Precision Nomothetic Medicine in Depression Research: A New Depression Model, and New Endophenotype Classes and Pathway Phenotypes, and A Digital Self
Dennis Adjepong
Round 1
Reviewer 1 Report
The Conclusion must be 2 paragraphs. State the benefits of the article, the advantages, disadvantages as well. State the limitations if any.
Author Response
The Conclusion must be 2 paragraphs. State the benefits of the article, the advantages, disadvantages as well. State the limitations if any.
@ANSWER: the conclusion is now 2 paragraphs and describes the advantages (lines 6-10) as well as limitations (see last two lines of the Conclusions).
Reviewer 2 Report
This is an opinion paper about the interesting topic of precision psychiatry. It is generally well structured, and the data are described in a pretty analytical and comprehensible manner. Despite that, there are several minor language and style issues that should be improved before publication.
For example, in page 9, “gadolunium” and “tumours” should be replaced by “gadolinium” and “tumors” respectively.
In page 12, “selfs” should be replaced by “selves”.
In page 14, “considered an intruders” should be replaced by “considered as intruders”.
In page 15, “eables” should be replaced by “enables”.
In page 24, “machnine” and “ans” should be replaced by “machine” and “and” respectively.
In page 26, “precison” and “colums” should be replaced by “precision” and “columns” respectively.
In page 36, “reoccurence” should be replaced by “reoccurrence”.
The conclusions section might be rephrased in order to be a bit more detailed.
Author Response
@ANSWER: All type’Os have been corrected (the above and other as well).
The conclusion section now comprises two paragraphs and contains more details including limitations (see referee 1).
