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Future Service Robot Scenarios in South Korea

Sustainability 2023, 15(22), 15679; https://doi.org/10.3390/su152215679
by Uijin Jung 1,*, Jinseo Lee 2, Ji-Young Choi 3, Hyun Yim 1 and Myoung-Jin Lee 3,*
Reviewer 1:
Reviewer 2: Anonymous
Reviewer 3: Anonymous
Sustainability 2023, 15(22), 15679; https://doi.org/10.3390/su152215679
Submission received: 14 September 2023 / Revised: 24 October 2023 / Accepted: 5 November 2023 / Published: 7 November 2023
(This article belongs to the Section Sustainable Engineering and Science)

Round 1

Reviewer 1 Report

Comments and Suggestions for Authors

The article is an interesting one. The article covers a wide set of disciplines .

The following comments will help improve the manuscript.
1. The introduction section is reasonable, written well, but very narrowly focussed; therefore, the authors must check to make it more relevant to the journal. The term used is ‘mixed method’ however more appropriate is hybrid/ integrated approach
2.  The research objective(s) are not clear; if the authors can add research objectives following research contributions, then it will increase readability.
3. Research gaps need a more theoretical base. The author (s) should link the gaps to existing literature. Please see the papers which can be useful  : https://doi.org/10.1108/BIJ-01-2023-0039  

https://doi.org/10.1007/s12063-023-00346-3

DOI: 10.1109/TEM.2021.3083138

4. It would be nice to see some kind of research framework figure to be added for this research.

5. Justify the solution method selected in terms of the research objectives.  

6. You describe several integrated approaches in the methodology section. What is the rationale of employing such techniques alone or in combination? What possible alternatives to the strategy or approach used for this study?

7. Strengthen the motivation and discussion parts substantially.
8. Demonstrate adequately that your solution findings have been logically derived and that conclusions, solutions/recommendations are fully supported by evidence
9. While this is still a budding topic, still one can find many research papers in other reputed journals as well.

Comments on the Quality of English Language

Proof reading for English is to be improved further

Author Response

Thank you for reviewing. Please see the attachment.

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Reviewer 2 Report

Comments and Suggestions for Authors

The peer-reviewed scientific study of 14 pages is undoubtedly a very interesting scientific work, the content of which can be beneficial not only for theory but also for practice.

  However, the authors probably neglected to sufficiently read the instructions for authors available on the journal's website and strictly follow them so that the content structure of their scientific work is respected.

  For this reason, the deficiency already occurs in the abstract, where I recommend expanding it by clearly setting the goal, the scientific research methods used (one can only be deduced) as well as specifying the results of the study themselves.

 

The introduction lacks a really clearly defined main goal and secondary goals. I did not find either established hypotheses or research questions that the authors should have clearly answered in the final chapter, which would fulfill the very meaning of their scientific work. These unequivocal answers are missing. The authors tried to replace these mandatory parts with a "scenario"

The relatively short introduction lacks a definition of the importance of the topic as well as an explanation of the basic term "manager". It is necessary to thoroughly explain who he is, what his relationship is to the organization, to subordinate employees, because someone will have to ensure the functioning of the business companies that the authors refer to in the text itself. It does this very conveniently, for example:

Peráček T. & Kaššaj M. (2023). The influence of jurisprudence on the formation of relations between the manager and the limited liability company. Juridical Tribune. 13 (1), pp. 43-62. 10.24818/TBJ/2023/13/1.04

 

The number of used sources (39) for the number of pages of the scientific study (14) is insufficient. To increase the scientific value of the work, I recommend the authors to expand this number by important ideas related to the functioning of the financial market as well as in the works:

 

Popa, CE. 2020 International investment protection in front of the states role in crisis times to managing disputes. JURIDICAL TRIBUNE-TRIBUNA JURIDICA, 10 (3), pp.455-465

 

Mucha, B.: Evaluation of the State of Implementation of the European Structural and Investment Funds: Case Study of the Slovak Republic. Online Journal Modeling the New Europe, 35:4-24, (2021), doi: 10.24193/OJMNE.2021.35.0

 

J. Ch. Kanamugire. 2022. THE REGULATION OF FINANCIAL MARKETS FOR LOW-INCOME EARNERS IN SOUTH AFRICA, PERSPECTIVES OF LAW AND PUBLIC ADMINISTRATION (JUN 2022)

 

 

 

The mandatory discussion part is missing. As I mentioned, in the conclusion it is necessary to clearly answer the established research questions and hypotheses with proper justification. It is also necessary to address the issue of future research.

Author Response

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Reviewer 3 Report

Comments and Suggestions for Authors

This paper discusses an important problem related to the challenges, development and policies of the government of service robots in South Korea. Based on literature review, expert workshops, consistency evaluation, and general morphological analysis, four scenarios are created and corresponding measures are proposed. The scenarios cover the criteria of Technological Development, Infrastructural Development, Commercial Acceptance, Social Acceptance, Policy and Regulatory Environment, and Technological Competition.  The findings thoroughly exhaust the most important factors concerning the future of service robots in South Korea. 

To the authors I have the following question: to what extent can the proposed methodology and conclusions be valid not only for South Korea but for other economies with similar or some distinguishing indicators?   

In summary, my opinion is that the paper has many valuable features and I recommend that it be published in its present form. 

Author Response

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Round 2

Reviewer 1 Report

Comments and Suggestions for Authors

1.          In Abstract , discussions related to main findings are not included.

2.          Authors are advised to revise the objectives again to remove the word “scenario”

3.          Authors are advised to revisit the following to review and reconsider the inclusions of the suggested works as per the previous review report in the followings as these are already the implemented cases of such technological integration. https://ieeexplore.ieee.org/document/9570724 , https://doi.org/10.1108/BIJ-01-2023-0039 , https://doi.org/10.1007/s12063-023-00346-3

“There are many scenario approaches and techniques, so they were divided into exploratory and normative [50], ranging from simplistic to complex and qualitative to quantitative [28,51]” P4.L139-141.

“GMA is a method for structuring and investigating. Non-quantifiable problem complexes were structured and contained in multidimensions [52,54–56]. GMA has been widely used in many fields from engineering design to policy analysis [57]. It has been used in crime and terrorist attack scenarios [58], and for threat scenarios in nuclear facilities [59].” P4.L145-149.

“However, causal thinking is restricted in the scenario process because sometimes unpredictable events such as political situations or human behaviors occur. The GMA technique ensures consistency under uncertain and complex situations [51]. Moreover, it has been used to reflect the opinions of numerous experts as quantitative data, not the subjective judgment of a small number of experts.” P4.L151-L155.

4.          Limitation of the work to be included .

5.          A more detailed explanation would be needed to illustrate the true benefits of the applied method. As part of this research process, it is also necessary to improve the discussions from this research in terms of managerial perspective.

Comments on the Quality of English Language

Proof read is to be done after incorporating suggestions.

Author Response

We appreciate your comments and recommendations. Please see the attachment.

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Reviewer 2 Report

Comments and Suggestions for Authors

I agree with publication this paper

Author Response

Thank you so much.

Round 3

Reviewer 1 Report

Comments and Suggestions for Authors

Please accept the paper in the current form. 

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