Who’s Really Got the Right Moves? Analyzing Recommendations for Writing American Judicial Opinions
Abstract
:1. Introduction
2. Materials and Methods
2.1. Theoretical Framework
2.1.1. Genre Theory
2.1.2. The Role of Expert Literature in Genre Theory
2.1.3. Manuals
- Regulatory texts, which aim to regulate the behavior of one or more individuals;
- Programmer texts, where a speaker–programmer who is competent in a domain transfers their know-how to a reader–actor through the description of a process to be executed;
- Instructional–prescriptive texts that directly prompt action;
- The injunctive–instructional texts, similar to the previous ones in that they set up injunctive instructions;
- Advisory texts;
- Receipt texts.
2.2. Methodology
2.2.1. Manuals
- In the manuals, we identified sections that indicate a description of the outline, the format, or the structure that opinions usually have or should have;
- Within these sections, each specific feature described in at least one of the sources was then considered a potential macro-division of a judicial opinion;
- After examining all the resources, we then counted the number of occurrences of a potential macro-division;
- Additionally, we found lower level divisions inside the macro-divisions identified in phase 2 of our methodology. For example, some of the sources simply propose that opinions include a section in which the court justifies the final decision without giving details about its content. Others provide details about the stages involved in the justification (see Figure A1 for examples);
- Before presenting the results of this exploration, we classified our sources according to different analytic criteria: descriptive/prescriptive, author’s expertise, target audience, and level of detail.
2.2.2. Move Analysis
3. Results
3.1. Manuals
- Introduction/Orientation Paragraph(s);
- Facts;
- Issues to be decided/legal questions;
- Justification of the decision of the court;
- Final action taken by the reviewing court.
- Exordium, i.e., the introduction that presents the major questions of the case (How? What? Who? When? Where?);
- Divisio, or the announcement of the division of the case according to the legal issues to be discussed;
- Narratio, the recounting of the facts of the case;
- Confirmatio, i.e., the presentation of evidence to analyze the parties’ arguments on the points of law;
- Peroratio, the final legal conclusion of the case.
3.2. Move Analysis
- Setting the scene: the Court’s decisions usually consist of introductory paragraphs that serve to introduce the case to the reader. They, therefore, contain elements relating to the nature of the parties, their claims in the case, the material facts concerning them, and the course of the proceedings that led the Court to rule on the case as final jurisdiction;
- Legal questions: the indication of the legal issue to be resolved by the Court generally comes at the end of the setting of the case. However, we have placed it in a separate category, since we have found that it can also be stated several times in the opinion, sometimes in ways that broaden or narrow the issue;
- Legal sources: we have also placed sources of law in a separate category. Indeed, many sources of law, whether case law, legislation, or the Constitution, appear throughout the opinions. Sometimes, the judges clearly highlight a section in their opinion that describes the sources of law that will be discussed in the analysis section. However, whenever sources of law are evoked in support of the judges’ arguments, we consider that they should be associated with the rhetorical functions of the analysis section;
- Analysis: this category corresponds to the heart of SCOTUS opinions. It is generally the longest, beginning after the expository part and ending before the statement of the final decision. The text is argumentative in nature, and includes the Court’s justification in response to the parties’ arguments;
- Resolution: this section reports on the resolution of the legal problem of the case by stating the final decision, following the argument of the majority. If the final judgment is mandatory, it may sometimes be accompanied by instructions for the lower courts and/or considerations of the impact of the decision on civil society.
4. Discussion
4.1. The Structure of Judicial Decisions According to Professional Manuals
4.2. Comparison of Professional Manuals and Authentic Documents
4.3. Contributions to Move Analysis and Genre Theory
5. Conclusions
Author Contributions
Funding
Institutional Review Board Statement
Informed Consent Statement
Data Availability Statement
Acknowledgments
Conflicts of Interest
Appendix A
- Aldisert (2012) and Aldisert et al. (2009): two of the sources are written by judge Ruggero J. Aldisert. At the time of publication, he was an appellate judge in the U.S. Court of Appeals for the Third Circuit. The first source is a monograph entitled Opinion Writing (Aldisert 2012). It provides guidance for professionals who aim to learn or to perfect their opinion writing. The second source by Aldisert is an article entitled “Opinion Writing and Opinion Readers” (Aldisert et al. 2009). It draws on the topics presented in the second edition of Opinion Writing “while specifically highlighting the relationship between opinion writing and opinion readers” (Aldisert et al. 2009, p. 4). These two sources offer the most detailed description of the structure of an opinion in terms of macro-divisions. Opinion Writing has an entire section dedicated to the “Anatomy of an Opinion”, while “Opinion Writing and Opinion Readers” intends to “dissect the ideal structure of an opinion” (Aldisert et al. 2009, p. 4). These sources, thus, adopt a prescriptive view towards the professional community of judges and law clerks. They are based on the author’s 30-year experience as an appellate judge.
- Douglas (1983): “How to write a concise opinion” (Douglas 1983) is a short article written by appellate judge Charles G. Douglas. It was published in the Judges Journal, suggesting a readership composed of a majority of judges. It adopts a very prescriptive view on how judges should write their opinion in order to reduce its length.
- Federal Judicial Center (2013, 2020): the handbooks Law Clerk Handbook and Judicial Writing Manual are comparable in that they are intended as manuals for professionals. Both are written by the same judicial agency, the Federal Judicial Center. They provide an overview of legal professionals’ specific duties with a chapter focusing on research and legal writing. These two sources are prescriptive and provide the same type of guidance. Judicial Writing Manual, however, offers a more detailed view of the structure that an opinion should have.
- Klein (1995): “Opinion Writing Assistance Involving Law Clerks” is an article written by judge Richard B. Klein. It specifically addresses law clerks and recommends guidelines to improve their opinion writing. These recommendations are drawn from Klein’s own experience as a judge, as they “fit his personal style” (Klein 1995, p. 7). The article is relatively detailed and comments on lower levels of language as well.
- Sheppard (2008): “The ‘Write’ Way: A Judicial Clerk’s Guide to Writing for the Court” is an article written by Jennifer Sheppard and published in the University of Baltimore Law Review. Jennifer Sheppard is an Assistant Law Professor at Mercer University School of Law. She addresses law clerks and law students and offers a fairly detailed approach to writing an opinion. Her article is both descriptive and prescriptive as regards to format. She presents excerpts from actual opinions and guidelines to clerks, based on what an opinion generally includes. Her description is not, however, informed by an identified corpus of opinions. Importantly, she states that “the format of an opinion may vary depending on the court or the case itself” (Sheppard 2008, p. 79).
- Armstrong and Terrell (2009): Thinking like a Writer: a Lawyer’s guide to effective writing and editing has only a short section about judicial opinion writing. The rest of the book presents a large set of principles and tips that lawyers should use to improve their legal writing in general. These same principles are used to describe “the structure of a simple opinion” (Armstrong and Terrell 2009, p. 259). The description of macro-divisions is based on what the authors, drawing on their experience, consider logical and coherent for a judicial opinion.
- van Geel (2009): Understanding Supreme Court Opinions is a book intended for law students. Its author, T.R. Van Geel (professor of law and political science), says that it should supplement their constitutional casebook material. The audience can also include lawyers who wish to improve their understanding of SCOTUS opinions. The book adopts a descriptive approach. The organizational structure is referred to in terms of the most typical elements shared among Court’s opinions.
- McKinney (2014): The book Reading Like a Lawyer was written by the law professor Ruth Ann McKinney. As the title suggests, its target audience is lawyers who want to improve their strategies for reading case law. The book includes a brief description of the structure of a judicial opinion, based on “conventions that have evolved over time” (McKinney 2014, p. 23). No further detail about the macro-divisions is given.
- Leubsdorf (2002): “The Structure of Judicial Opinions” takes a linguistic perspective when describing judicial opinions. This distinguishes the long article from the other sources studied in this article. Its author, law professor John Leubsdorf, describes these documents being examples of a complex genre that intertwines different voices and stories. Although it includes the main elements of an opinion in detail, the piece does not explicitly state how the information is organized within these elements, nor does Leubsdorf present the order in which law students or lawyers are expected to encounter the information within the main elements. Like most of the professional sources, Leubsdorf’s analysis relies on his own practice and experience as a law practitioner.
Additional Information about the Expert Sources under Study
Appendix B
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Reference | Descriptive /Prescriptive | Target Audience | Level of Detail | Author’s Expertise |
---|---|---|---|---|
(Douglas 1983) “How To Write a Concise Opinion” | Prescriptive | Judges | Low | Judge |
(Federal Judicial Center 2020) Law Clerk Handbook | Prescriptive | Law clerks | Low | Judges (judicial agency) |
(Klein 1995) “Opinion Writing Assistance Involving Law Clerks: What I Tell Them” | Prescriptive | Law clerks | Low | Judge |
(McKinney 2014) Reading Like a Lawyer | Descriptive | Students /lawyers | Low | Scholar |
(van Geel 2009) Understanding Supreme Court Opinions | Descriptive | Students /lawyers | Low | Scholar |
(Armstrong and Terrell 2009) Thinking Like a Writer: A Lawyer’s Guide to Effective Writing and Editing | Prescriptive | Lawyers | Low | Scholars |
(Federal Judicial Center 2013) Judicial Writing Manual | Prescriptive | Judges | High | Judges (judicial agency) |
(Aldisert et al. 2009) “Opinion Writing and Opinion Readers” | Prescriptive | Judges/law clerks | High | Judge |
(Aldisert 2012) Opinion Writing | Prescriptive | Judges/law clerks | High | Judge |
(Sheppard 2008) “The ‘Write’ Way: A Judicial Clerk’s Guide for Writing for the Court” | Descriptive /prescriptive | Students /lawyers | High | Scholar |
(Leubsdorf 2002) “The Structure of Judicial Opinions” | Descriptive | Students /lawyers | High | Scholar |
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Lavissière MC, Bonnard W. Who’s Really Got the Right Moves? Analyzing Recommendations for Writing American Judicial Opinions. Languages. 2024; 9(4):119. https://doi.org/10.3390/languages9040119
Chicago/Turabian StyleLavissière, Mary C., and Warren Bonnard. 2024. "Who’s Really Got the Right Moves? Analyzing Recommendations for Writing American Judicial Opinions" Languages 9, no. 4: 119. https://doi.org/10.3390/languages9040119
APA StyleLavissière, M. C., & Bonnard, W. (2024). Who’s Really Got the Right Moves? Analyzing Recommendations for Writing American Judicial Opinions. Languages, 9(4), 119. https://doi.org/10.3390/languages9040119