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Exploring the Visual Guidance of Motor Imagery in Sustainable Brain–Computer Interfaces

Sustainability 2022, 14(21), 13844; https://doi.org/10.3390/su142113844
by Cheng Yang 1, Lei Kong 2,†, Zhichao Zhang 2,†, Ye Tao 1 and Xiaoyu Chen 1,*
Reviewer 1:
Reviewer 2: Anonymous
Reviewer 3: Anonymous
Sustainability 2022, 14(21), 13844; https://doi.org/10.3390/su142113844
Submission received: 31 August 2022 / Revised: 16 October 2022 / Accepted: 17 October 2022 / Published: 25 October 2022
(This article belongs to the Special Issue Artificial Intelligence Applications for Sustainable Urban Living)

Round 1

Reviewer 1 Report

Yang et al., utilized a motor imagery-based brain computer interfaces in a group of healthy adults. By systematically investigating the effect of the level of abstraction of the trigger on the BCI performance, the authors find a low level of abstraction was associated with a highest brain response in the form of ERD, and lowest level of mental load in the form of PSD, and the overall accuracy rate was 97%.

 

I only have a few minor points for the authors to consider:

 

 

Introductions:

Lines 43-46:

when picturing unilateral hand movements, the energy of mu rhythms (8–12 Hz) and Beta rhythms (14–30 Hz) in the contralateral brain region is lowered, whereas the energy of mu rhythms and Beta rhythms in the ipsilateral motor-sensory areas is raised

Here, the authors may use ERD/ERS to stand for the power suppression/enhancement.

 

Line 105:

Should use Liang et al., rather than Shuang Liang et al. Same citation issues occurred in other parts of the manuscript.

 

Methods:

Line 301-302

Why use TP9 TP10 as reference channels? They should contain some brain activities.

 

Line 310-316

Why only use mu ERD? How about the performance when using beta ERD?

 

Line 324-344

It is still not clear why PSD of frontal channels can be a measure of mental load, which period of brain activity was extracted for PSD calculations?

 

Line 370

Delta should be 1-3Hz? As the authors have use high pass filter at 0.5 Hz, 0.1 Hz does not make sense.

 

Results:

Have authors performed spatial filter such as Laplacian filter before using C3/C4 data in the analysis?

 

Table 1:

ERD should be a negative value (A-R/R), but here all data were positive.

 

Have authors use any assessments to evaluate the level of vividness of motor imagery? It should be a potential cofound for BCI performance.

 

 

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Reviewer 2 Report

This is an interesting study, however the authors should make some clarifications:

1. In line 247 what was the rationale for choosing the different levels of abstraction? Please include it in the reference.

2. In fig 3 pls clarify the reason for high PSD in the frequency range < 2.5 Hz for all 3 groups.

3. Pls include the denoising method used here.

4. Pls include the t test significance in the fig.6

5. It would be appropriate to include weakly supervised deep learning pipelines to better classify the abstractions.

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Reviewer 3 Report

see attached file, please 

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Round 2

Reviewer 3 Report

see the attached file, please 

Comments for author File: Comments.pdf

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Round 3

Reviewer 3 Report

1. Please, check the line 423-424 "The classification accuracy Paired samples t-tests." It seems as no verb is in the sentence. 

2. Please, add the work's limitations in the discussion section. 

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