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Trend, Status, and Challenges of Irrigation Development in Ethiopia—A Review

Sustainability 2021, 13(10), 5646; https://doi.org/10.3390/su13105646
by Mekonen Ayana Gebul
Reviewer 1: Anonymous
Reviewer 2: Anonymous
Reviewer 3: Anonymous
Sustainability 2021, 13(10), 5646; https://doi.org/10.3390/su13105646
Submission received: 3 April 2021 / Revised: 22 April 2021 / Accepted: 25 April 2021 / Published: 18 May 2021

Round 1

Reviewer 1 Report

The reader could get an extensive description of the irrigation history in Ethiopia. Well-structured manuscript highlighting the challenges in the field of irrigation. I recommend further expansion of the text in two areas:

  • effect of the environmental factors such as climate change and land degradation shall be more detailed on the irrigation management
  • what suggests the author to overcome the issues mentioned in the text? What would be a feasible and optimal action plan towards a sustainable irrigation?

Minor changes suggestion:

Is there a possibility to improve the quality of Figure 1?

Space needed between the numbers and unit (p1. 3.07 million, p2. 3,000 ha, p3. 5000 ha)

Author Response

Dear Reviewer,

Thank you for enriching comments and suggestions. My responses to the comments are attached to this note.

Best regards

Author Response File: Author Response.pdf

Reviewer 2 Report

  • Citations do not appear in the text from n.º 1.
  • They are out of order.
  • It does not use the journal template.
  • The sources of the figures, tables ... do not appear.
  • In the abstract, separate "3.07" from "million".
  • Include a period of time in the title.
  • Section 3 needs to be strengthened in every way.
  • "Summary"?? and Conclusions.

Author Response

Dear Reviewer,

Thank you very much for the enriching comments and suggestions. My responses are attached to this note.

Best regards

Author Response File: Author Response.pdf

Reviewer 3 Report

Dear author/s,

the topic of the paper is interesting and the results could be useful for future development plans in the field.

First of all the manuscript should respect the format of the journal.

Secondly is not presented the methodology. How the articles were selected? why are these ones the most representative? 

At the same time, the abstract should be more concise and clear.

Also please pay attention to the citation of the references in the text, the sources for all tables and figures should be indicated. Please present the limitations of the study.

Good luck!

Author Response

Dear Reviewer,

Thank you very much for the enriching comments and suggestions. My responses are attached to this note.

Best regards

Author Response File: Author Response.pdf

Round 2

Reviewer 2 Report

Accept.

Reviewer 3 Report

Thank you for improving the manuscript!

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