Features of Grammatical Writing Competence among Early Writers in a Norwegian School Context
Abstract
:1. Introduction
So, whereas rule-based grammar divides language into two absolute categories—correct and incorrect—rhetorical grammar treats grammatical choice as, well, precisely that: a choice from among possibilities. These possibilities are judged as more or less effective, depending upon factors such as audience, purpose and context.
2. Writing Competence
3. Previous Studies about Grammatical Writing Competence
Although the average child in the fourth grade produces virtually all the grammatical structures ever described in a course in school grammar, he does not produce as many at the same time—as many inside each other, or on top of each other—as older students do.
- (1)
- We often run around in the schoolyard.
- (2)
- In the schoolyard, we often run around.
- (3)
- Often, we run around in the schoolyard.
4. Untangling Subparts of Grammatical Writing Competence
Children appear to have access to the core grammatical structures of English by the time they start school. Instead, a key change concerns their “ability to manage an increasing degree of structural complexity”.
(…) complexity refers to a property or quality of a phenomenon or entity in terms of (1) the number and the nature of the discrete components that the entity consists of, and (2) the number and the nature of the relationships between the constituent components.
I like to play tag.
I like to just relax.
I like to be alone.
I like to be with friends.
I like to be on the carousel.
I like to be on the climbing frame.
I like to play on the swing.
I like to play Simon says.
Text 253035, MP2 Outdoor activities (see original Norwegian text in Appendix A)
I like to play football, dodgeball, kick the can and
to Minecraft. Football is fun
because it is exciting and because it is sport.
There are many of us on the field. Dodgeball
is fun because you can throw a ball at
someone
and because you are moving.
We are many on the
field. Kick the can is fun
because you have to
sneak behind the one who is
it. Minecraft is fun
because you play the game.
Text 756057, MP0 Outdoor Activities4
The point of grammar study is to enable pupils to make choices from among a range of linguistic resources and to be aware of the effects of different choices on the rhetorical power of their writing.
5. Methods for Data Collection and Analysis
5.1. The Data Set
Outdoor Activities: Write a letter to the researchers about what you like to do during the outdoor school breaks;
Magical Hat: Imagine that you find a magical hat. When you put it on, you can change into anything you want. Tell the reader about what you transform into and what happens on that day.
5.2. Method of Analysis
6. Results
6.1. Grammatical Repertoire and Complexity
- (4)
- If I found a magical hat, I would…
- (5)
- I found a magical hat. When I put it on I knew that the world would never be the same again. When I walked in that door there were lots of my family there.
- (6)
- When we are on the climbing frame, there is also someone who is playing tag.
6.2. Grammatical Variation and Choice
I like to play tag.
I like to just relax.
I like to be alone.
I like to be with friends.
I like to be on the carousel.
I like to be on the climbing frame.
I like to play on the swing.
I like to play Simon says.
Text 253035, MP2 Outdoor Activities
To the researchers,
In winter I like to build a snowman.
I also like to go sledging. I like to slide.
When a lot of snow has come dad
used to shovel snow and put it in a pile.
Then I use to jump from the shed and right
into the grove. I think that’s fun.
In spring I like to cycle and to be outside.
I like to do handstands and skip rope.
The sun gets higher in the sky in summer.
Then we can go to the beach. There we
can have a swim in cold water. I like to swim.
When I ask if someone wants to play kick the can
many of them want to. I like to be together.
In autumn I like to walk around for Halloween
I like to make the house look scary with spiders and pumpkins.
I like to dress up on Halloween.
In autumn leaves fall from the trees.
I usually gather it and throw it in the air.
Text450019, MP4 Magical Hat
Magical hat
If I found a magical hat then I would
be a unicorn. As a unicorn I would
ride a sledge on the rainbow and fly very
high in the sky and dress up with
ribbons and play hide and seek with
other unicorns. I would also find a
treasure that contains many jewels. I would
have pink fur and light blue horns.
Text 256009, MP4 Magical Hat
- (7)
- I usually play on the playground. There I normally climb. I sometimes play quietly, but that doesn’t happen too often.
- (8)
- If I had found a magical hat then I would have wished I would wish that I became a mermaid.
- (9)
- If I found a magical hat I would have become a rabbit and driven a car.
Dog. I went for a walk with my owner
and ate food. Then I played
with chewing toys. Then I wanted to sleep.
Then I woke up.
Text262032, MP2 Magical Hat
Magical Hat
I wish that the swimming pool would open
I wish that the aeroplane would open and that I would get candy every day
And that I didn’t go to school
And that the circus would open
And that coronavirus would disappear forever
Text 253023, MP2 Magical Hat
Outdoor Activities
Football is fun because it is exciting and because it is sport.
Dodgeball is fun because one can throw a ball at people and because you are moving around.
Text 254056, MP2 Outdoor Activities
Hi researchers,
Do you know what I would have been if I had a magical hat then I would have been an ice cream because I love ice cream and I would have been a cheetah or a dog because then I get a lot of hugs and I want to be a researcher because then I can find a vaccine or would have been a teddy bear named researcher isn’t that a great name and I would have been a mouse or a Y I want to be a letter and I want to be a gummy bear because then I stick.
I like to be a cheetah
Text 260047, MP2 Magical Hat (see original Norwegian text in Appendix A)
7. Discussion
To the researchers,
When I find the hat then I will get a kitten
and I can fly
and I can swim in candy
and I fly over every city
and everything is fun.
And I will be really good at gymnastics
and that I get superpower
and I can walk on water.
Text 255001, MP4 Magical Hat
8. Conclusions
Author Contributions
Funding
Institutional Review Board Statement
Informed Consent Statement
Data Availability Statement
Conflicts of Interest
Appendix A
1 | This is also generally highly valued in the evaluation of the students’ texts (see also Hertzberg 2005). |
2 | The distinctions are not relevant to our study, as we are not measuring the effects of teaching. |
3 | |
4 | MP0 (measure point zero) refers to a sample of texts that were collected prior to the intervention in the project. It served as a pilot sample for our study. More about the intervention in Section 4. |
5 | In some studies, fluency also refers to the number of words written in a given amount of time (e.g., Skar et al. 2022). This is, however, not the definition we are aiming for. |
6 | More specifically, the teachers in FUS reported that 83.2% had Norwegian as their L1. 10.7% had learned both Norwegian and another language from birth, whereas 5.9% reported another language as their L1 (Skar et al. 2023). |
7 | The eight rating scales created were Audience Awareness (S1), Vocabulary (S3), Organisation of Content (S4), Language Use (S5), Punctuation (S6), Spelling (S7), Handwriting (S8), and Relevance (S9). |
8 | MP0 served as a pilot for our study, as aforementioned. |
9 | A similar solution is chosen by Myhill et al. (2012). |
10 | |
11 | It is a theoretical question whether an infinitive construction should be included as a subordinate clause due to its structure being parallel to subordinate clauses or whether it should be considered a nominal constituent, as it has no tense. For our purposes, this has no importance for the analysis. |
12 | When we adjust for text length (see Figure 4), the result is slightly different, but the tendencies remain similar. |
13 | This also applies to other results in this section. |
14 | In this study, we have counted T-units, not single words, which means that the measures of text length are not precise, but the overall impression is quite obvious at this point. The numbers of T-units are 448 (MP2 Outdoor Activities), 487 (MP2 Magical Hat), 673 (MP4 Outdoor Activities), and 804 (MP4 Magical Hat). |
15 | The main reason that a substantial number of features do not occur in the “below average” group is that the majority of texts in this group were either non-verbal (only a drawing) or in the form of single words, a list or maybe one full sentence. |
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Grammatical Repertoire: Relative Number of Texts with the Grammatical Feature | ||||
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Grammatical Feature | MP2 Outdoor Activities | MP2 Magical Hat | MP4 Outdoor Activities | MP4 Magical Hat |
T-units | 74.32% (110/148) | 70.75% (104/147) | 89.84% (115/128) | 95.50% (106/111) |
Phrases | 19.59% (29/148) | 31.97% (47/147) | 35.16% (45/128) | 44.14% (49/111) |
Nominal Clauses | 6.76% (10/148) | 14.97% (22/147) | 17.19% (22/128) | 26.13% (29/111) |
Adverbial Clauses | 22.97% (34/148) | 20.41% (20/147) | 43.75% (56/128) | 41.44% (46/111) |
Relative Clauses | 7.43% (11/148) | 19.73% (29/147) | 20.31% (26/128) | 42.34% (47/111) |
Infinitive Clauses | 58.78% (87/148) | 4.76% (7/147) | 82.81% (106/128) | 22.52% (25/111) |
Additive Connections | 25% (37/148) | 32.65% (48/147) | 33.59% (43/128) | 51.35% (57/111) |
Formal Subjects | 12.84% (19/148) | 10.88% (16/147) | 27.34% (35/128) | 28.83% (32/111) |
Topicalisations | 20.27% (30/148) | 42.86% (63/147) | 34.38% (44/128) | 65.77% (73/111) |
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