Identifying Predictors for the Acquisition of Tolerance to Cow’s Milk Protein in Infants with Food Protein-Induced Allergic Proctocolitis (FPIAP): Multifactorial Analysis of Two Italian Cohorts
Round 1
Reviewer 1 Report
Comments and Suggestions for AuthorsThank you for the invitation to review the manuscript titled “ Predictors for the acquisition of tolerance to cow’s milk protein 2 in infants with food protein-induced allergic proctocolitis 3 (FPIAP): multifactorial analysis of two Italian cohorts” which was submitted to Nutrients as an article. Therein, the authors aimed to “ analyse clinical features and predictive factors for the acquisition of tolerance to cow’s milk (CM) in infants with FPIAP” (copied verbatim from the manuscript) in a cross-sectional study of 94 infants.
Major comments
- There are many figures, not all of which are strictly necessary.
- Subgroup analyses are often based on very small numbers. The authors are encouraged to critically consider the impact of such analyses on the interpretation, and the rigour of their analyses.
- To my mind, the most interesting analysis is that which is presented in Section 3.12: Predictors of late acquisition of CM tolerance. Focusing the manuscript on this section, and thus removing many of the subgroup analyses, would result in a more succinct and concise manuscript with a practical take away message for the reader.
Minor comments
- Abstract, Methods & Results: The mention of milk fortification is confusing, as fortification in the area of nutrition commonly refers to adding micronutrients to a food product, such as iodine fortification of flour. However, I don’t believe that this is what the authors meant. Please revise to a different descriptor.
- Abstract, Methods: Be specific about the type of bleeding.
- Abstract, Methods: Why was rotavirus vaccination analysed?
- Abstract: There is no mention of the age of the infants. Similarly, how pre-term is pre-term?
- Abstract: If the median age at tolerance was age 12 months, it must be mentioned at what age the infants were diagnosed, from which the interval between diagnosis and tolerance can be derived.
- Abstract, Results: The definition of late tolerance belongs in the Methods. The number of infants who were in this group needs to be reported.
- Abstract, Results: Add the 95%CI for the OR. It is insufficient to simply report p-values, particularly with a relatively small sample size. The same comment applies to the Results section in the main text.
- Methods, Line 128: The term “failure to thrive” is falling out of favour. Please revise to “growth faltering.”
- Results, Line 153-154: Please provide some description about the demographic differences between the infants from Varese and Milan. Similarly, were practices standardized between the two sites?
- Results, Line 160, and Figure 3: Here, the authors refer to biological sex, not gender. Infants and children under age 3 years have not yet formed a gender identity.
- Results, Line 163: Revise the abbreviation for atopic dermatitis from DA to AD.
- Figure 2a: The is no x-axis title.
- Results, Lines 207-8: While there may indeed be no association (not impact; this analysis is not possible in a cross-sectional study) between SGA and CM tolerance, the authors have not considered that this null finding is possibly (and indeed, probably) due to the fact that there were very few cases (n=6) of SGA.
- Tables: Minor formatting issues, such as lack of alignment of columns.
- Discussion, Lines 324-5: As the authors presented a cross-sectional study, it is not correct to suggest that they “investigated predictive factors of tolerance”
- The manuscript contains many grammatical and linguistic errors. While none of these errors impede comprehension, they are nonetheless distracting and must be corrected. Similarly, the Methods section alternates between past and present tense. Given that this study is completed, this section should be written in the past tense.
Author Response
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We sincerely thank the Reviewer for the thorough and constructive evaluation of our manuscript. All comments have been addressed, and the corresponding revisions are detailed in the point-by-point responses below.
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2. Questions for General Evaluation |
Reviewer’s Evaluation |
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Does the introduction provide sufficient background and include all relevant references? |
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We have revised the Introduction to improve clarity and strengthen the background, adding relevant references where appropriate.
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Is the research design appropriate? |
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We acknowledge the reviewer’s indication that the research design could be refined. We have clarified the rationale of the cross-sectional design and adjusted the wording throughout the manuscript to better reflect its descriptive nature.
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Are the methods adequately described? |
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We appreciate this comment and have substantially revised the Methods section to improve clarity and consistency of terminology.
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Are the results clearly presented? |
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We thank the Reviewer for this observation. The Results section has been reorganized and clarified, with improved descriptions, consistent terminology, and removal of analyses not adequately powered.
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Are the conclusions supported by the results? |
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We agree with the reviewer’s assessment. The Conclusions have been revised to ensure that they are supported by the results and to clarify the descriptive and exploratory scope of the findings.
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Are all figures and tables clear and well-presented?
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We thank the Reviewer for this feedback. Figures and tables have been revised for clarity, alignment, and overall presentation quality.
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3. Point-by-point response to Comments and Suggestions for Authors
Major comments
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Comments 1: There are many figures, not all of which are strictly necessary.
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Response 1: We thank the Reviewer for this helpful observation. In the revised manuscript, we have critically reviewed all figures and removed those that were redundant or added limited value to the main message. Specifically, Figures 2a, 3, 7a, 7b, 10, 11 have been removed in order to ensure greater readability. We believe this change leads to a more focused presentation of our findings.
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Comments 2: Subgroup analyses are often based on very small numbers. The authors are encouraged to critically consider the impact of such analyses on the interpretation, and the rigour of their analyses.
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Response 2: We appreciate the Reviewer’s concern regarding the limited sample size in some subgroup analyses. We have carefully revised the manuscript to address this issue. All subgroup analyses now report sample sizes, and their limitations are acknowledged in the Discussion section. In addition, we have removed SGA subgroup analysis due to the particularly small sample size that did not contribute meaningfully to the interpretation of the results. We agree that this improves the rigour of our study.
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Reviewer 2 Report
Comments and Suggestions for AuthorsThis is a study focused on the risk factors for allergic proctocolitis and most interesting on its duration. One of them was found to be the bleeding duration before starting diet. The rest of them were interconnected, all related to atopy (family history of atopy, concomitant atopic dermatitis, bleeding duration and IgE sensitization).
I would suggest to extent the part of the introduction on the elimination diet, since it is not clear at this point that maternal diet is included in this practice (it is reported much later in the results).
I would also like to have a clear explanation on the examination of Rotavirus vaccination as a risk factor for FPIAP. It is not reported clear why this specific vaccine was taken under consideration.
I think that replying to these minor notes can improve the article. I would also avoid the tiny paragraphs in the introduction and omit the graphics that present no significant difference.
Author Response
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1. Response to Reviewer |
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We thank the Reviewer for the careful evaluation of our manuscript and the constructive comments, which have helped us improve the overall quality of the work. Below we provide a point-by-point response.
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2. Questions for General Evaluation |
Reviewer’s Evaluation |
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Does the introduction provide sufficient background and include all relevant references? |
Yes |
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Is the research design appropriate? |
Yes |
Thanks |
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Are the methods adequately described? |
Yes |
Thanks |
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Are the results clearly presented? |
Yes |
Thanks
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Are the conclusions supported by the results? |
Yes |
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Are all figures and tables clear and well-presented?
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Yes |
Thanks
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3. Point-by-point response to Comments and Suggestions for Authors
Comments 1: I would suggest to extent the part of the introduction on the elimination diet, since it is not clear at this point that maternal diet is included in this practice (it is reported much later in the results)
Response 1: We thank the Reviewer for this relevant observation. We have now expanded the section of the Introduction dedicated to the elimination diet, specifying from the outset that the dietary intervention includes maternal elimination diet in breastfed infants. This clarification ensures consistency with the details later presented in the Results.
Comments 2: I would also like to have a clear explanation on the examination of Rotavirus vaccination as a risk factor for FPIAP. It is not reported clear why this specific vaccine was taken under consideration.
Response 2: We thank the reviewer for this question. We decided to include Rotavirus vaccination as a variable because some parents reported that rectal bleeding appeared within a few days after the administration of the rotavirus vaccine. Based on these observations, we aimed to explore whether a possible correlation could exist, even indirectly, considering that a probable immunological or inflammatory mechanism may theoretically explain this association. Although our study was not designed to evaluate pathophysiological correlations, we considered it important to assess this association descriptively. This clarification has been incorporated into the Methods section. Should any signal have emerged, it would have required confirmation in future studies with the aim of verifying underlying immune or inflammatory pathways or other mechanism.
Comments 3: I would also avoid the tiny paragraphs in the introduction and omit the graphics that present no significant difference.
Response 3: We thank the Reviewer for these stylistic suggestions. The short paragraphs in the Introduction have been merged to guarantee a more fluent structure. The figures showing non-significant differences or non-relevant data (2a, 3, 7a, 7b, 10, 11) have been removed, as suggested, to maintain focus on the most statistically significant results
We thank the Reviewer once again for the constructive insights, which have substantially improved the clarity and coherence of our manuscript. |
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Reviewer 3 Report
Comments and Suggestions for AuthorsThis is an interesting observational study looking at factors that may relate to differential acquisition of tolerance to non-IgE mediated CM allergy related to intestinal immune mechanisms. I think the authors might give some suggestions that could help parents and doctors of patients with bloody diarrhea probably caused by immune factors of allergy, consider what and how to measure the patient's progress and likely tolerance acquisition. And consider possible causes of intolerance.
Author Response
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1. Response to Reviewer
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We thank the Reviewer for the positive overall assessment of our observational study and for the constructive suggestions.
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2. Questions for General Evaluation |
Reviewer’s Evaluation |
Response and Revisions |
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Does the introduction provide sufficient background and include all relevant references? |
Yes |
Thanks
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Is the research design appropriate? |
Yes |
Thanks |
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Are the methods adequately described? |
Can be improved |
The Methods section has been refined to improve overall readability |
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Are the results clearly presented? |
Can be improved |
The Results section has been revised to present the main findings in a clearer way, highlighting the factors most relevant to clinical interpretation |
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Are the conclusions supported by the results? |
Yes |
Thanks |
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Are all figures and tables clear and well-presented?
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Yes |
Thanks
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3. Point-by-point response to Comments and Suggestions for Authors
Comments 1: I think the authors might give some suggestions that could help parents and doctors of patients with bloody diarrhea probably caused by immune factors of allergy, consider what and how to measure the patient's progress and likely tolerance acquisition. And consider possible causes of intolerance.
Response 1: According to Reviewer’s recommendation, we have expanded the Discussion to include practical considerations that may support clinicians and parents in in the clinical approach and follow-up of infants with FPIAP. Specifically, we have incorporated a concise overview of relevant factors that should be monitored over time, as they may potentially influence the timing of CM tolerance acquisition (e.g., bleeding duration before elimination diet, recurrent infections, atopic manifestations, growth parameters).
Once again, we sincerely thank the Reviewer for thoughtful comments that have helped us to translate our findings into useful tools for real-world clinical management of FPIAP.
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Round 2
Reviewer 1 Report
Comments and Suggestions for AuthorsThank you for the invitation to re-review this manuscript. While much improved, some issues remain.
Section 2.2 Data collection
Despite the name of this section, the text does not describe data collection. Rather, this text details the operationalisation of various variables used by the authors.
Figure 1
This figure is difficult to read at 100% magnification.
Table 2.
This table tells us that there were notable differences between the two cohorts: sex distribution, prematurity, antibiotic treatment in the first 7 days of life, micronutrient fortification, breastfeeding and more. Yet the authors did not account for these differences. Please repeat the analyses performed, but for each group independently. Numbers will likely be small, and 95%CI wide. But, such analyses will also provide insight into the directionality of the odds ratios.
Table 4.
Many of the 95%CI are very wide. While the results are statistically significant, they are not terribly meaningful.
Author Response
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Response to Reviewer |
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We sincerely thank the reviewer for the constructive comments, which have allowed us to improve the clarity and rigor of the manuscript. We address each point below.
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2. Questions for General Evaluation |
Reviewer’s Evaluation |
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Does the introduction provide sufficient background and include all relevant references? |
Can be improved |
We have revised the Introduction to improve clarity and strengthen the background, adding relevant references where appropriate.
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Is the research design appropriate? |
Can be improved |
We acknowledge the Reviewer’s indication that the research design could be refined. We have clarified the rationale of the cross-sectional design and adjusted the wording throughout the manuscript to better reflect its descriptive nature.
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Are the methods adequately described? |
Must be improved |
We appreciate this comment and have substantially revised the Methods section to improve clarity and consistency of terminology.
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Are the results clearly presented? |
Must be improved |
We thank the Reviewer for this observation. The Results section has been reorganized and clarified, with improved descriptions, consistent terminology, and removal of analyses not adequately powered.
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Are the conclusions supported by the results? |
Must be improved
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We agree with the Reviewer’s assessment. The Conclusions have been revised to ensure that they are supported by the results and to clarify the descriptive and exploratory scope of the findings.
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Are all figures and tables clear and well-presented?
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Can be improved |
We thank the Reviewer for this feedback. Figures and tables have been revised for clarity, alignment, and overall presentation quality.
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3. Point-by-point response to Comments and Suggestions for Authors
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Comments 1: Section 2.2 Data collection.
Despite the name of this section, the text does not describe data collection. Rather, this text details the operationalisation of various variables used by the authors..
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Response 1: We thank the Reviewer for this observation. To better reflect the content of the section, the title has been revised from “Data Collection” to “Variable Specification and Measurement”. This section now clearly describes the operationalisation of all variables included in the analyses, providing readers with a precise understanding of how each variable was defined and measured.
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Comments 2: Figure 1 This figure is difficult to read at 100% magnification.
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Response 2: We appreciate the Reviewer’s comment regarding Figure 1. The figure has been reformatted to improve readability at 100% magnification while preserving the original layout and content. These changes ensure that the figure is fully accessible and interpretable without altering the presented results.
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