Language Development for English-Medium Instruction: A Longitudinal Perspective on the Use of Cohesive Devices by Chinese English Majors in Argumentative Writing
Abstract
:1. Introduction
1.1. Classification of Cohesive Devices
1.2. The Computational Tools of Coh-Metrix and TAACO
1.3. Previous Studies in Relation to the Use of Cohesive Devices
2. Methodology
2.1. Setting and Participants
2.2. Materials
2.3. Cohesion Indices
2.4. Data Analysis
3. Results
3.1. The Use of Cohesive Devices by Chinese English Majors in Argumentative Writing
3.2. The Changes in the Use of Cohesive Devices by Chinese English Majors in Argumentative Writing over the Year
4. Discussion and Implications
5. Conclusions
Author Contributions
Funding
Institutional Review Board Statement
Informed Consent Statement
Data Availability Statement
Conflicts of Interest
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Initial Writing | Some people believe that the best way of learning about life is by listening to the advice of family and friends. Other people believe that the best way of learning about life is through personal experience. Which do you think is preferable? Use specific examples to support your preference. You should write at least 300 words. |
Middle Writing | Some people claim that staying in a place all one’s life is good for one’s growth, while others disagree with the view, and they prefer changing the place. Discuss both views and then give your own opinion. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. You should write at least 300 words. |
Final Finding | Some people think that universities should provide students with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful for an employee. Write an essay under the title “The Essence of University Education”. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience. Write about 300 words. |
Feature | Cohesion Types | Tool | Description | Example |
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Lexical overlap | Local and global | Coh-Metrix 3.0/TAACO 2.0.4 | Overlap between nouns, arguments, stems and content and function words | The sun was high in the sky. The day was sunny. |
Semantic similarity | Local, global and text | Coh-Metrix | LSA cosine values to measure similarity between text segments | The dog was hungry. So was the cat. |
Connectives | Local | Coh-Metrix/TAACO | A number of theoretical and rhetorical lists of connectives | First, it was dark outside. Second, that man was not trustworthy. |
Synonymy overlap | Local and global | TAACO | Overlap of synonyms across sentences and paragraphs | He kept a dog in his house. Every day he went home as early as possible. |
Lexical diversity | Text | Coh-Metrix | Word repetition across a text | The little kid chased after the little dog. |
Causal cohesion | Text | Coh-Metrix | Use of causal verbs and particles | He shouted because he was angry. |
Temporal cohesion | Text | Coh-Metrix | Repetition of tense and aspect | The boy had breakfast and went to school. |
Giveness | Text | TAACO | Ratio of pronouns to nouns; incidence of demonstratives | The man was satisfied he had that. |
Index | Type | Tool | M | SD |
---|---|---|---|---|
Noun overlap, adjacent sentences, binary, mean | local | Coh-Metrix | 0.28 | 0.13 |
Argument overlap, adjacent sentences, binary, mean | local | Coh-Metrix | 0.57 | 0.16 |
Stem overlap, adjacent sentences, binary, mean | local | Coh-Metrix | 0.35 | 0.15 |
Content word overlap, adjacent sentences, proportional, mean | local | Coh-Metrix | 0.09 | 0.03 |
LSA overlap, adjacent sentences, mean | local | Coh-Metrix | 0.12 | 0.04 |
All connectives incidence | local | Coh-Metrix | 118.03 | 17.29 |
Causal connectives incidence | local | Coh-Metrix | 32.98 | 11.03 |
Logical connectives incidence | local | Coh-Metrix | 48.43 | 10.76 |
Adversative and contrastive connectives incidence | local | Coh-Metrix | 17.37 | 11.97 |
Temporal connectives incidence | local | Coh-Metrix | 19.00 | 8.21 |
All_positive | local | TAACO | 0.08 | 0.01 |
All_negative | local | TAACO | 0.02 | 0.01 |
Syn_overlap_sent_noun (adjacent sentence overlap noun synonyms) | local | TAACO | 0.80 | 1.61 |
Syn_overlap_sent_verb (adjacent sentence overlap verb synonyms) | local | TAACO | 0.85 | 2.02 |
LSA overlap, adjacent paragraphs, mean | global | Coh-Metrix | 0.34 | 0.08 |
Adjacent_overlap_cw_para (adjacent paragraph overlap content lemmas) | global | TAACO | 0.16 | 0.06 |
Adjacent_overlap_fw_para (adjacent paragraph overlap function lemmas) | global | TAACO | 0.34 | 0.08 |
Adjacent_overlap_noun_para (adjacent paragraph overlap noun lemmas) | global | TAACO | 0.20 | 0.08 |
Adjacent_overlap_verb_para (adjacent paragraph overlap verb lemmas) | global | TAACO | 0.14 | 0.07 |
Adjacent_overlap_pronoun_para (adjacent paragraph overlap pronoun lemmas) | global | TAACO | 0.28 | 0.14 |
Syn_overlap_para_noun (adjacent paragraph overlap noun synonyms) | global | TAACO | 4.22 | 1.53 |
Syn_overlap_para_verb (adjacent paragraph overlap verb synonyms) | global | TAACO | 4.29 | 3.47 |
LSA given/new, sentences, mean | text | Coh-Metrix | 0.26 | 0.02 |
Lexical diversity, MTLD, all words | text | Coh-Metrix | 79.08 | 13.76 |
Ratio of causal particles to causal verbs | text | Coh-Metrix | 0.62 | 0.45 |
Temporal cohesion, tense and aspect repetition, mean | text | Coh-Metrix | 0.82 | 0.08 |
Pronoun density | text | TAACO | 0.05 | 0.14 |
Pronoun noun ratio | text | TAACO | 0.24 | 0.09 |
Repeated content lemmas | text | TAACO | 0.26 | 0.04 |
Repeated content and pronoun lemmas | text | TAACO | 0.30 | 0.04 |
Index | Initial | Middle | Final | F (2,60) | Result | |||
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M | SD | M | SD | M | SD | |||
Noun overlap, adjacent sentences, binary, mean | 0.28 | 0.13 | 0.30 | 0.13 | 0.35 | 0.17 | 2.01 | / |
Argument overlap, adjacent sentences, binary, mean | 0.57 | 0.16 | 0.50 | 0.15 | 0.51 | 0.15 | 2.66 | / |
Stem overlap, adjacent sentences, binary, mean | 0.35 | 0.15 | 0.39 | 0.14 | 0.43 | 0.16 | 2.04 | / |
Content word overlap, adjacent sentences, proportional, mean | 0.09 | 0.03 | 0.10 | 0.03 | 0.13 | 0.04 | 8.53 * | Final > Middle Final > Initial |
LSA overlap, adjacent sentences, mean | 0.12 | 0.04 | 0.17 | 0.05 | 0.20 | 0.05 | 27.92 * | Middle > Initial Final > Initial |
All connectives incidence | 118.03 | 17.29 | 117.21 | 14.12 | 125.90 | 18.07 | 1.90 | / |
Causal connectives incidence | 32.98 | 11.03 | 33.39 | 9.41 | 31.09 | 10.37 | 1.02 | / |
Logical connectives incidence | 48.43 | 10.76 | 50.47 | 11.41 | 53.31 | 11.64 | 1.64 | / |
Adversative and contrastive connectives incidence | 17.37 | 11.97 | 17.92 | 7.42 | 23.63 | 8.27 | 4.65 * | Final > Initial Final > Middle |
Temporal connectives incidence | 19.00 | 8.21 | 14.97 | 5.75 | 17.26 | 7.42 | 2.25 | / |
All_positive | 0.08 | 0.01 | 0.07 | 0.01 | 0.08 | 0.02 | 1.34 | / |
All_negative | 0.02 | 0.01 | 0.01 | 0.01 | 0.03 | 0.01 | 2.26 | / |
Syn_overlap_sent_noun (adjacent sentence overlap noun synonyms) | 0.80 | 1.61 | 0.61 | 0.39 | 0.70 | 0.33 | 0.34 | / |
Syn_overlap_sent_verb (adjacent sentence overlap verb synonyms) | 0.85 | 2.02 | 0.57 | 0.55 | 0.66 | 0.33 | 1.07 | / |
LSA overlap, adjacent paragraphs, mean | 0.34 | 0.08 | 0.35 | 0.10 | 0.48 | 0.10 | 23.97 * | Final > Middle Final > Initial |
Adjacent_overlap_cw_para (adjacent paragraph overlap content lemmas) | 0.16 | 0.06 | 0.19 | 0.05 | 0.20 | 0.04 | 6.07 * | Final > Initial Middle > Initial |
Adjacent_overlap_fw_para (adjacent paragraph overlap function lemmas) | 0.34 | 0.08 | 0.44 | 0.07 | 0.49 | 0.77 | 25.13 * | Middle > Initial Final > Middle Final > Initial |
Adjacent_overlap_noun_para (adjacent paragraph overlap noun lemmas) | 0.20 | 0.08 | 0.21 | 0.05 | 0.19 | 0.07 | 0.78 | / |
Adjacent_overlap_verb_para (adjacent paragraph overlap verb lemmas) | 0.14 | 0.07 | 0.20 | 0.07 | 0.21 | 0.07 | 11.84 * | Middle > Initial Final > Initial |
Adjacent_overlap_pronoun_para (adjacent paragraph overlap pronoun lemmas) | 0.28 | 0.14 | 0.45 | 0.16 | 0.48 | 0.16 | 15.55 * | Middle > Initial Final > Initial |
Syn_overlap_para_noun (adjacent paragraph overlap noun synonyms) | 4.22 | 1.53 | 4.29 | 2.42 | 5.94 | 2.62 | 6.62 * | Final > Middle Final > Initial |
Syn_overlap_para_verb (adjacent paragraph overlap verb synonyms) | 4.29 | 3.47 | 6.31 | 3.32 | 7.20 | 3.32 | 7.49 * | Middle > Initial Final > Initial |
LSA given/ new, sentences, mean | 0.26 | 0.02 | 0.30 | 0.03 | 0.32 | 0.03 | 48.22 * | Middle > Initial Final > Middle Final > Initial |
Lexical diversity, MTLD, all words | 79.08 | 13.76 | 82.75 | 16.56 | 84.29 | 17.71 | 1.42 | / |
Ratio of causal particles to causal verbs | 0.62 | 0.45 | 0.51 | 0.41 | 0.53 | 0.38 | 1.90 | / |
Temporal cohesion, tense and aspect repetition, mean | 0.82 | 0.08 | 0.82 | 0.06 | 0.83 | 0.07 | 0.08 | / |
Pronoun density | 0.05 | 0.01 | 0.05 | 0.02 | 0.05 | 0.01 | 0.93 | / |
Pronoun noun ratio | 0.24 | 0.09 | 0.24 | 0.08 | 0.20 | 0.07 | 2.03 | / |
Repeated content lemmas | 0.26 | 0.04 | 0.26 | 0.04 | 0.29 | 0.05 | 6.86 * | Final > Initial Final > Middle |
Repeated content and pronoun lemmas | 0.30 | 0.04 | 0.31 | 0.05 | 0.33 | 0.05 | 4.69 * | Final > Initial |
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Pu, L.; Heng, R.; Xu, B. Language Development for English-Medium Instruction: A Longitudinal Perspective on the Use of Cohesive Devices by Chinese English Majors in Argumentative Writing. Sustainability 2023, 15, 17. https://doi.org/10.3390/su15010017
Pu L, Heng R, Xu B. Language Development for English-Medium Instruction: A Longitudinal Perspective on the Use of Cohesive Devices by Chinese English Majors in Argumentative Writing. Sustainability. 2023; 15(1):17. https://doi.org/10.3390/su15010017
Chicago/Turabian StylePu, Liping, Renquan Heng, and Bingchao Xu. 2023. "Language Development for English-Medium Instruction: A Longitudinal Perspective on the Use of Cohesive Devices by Chinese English Majors in Argumentative Writing" Sustainability 15, no. 1: 17. https://doi.org/10.3390/su15010017
APA StylePu, L., Heng, R., & Xu, B. (2023). Language Development for English-Medium Instruction: A Longitudinal Perspective on the Use of Cohesive Devices by Chinese English Majors in Argumentative Writing. Sustainability, 15(1), 17. https://doi.org/10.3390/su15010017