Co-Movement Among Electricity Consumption, Economic Growth and Financial Development in Portugal, Italy, Greece, and Spain: A Wavelet Analysis
Round 1
Reviewer 1 Report
Comments and Suggestions for AuthorsThe paper presents an analysis of FD and electrical consumptions in Italy, Greece, Portugal and Spain. The paper presents an interesting topic, nevertheless, methodology, data presentation and main findings should be better clarified in order to improve the paper. Authors could consider the following suggestions:
- authors should explicit which were the envisioned benefits of the proposed methodology. It is not clear why authors adopted this methodology apart from the lack of other examples in the literature. - data presentation should be improved, mentioning all unit of measurements in all graphs, tables and texts. If some data are percentage values, the basis values should be mentioned in the caption. - data presentation does not clearly show the used datasources. In particular, it is not clear if FD and EPC are both referred to domestic sector. In the reviewer's opinion, FD and EPC should be limited to the same sector. If EPC was referred to the overall National consumption, the influence of industrial customers could not be disregarded. - main findings about FD/EPC relationship could be better elaborated, improving the current presentation which currently reports limited correlations. - main findings about methodology are not reported neither emphasized. It is not clear why this methodology should be adopted in other countries or for other period. - on the one hand, many researchers recently claimed existing decoupling between CO2 and GDP in 1Europe, on the other hand, electrification of the domestic consumptions is a growing trend in Europe. These 2 aspects are not considered most likely because of lack of the most recent data. However, these trends should be referenced and discussed in the paper.Author Response
Response to Referees on “Co-movement among Electricity Consumption, Economic Growth and Financial Development in Portugal, Italy, Greece, and Spain: A Wavelet Analysis”, Energies (energies-3301577)
Dear Editor of Energies,
We would like to thank you for your answer on Thursday, 14th November 2024 in which you gave us the opportunity to revise and resubmit the paper entitled “Co-movement among Electricity Consumption, Economic Growth and Financial Development in Portugal, Italy, Greece, and Spain: A Wavelet Analysis” (energies-3301577).
First of all, we would like to thank the Editor for all his suggestions and advice, since these have helped us to improve the article. We have tried to answer these questions and incorporate any observations and suggestions made by reviewers. To easily track the changes, we highlighted in yellow the new integrations and corrections.
Point-by-point Reply
Reviewer #1:
The paper presents an analysis of FD and electrical consumptions in Italy, Greece, Portugal and Spain. The paper presents an interesting topic, nevertheless, methodology, data presentation and main findings should be better clarified in order to improve the paper. Authors could consider the following suggestions:
Reviewer’s Comment |
Author’s Response |
1. authors should explicit which were the envisioned benefits of the proposed methodology. It is not clear why authors adopted this methodology apart from the lack of other examples in the literature. |
The advantages of the WA are better clarified in Section 1. |
2. data presentation should be improved, mentioning all unit of measurements in all graphs, tables and texts. If some data are percentage values, the basis values should be mentioned in the caption. |
The original manuscript fully described each series, reporting definitions, units of measurement, acronyms, and sources. Mentioning all these elements in all graphs, tables, and texts is useless and redundant and also contradicts the journal’s editing guidelines. |
3. data presentation does not clearly show the used datasources. In particular, it is not clear if FD and EPC are both referred to domestic sector. In the reviewer's opinion, FD and EPC should be limited to the same sector. If EPC was referred to the overall National consumption, the influence of industrial customers could not be disregarded. |
As the reviewer certainly knows, WDI and FRED data refer to national data. Previous studies used the same kind of series. |
4. main findings about FD/EPC relationship could be better elaborated, improving the current presentation which currently reports limited correlations. |
The relationship between FD and EPC has been better elaborated in Section 4. |
5. main findings about methodology are not reported neither emphasized. It is not clear why this methodology should be adopted in other countries or for other period. |
The advantages of the WA are better clarified in Section 1. |
6. on the one hand, many researchers recently claimed existing decoupling between CO2 and GDP in Europe, on the other hand, electrification of the domestic consumptions is a growing trend in Europe. These 2 aspects are not considered most likely because of lack of the most recent data. However, these trends should be referenced and discussed in the paper. |
We appreciate the Reviewer #1’s comment regarding the recent trends in CO2-GDP decoupling and the electrification of domestic consumption in Europe. These are indeed important developments that add context to our study, even though the scope is limited to the dataset covering 1970–2014. To address this, a paragraph has been added in Section 5. |
Reviewer #2:
Reviewer’s Comment |
Author’s Response |
1. Many articles have already analysed the electricity consumption (EPC), economic growth and financial development (FD) of Portugal for 1970-2014. Is it worth repeating this data? Perhaps it is necessary to choose other countries for the study. |
While we acknowledge that Portugal has been studied previously, we believe our study provides significant value by employing a novel methodological approach and comparing Portugal with other PIGS countries (Italy, Greece, and Spain). By including Portugal alongside other PIGS countries, our study offers a comparative perspective that is scarce in the existing literature. This approach helps identify commonalities and differences within this regional group, shedding light on how shared economic and political challenges (e.g., financial crises, EU integration) influence the energy-finance-growth nexus across countries. Revisiting Portugal within this comparative framework allows us to derive policy recommendations not only for Portugal but also for similarly situated countries. The insights can guide policymakers in addressing contemporary challenges such as energy transition and financial stability. |
2. Wavelet analysis is a modern and promising method of data processing. What exactly do the authors of the article do with it? The article is not very specific. What tools were used? |
The advantages of the WA are better clarified in Section 1. |
3. The analysis of literature sources was done for the last 7 years, and the analysis by country for 1970-2014? How to combine this? |
Since this topic has been extensively examined in the literature, we decided to center the literature review on recent papers only. Instead, the dataset, as clarified in Section 3, has been built upon data availability. |
4. In Table 1, it would be advisable to show the values of the variables. |
A note has been added to Table 1. |
5. The article would have been more relevant if the study had been conducted during the COVID-19 pandemic and the conflict in Ukraine. Was there no analysis after 2019 at all? Was there no connection between electricity consumption (EPC), economic growth and financial development (FD)? |
As explained earlier, the empirical analysis is dictated by data availability. Moreover, the period between 2020 and 2024 has been revolutionized by the COVID-19 pandemic and Russia-Ukraine war, so the sample would have been highly biased. |
Once again, we would like to thank the Editor for the valuable and very constructive remarks, hoping that you will find them adequately incorporated in the revised version.
Sincerely Yours,
The Authors
Author Response File: Author Response.doc
Reviewer 2 Report
Comments and Suggestions for AuthorsMany articles have already analysed the electricity consumption (EPC), economic growth and financial development (FD) of Portugal for 1970-2014. Is it worth repeating this data? Perhaps it is necessary to choose other countries for the study.
Wavelet analysis is a modern and promising method of data processing. What exactly do the authors of the article do with it? The article is not very specific. What tools were used?
The analysis of literature sources was done for the last 7 years, and the analysis by country for 1970-2014?
How to combine this?
In Table 1, it would be advisable to show the values of the variables.
The article would have been more relevant if the study had been conducted during the COVID-19 pandemic and the conflict in Ukraine. Was there no analysis after 2019 at all? Was there no connection between electricity consumption (EPC), economic growth and financial development (FD)?
We need to reduce the percentage of plagiarism.
Comments on the Quality of English LanguageThe English could be improved to more clearly express the research
Author Response
Response to Referees on “Co-movement among Electricity Consumption, Economic Growth and Financial Development in Portugal, Italy, Greece, and Spain: A Wavelet Analysis”, Energies (energies-3301577)
Dear Editor of Energies,
We would like to thank you for your answer on Thursday, 14th November 2024 in which you gave us the opportunity to revise and resubmit the paper entitled “Co-movement among Electricity Consumption, Economic Growth and Financial Development in Portugal, Italy, Greece, and Spain: A Wavelet Analysis” (energies-3301577).
First of all, we would like to thank the Editor for all his suggestions and advice, since these have helped us to improve the article. We have tried to answer these questions and incorporate any observations and suggestions made by reviewers. To easily track the changes, we highlighted in yellow the new integrations and corrections.
Point-by-point Reply
Reviewer #1:
The paper presents an analysis of FD and electrical consumptions in Italy, Greece, Portugal and Spain. The paper presents an interesting topic, nevertheless, methodology, data presentation and main findings should be better clarified in order to improve the paper. Authors could consider the following suggestions:
Reviewer’s Comment |
Author’s Response |
1. authors should explicit which were the envisioned benefits of the proposed methodology. It is not clear why authors adopted this methodology apart from the lack of other examples in the literature. |
The advantages of the WA are better clarified in Section 1. |
2. data presentation should be improved, mentioning all unit of measurements in all graphs, tables and texts. If some data are percentage values, the basis values should be mentioned in the caption. |
The original manuscript fully described each series, reporting definitions, units of measurement, acronyms, and sources. Mentioning all these elements in all graphs, tables, and texts is useless and redundant and also contradicts the journal’s editing guidelines. |
3. data presentation does not clearly show the used datasources. In particular, it is not clear if FD and EPC are both referred to domestic sector. In the reviewer's opinion, FD and EPC should be limited to the same sector. If EPC was referred to the overall National consumption, the influence of industrial customers could not be disregarded. |
As the reviewer certainly knows, WDI and FRED data refer to national data. Previous studies used the same kind of series. |
4. main findings about FD/EPC relationship could be better elaborated, improving the current presentation which currently reports limited correlations. |
The relationship between FD and EPC has been better elaborated in Section 4. |
5. main findings about methodology are not reported neither emphasized. It is not clear why this methodology should be adopted in other countries or for other period. |
The advantages of the WA are better clarified in Section 1. |
6. on the one hand, many researchers recently claimed existing decoupling between CO2 and GDP in Europe, on the other hand, electrification of the domestic consumptions is a growing trend in Europe. These 2 aspects are not considered most likely because of lack of the most recent data. However, these trends should be referenced and discussed in the paper. |
We appreciate the Reviewer #1’s comment regarding the recent trends in CO2-GDP decoupling and the electrification of domestic consumption in Europe. These are indeed important developments that add context to our study, even though the scope is limited to the dataset covering 1970–2014. To address this, a paragraph has been added in Section 5. |
Reviewer #2:
Reviewer’s Comment |
Author’s Response |
1. Many articles have already analysed the electricity consumption (EPC), economic growth and financial development (FD) of Portugal for 1970-2014. Is it worth repeating this data? Perhaps it is necessary to choose other countries for the study. |
While we acknowledge that Portugal has been studied previously, we believe our study provides significant value by employing a novel methodological approach and comparing Portugal with other PIGS countries (Italy, Greece, and Spain). By including Portugal alongside other PIGS countries, our study offers a comparative perspective that is scarce in the existing literature. This approach helps identify commonalities and differences within this regional group, shedding light on how shared economic and political challenges (e.g., financial crises, EU integration) influence the energy-finance-growth nexus across countries. Revisiting Portugal within this comparative framework allows us to derive policy recommendations not only for Portugal but also for similarly situated countries. The insights can guide policymakers in addressing contemporary challenges such as energy transition and financial stability. |
2. Wavelet analysis is a modern and promising method of data processing. What exactly do the authors of the article do with it? The article is not very specific. What tools were used? |
The advantages of the WA are better clarified in Section 1. |
3. The analysis of literature sources was done for the last 7 years, and the analysis by country for 1970-2014? How to combine this? |
Since this topic has been extensively examined in the literature, we decided to center the literature review on recent papers only. Instead, the dataset, as clarified in Section 3, has been built upon data availability. |
4. In Table 1, it would be advisable to show the values of the variables. |
A note has been added to Table 1. |
5. The article would have been more relevant if the study had been conducted during the COVID-19 pandemic and the conflict in Ukraine. Was there no analysis after 2019 at all? Was there no connection between electricity consumption (EPC), economic growth and financial development (FD)? |
As explained earlier, the empirical analysis is dictated by data availability. Moreover, the period between 2020 and 2024 has been revolutionized by the COVID-19 pandemic and Russia-Ukraine war, so the sample would have been highly biased. |
Once again, we would like to thank the Editor for the valuable and very constructive remarks, hoping that you will find them adequately incorporated in the revised version.
Sincerely Yours,
The Authors
Author Response File: Author Response.doc
Round 2
Reviewer 1 Report
Comments and Suggestions for AuthorsThe authors did not address all reviewer comments even if some clarifications are provided.
I would suggest authors to include axis labels in all the paper.
Authors should clearly discuss the limitations of the study, if FD and EPC are not limited to domestic sector, this limitation should be clearly discussed. In the reviewer's opinion, FD and EPC should be limited to the same sector. If EPC was referred to the overall National consumption, the influence of industrial customers could not be disregarded. Data about sectorial consumptions are available and they should be included. A clear discussion about assumptions and limitations should be included.
Author Response
Response to Referees on “Co-movement among Electricity Consumption, Economic Growth and Financial Development in Portugal, Italy, Greece, and Spain: A Wavelet Analysis”, Energies (energies-3301577)
Dear Editor of Energies,
We would like to thank you for your answer on Friday, 29th November 2024 in which you gave us the opportunity to revise and resubmit the paper entitled “Co-movement among Electricity Consumption, Economic Growth and Financial Development in Portugal, Italy, Greece, and Spain: A Wavelet Analysis” (energies-3301577).
First of all, we would like to thank the Editor for all his suggestions and advice, since these have helped us to improve the article. We have tried to answer these questions and incorporate any observations and suggestions made by reviewers. To easily track the changes, we highlighted in yellow the integrations and corrections after the first review round, and in green those after the second review round.
Point-by-point Reply
Reviewer #1:
The authors did not address all reviewer comments even if some clarifications are provided.
I would suggest authors to include axis labels in all the paper.
Reviewer’s Comment |
Author’s Response |
1. Authors should clearly discuss the limitations of the study, if FD and EPC are not limited to domestic sector, this limitation should be clearly discussed. In the reviewer's opinion, FD and EPC should be limited to the same sector. If EPC was referred to the overall National consumption, the influence of industrial customers could not be disregarded. Data about sectorial consumptions are available and they should be included. A clear discussion about assumptions and limitations should be included. |
We thank the reviewer for raising this important point about the scope of financial development (FD) and electricity consumption (EPC) data and the need for a clear discussion of assumptions and limitations. We agree that sectoral alignment of FD and EPC data would offer deeper insights and improve the precision of our analysis.
In addition, please note that the Editor gave us only 3 days to resubmit the paper, so it was absolutely impossible to download the new series, conduct the new empirical analyses, and write a new discussion with (eventual) different policy implications. |
Reviewer #2:
Reviewer’s Comment |
Author’s Response |
1. Accept after minor revisions (corrections to minor methodological errors and text editing) |
A text editing has been performed. Some typos have been fixed. |
Once again, we would like to thank the Editor for the valuable and very constructive remarks, hoping that you will find them adequately incorporated in the revised version.
Sincerely Yours,
The Authors
Author Response File: Author Response.docx
Reviewer 2 Report
Comments and Suggestions for AuthorsAccept after minor revisions (corrections to minor methodological errors and text editing)
Author Response
Response to Referees on “Co-movement among Electricity Consumption, Economic Growth and Financial Development in Portugal, Italy, Greece, and Spain: A Wavelet Analysis”, Energies (energies-3301577)
Dear Editor of Energies,
We would like to thank you for your answer on Friday, 29th November 2024 in which you gave us the opportunity to revise and resubmit the paper entitled “Co-movement among Electricity Consumption, Economic Growth and Financial Development in Portugal, Italy, Greece, and Spain: A Wavelet Analysis” (energies-3301577).
First of all, we would like to thank the Editor for all his suggestions and advice, since these have helped us to improve the article. We have tried to answer these questions and incorporate any observations and suggestions made by reviewers. To easily track the changes, we highlighted in yellow the integrations and corrections after the first review round, and in green those after the second review round.
Point-by-point Reply
Reviewer #1:
The authors did not address all reviewer comments even if some clarifications are provided.
I would suggest authors to include axis labels in all the paper.
Reviewer’s Comment |
Author’s Response |
1. Authors should clearly discuss the limitations of the study, if FD and EPC are not limited to domestic sector, this limitation should be clearly discussed. In the reviewer's opinion, FD and EPC should be limited to the same sector. If EPC was referred to the overall National consumption, the influence of industrial customers could not be disregarded. Data about sectorial consumptions are available and they should be included. A clear discussion about assumptions and limitations should be included. |
We thank the reviewer for raising this important point about the scope of financial development (FD) and electricity consumption (EPC) data and the need for a clear discussion of assumptions and limitations. We agree that sectoral alignment of FD and EPC data would offer deeper insights and improve the precision of our analysis.
In addition, please note that the Editor gave us only 3 days to resubmit the paper, so it was absolutely impossible to download the new series, conduct the new empirical analyses, and write a new discussion with (eventual) different policy implications. |
Reviewer #2:
Reviewer’s Comment |
Author’s Response |
1. Accept after minor revisions (corrections to minor methodological errors and text editing) |
A text editing has been performed. Some typos have been fixed. |
Once again, we would like to thank the Editor for the valuable and very constructive remarks, hoping that you will find them adequately incorporated in the revised version.
Sincerely Yours,
The Authors
Round 3
Reviewer 1 Report
Comments and Suggestions for AuthorsThe authors carefully considered reviewer's suggestions.
The new version of the paper explicitly review research limitations.