers, and were consistent across replicates; therefore, all observations were retained for analysis.
Comment-10: Why the number of replicates is not homogeneous (n = 3 to 9)?
Response: The number of replicates (n = 3–9) varied depending on the specific analysis assay. Now it is written: "Significant differences between treatments were determined using the Tukey Kramer HSD test at a 5% significance level (JMP8 (SAS, Cary, NC, USA)), n=3 to 9, depending on analysis assay type and the normal distribution.".
Results - part three
Comment-11: Results should be limited to the data generated in the present study, while explanations, references, and implications belong in the Discussion.
Reorganization is highly recommended: concise reporting of findings, based on significant statistical support only, so that should be written in Results elegantly and concisely. With interpretation moved to the Discussion, would improve clarity, rigor, and readability.
Response: We thank the reviewer for the comment. With a supported reference, we believe it is essential to explain to readers, not experts in the field, why the action to achieve the targeted result is performed and its importance to the study. This was explained shortly in the current version.
Comment-12: It would very valuable as well to add a Figure with a layout of different photographs showing the experiments and the best results after 21 days and 30 days of harvesting.
Response: We added a figure that indicates plant growth both before and after harvesting and at the two harvesting intervals of 21 and 30 days under two salinity levels (50 and 150 mM).
Figure 2. The appearance of five S. fruticosa ecotypes (VM, Shikmona, Megadim, Naaman, and Ruhama) and Arthrocnemum macrostachyum before (left side) and after (right side) the final harvest (210 days after the technical harvest). Each replica of either treatment was randomly allocated in the greenhouse area. Plants were exposed to one of the two salinity levels (50 or 150 mM NaCl) with harvesting intervals of 21 or 30 days.
Comment-13: Numbering gap: 3.11
There is a missing subsection number (3.11). Please, check.
3.12. Malondialdehyde (MDA) Content
Response: The Malondialdehyde (MDA) content section was mistakenly numbered 3.12 instead of 3.11.
Discussion - Part Four
Comment-14: The word Flavonoids should not be written with uppercase letters in the sentence “indicating a role of Flavonoids…
Response: Flavonoids has been changed to flavonoids
Comment-15: The mention of shoot diameter in the Discussion it restates the results. I think, as I mentioned before, that the quality of taking measurements of shoots should be justified. If that is not possible, it could be reconsidered whether shoot diameter adds value to the study or whether it should be eliminated. There are a lot of graphs and sometimes is difficult to follow which are the results and parts of the discussion with greater importance…
Response:
The title of the results section 3.2 was modified to: "Successive harvest intervals and salinity affect shoot diameter" and the first sentence describes the reason for the shoot diameter detection: "Shoot diameter is an indicator of product quality". Additionally, a new sentence was added to the result section:" The new ecotypes, Megadim (Meg), Naaman (Naa), and Ruhama (Ruh), exhibited significantly greater shoot diameters than the currently cultivated VM plants across both salinity levels and harvest regimes, except for higher salinity under 21-day harvesting, while showing values comparable to the Shikmona (Shik) ecotype." Further justifying the reason for the detection of the shoot diameter.
In the discussion part 4.1. titled Growth responses, the following sentence was modified (in red):" Similarly, harvesting every 30 days produced greater shoot diameter than harvesting every 21 days, and the higher salinity levels also enhanced shoot diameter compared to the lower salinity level (Figure 2), supporting both yield and quality improvement, as thicker tissues allow greater water content, ions, and assimilate storage to support sustained productivity across harvests [37].".
The discussion part 4.1. was ended with the following two new sentences (in red): "Moderate salinity levels improve osmotic adjustment and ion compartmentalization, which support metabolic activity and plant growth, but excessive salinity causes oxidative stress, ion toxicity, and reduced nutrient uptake [39] [39,43]. In support of these notions, the accumulated yield (FW) exhibited high positive correlations with EC, TSS, and shoot diameter [Table 2 [44,45,46]].", further indicating that shoot diameter adds value to the study
TAXONOMIC CONSIDERATIONS
Comment-16: According to new papers on taxonomy, the names used in the manuscript does not follow the most recent systematic framework of the Salicornioideae subfamily. According to Piirainen et al. (2017) considered that Sarcocornia populations should be treated under Salicornia (perennial Salicornia, they mention subgenus if the authors would like to complete the information but that’s not that important for this paper. However, use a correct name is crucial because names should reflect the evolutionary history of taxa more accurately). This nomenclatural and systematic update should be applied consistently throughout the text. Salicornia fruticosa is the most corrected name to reflect more accurately the evolution of these lineages.
Moreover, regarding the taxon referred to as Arthrocnemum macrostachyum, the identity of the Israeli material requires clarification. Based on biogeographic distribution, it is highly likely that these populations analyzed in the authors work correspond to Arthrocaulon meridionale. Ramírez et al. (2022) justify that A. macrostachyum is a tetraploid restricted to Portugal, Spain, France, and northern Italy, while A. meridionale is diploid and distributed across more arid southern regions, including North Africa, Sicily, Sardinia, Malta, Turkey, and the Persian Gulf. By this criterion, Israeli populations are most likely A. meridionale. Today, regarding to the genus level, the correct generic placement is Arthrocaulon, not Arthrocnemum. It would be valuable if the authors could refer to any available cytological-chromosome number data from Israel, which would provide direct support for this interpretation. In the absence of such data, comparisons of micromorphological characters, such as seed size (length and width or 10-20 black seeds), may also help distinguish between the two taxa. Otherwise, the authors should acknowledge that although the species has been traditionally cited as A. macrostachyum in Israel, current evidence strongly suggests that it is better referred to as A. meridionale.
Response: in section 2.1. Plant Material and Growth Conditions, the following is written: We used Sarcocornia fruticosa VM collected in Israel from the Ramat HaNegev district, which has been used before [12] and is currently being developed in Israel and exported to European markets. The plant material was collected from the Israeli coastal area as described in Table 1. Based on a partial sequence of the ETS (external transcribed spacer) ribosomal DNA marker, the Sarcocornia plants were approved as Sarcocornia fruticosa. Similarly, Arthrocaulon macrostachyum (Moric.) Piirainen & G.Kadereit (AM), earlier identified in Israel as Arthrocnemum macrostachyum (https://www.kkl.org.il/wild-flower/plants/289.aspx?ID=289), was also approved (See the attached sequences and the phylogenetic tree in Supplementary material taken in part from the final report of the bilateral project, Portugal/Israel, PT-IL/0003/2019).
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Article
Successives Harvesting Interval and Salinity Level Modulate Bio-mass Production and Nutritional Value in Sarcocornia fruticosa and Arthrocaulon macrostachyum Tesfaye Asmare Sisay 1, Jaykumar Patel 2, Kusum Khatri 2, Babita Choudhary 2, Dominic Standing 3,*, Zai Du Nja 1, Muki Shpigel 4, Luísa Margarida Batista Custódio 5, Ilya Gelfand 3,6 and Moshe Sagi 3,6,7,*
1 The Albert Katz International School for Desert Studies, the Jacob Blaustein Institutes for Desert Research, Ben-Gurion University of the Negev, Sede Boqer Campus, Beer Sheva 8499000, Israel; tesfayea@post.bgu.ac.il (T.A.S.); njazai@post.bgu.ac.il (Z.D.N.)
2 Jacob Blaustein Center for Scientific Cooperation, the Jacob Blaustein Institutes for Desert Research, Ben-Gurion University of the Negev, Sede Boqer Campus, Sede Boker 8499000, Israel; jmp28@aber.ac.uk (J.P.); kuk10@aber.ac.uk (K.K.); choudhar@post.bgu.ac.il (B.C.)
3 The Albert Katz Department of Dryland Biotechnologies, French Associates Institute for Agriculture and Biotechnology of Dryland, the Jacob Blaustein Institutes for Desert Research, Ben-Gurion University of the Negev, Sede Boqer Campus, Beer Sheva 8499000, Israel; igelfand@bgu.ac.il
4 Morris Kahn Marine Research Station, the Leon H. Charney School of Marine Sciences, University of Haifa, Haifa 3498838, Israel; mshpigel@univ.haifa.ac.il
5 Centre of Marine Sciences, University of Algarve, Campus de Gambelas, 8005-139 Faro, Portugal; lcustodio@ualg.pt 6 Ministry of Science and Technology, Netivot, Israel 7 Katif Research Center, Sedot Negev 8771002, Israel
* Correspondence: standing@bgu.ac.il (D.S.); gizi@bgu.ac.il (M.S.)
Abstract
Halophyte bio-saline agriculture can supplement conventional farm methods in salinized soils and salty water. The current study compares the yield and nutritional value of new Sarcocornia fruticosa ecotypes (Shikmona, Megadim, Naaman, and Ruhama) to those of the current ecotype (VM). Additionally, Arthrocaulon macrostachyum, phenotypically similar to Sarcocornia, was compared to Sarcocornia ecotypes, and the effects of the harvesting re-gime and irrigation water salinity on yield and nutritional value were studied. At both salinity levels (50 and 150 mM NaCl), 30-day harvesting intervals over a 210-day growth period increased plant yield compared to a 21-day regime. It also tended to improve elec-trical conductivity (EC) and total soluble sugars (TSS), lower malondialdehyde levels (a marker of toxic stress), and enhance radical inhibition activity in most ecotypes. Com-pared to VM, the Sarcocornia ecotypes Ruh and Naa, exhibited much higher biomass with similar radical inhibition activity but lower total protein content. Higher salinity im-proved fresh biomass, shoot diameter, relative water content, chlorophyll level, TSS, and EC and tended to increase anthocyanin and carotenoid levels. In contrast, lower salinity tended to increase total flavonoids, polyphenols, and radical inhibition activity. In the 30-day harvest regime, A. macrostachyum exhibited the highest and second-highest yields at high and low salinity, respectively; the highest shoot diameter, total flavonoids, and rad-ical inhibition activity; and one of the lowest malondialdehyde levels. The current study highlights the importance of optimizing harvest frequency and the advantages of employ-ing A. macrostachyum and the Sarcocornia ecotypes Ruhama, Naaman, and Megadim with a 30-day harvesting regime under higher-salinity conditions.
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Citation: Sisay, T.A.; Patel, J.; Khatri, K.; Choudhary, B.; Standing, D.; Nja, Z.D.; Shpigel, M.; Custódio, L.M.B.; Gelfand, I.; Sagi, M. Successive Harvesting Interval and Salinity Level Modulate Biomass Production and Nutritional Value in Sarcocornia fruticosa and Arthrocaulon macrostachyum. Agriculture 2025, 15, x. https://doi.org/10.3390/xxxxx
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