Community Environmental Leadership and Sustainability: Building Knowledge from the Local Level
Round 1
Reviewer 1 Report
Comments and Suggestions for AuthorsThe research focus is an insightful one that stretched across both theoretical and practical perspective. The manuscripts is a good attempt that investigates the social sciences side of environmental/sustainability actions and behaviours, drawing an important focus on leadership.
The first part of the manuscripts provided an appropriate conceptual context to the case described; however, the conceptual understanding did not go beyond the description of the related theories to forming a framework/construct that relates the types and processes of leadership development and the role and importance of local knowledge under the scope of environmental or sustainability management. As a result, the discussion on the case study findings made little reference to the conceptual context as a whole. While the discussion described various reflections and implications of the interview and survey results, the discussion could not provide an overarching/holistic articulation of the conceptual context as a whole.
This gap has made the manuscripts a good documentation of an interesting case instead of a scholarly debates with strong academic rigor.
Author Response
Dear reviewer,
Thank you for your valuable review. We have attached the file with the responses to each of your comments.
Best regards.
Author Response File: Author Response.pdf
Reviewer 2 Report
Comments and Suggestions for AuthorsThe manuscript focused on documenting an experience of training community environmental leaders in the context of sustainable development in localities surrounding the Chautengo Lagoon, Guerrero, Mexico. The following points need to be addressed before acceptance for publication:
- Please explain the order of reviewed studies in Table 1.
- Please discuss whether there is any statistical methods used in this study.
- Please discuss the novelty of the research in this study, especially with a focus on elaborating why no similar studies have been conducted in history.
- When presenting numerical results, please consider adding associated uncertainty measurements of the point estimation (such as confidence intervals and standard errors) and explain how the uncertainty measurements are obtained and validating any potential associated assumptions for them.
Author Response
Dear reviewer,
Thank you for your valuable review. We have attached the file with the responses to each of your comments.
Best regards.
Author Response File: Author Response.pdf
Reviewer 3 Report
Comments and Suggestions for AuthorsPlease see my comments in the attached file.
Comments for author File: Comments.pdf
Author Response
Dear reviewer,
Thank you for your valuable review. We have attached the file with the responses to each of your comments.
Best regards.
Author Response File: Author Response.pdf