Influence of Indoor Climate on Employees in Office Buildings—A Case Study
Round 1
Reviewer 1 Report
The paper is very interesting, but limited to a punctual experience.
The paper is well-written and the data analysis is very detailed.
The work looks like to previous works..., what can be the innovative approach ?
Although you have already argued the outcomes of the work, a "sum-up" table of the strategies and best practices to be taken in considerations can improve the efficiency of the work...
Regarding the topic, I highly suggest to have a look to the works by Ying Hua (Cornell University) and Chiara Tagliaro (Politecnico di Milano) because some useful information and design aspects have been already investigated by them..
in conclusion, in author contribution, typically it is requested to list all the contributions for each part of the paper (please have a look to other article of the journal)
Author Response
The paper is very interesting, but limited to a punctual experience. The paper is well-written and the data analysis is very detailed.
The work looks like to previous works..., what can be the innovative approach?
Response: lines 80-81 - It is added.
Although you have already argued the outcomes of the work, a "sum-up" table of the strategies and best practices to be taken in considerations can improve the efficiency of the work...
Response: lines 262-265 - It is added.
Regarding the topic, I highly suggest to have a look to the works by Ying Hua (Cornell University) and Chiara Tagliaro (Politecnico di Milano) because some useful information and design aspects have been already investigated by them.
Response: lines 74-88 – Rreferences are added
in conclusion, in author contribution, typically it is requested to list all the contributions for each part of the paper (please have a look to other article of the journal)
Response: lines 264 - 266 - list of the contributions for each part of the paper is added
We would like to thank for the valuable advice and suggestions.
Author Response File: Author Response.docx
Reviewer 2 Report
The manuscript presents the influence of indoor climate on employees in office building -a case study is well performed using the available methodology ,treatment of obtained data and the conclusions well supported.Thw paper merits publication to the Sustainability taking into consinteration some remarks:
Line 28; add the parameter temperature and telative huminity.
Tables and figures is preferable to be reduced.Like table 1 and Table 2 must
be one.Figures are tottally 13 ,propably must be reduced.
The Results are very extensive and the Discussion part is shorten.
Line :19.4 m3/ hour vs h and all over the text.
Line 299 .Please add year of publication.
Author Response
The manuscript presents the influence of indoor climate on employees in office building -a case study is well performed using the available methodology ,treatment of obtained data and the conclusions well supported. The paper merits publication to the Sustainability taking into consinteration some remarks:
Line 28; add the parameter temperature and relative huminity.
Response: line 28 - they are added.
Tables and figures is preferable to be reduced. Like table 1 and Table 2 must be one. Figures are tottally 13, propably must be reduced.
Response: Tables and figures are reduced.
The Results are very extensive and the Discussion part is shorten.
Response: Results and discussion are given to one chapter.
Line :19.4 m3/ hour vs h and all over the text.
Response: It is corrected.
Line 299 .Please add year of publication.
Response: It is corrected.
We would like to thank for the valuable advice and suggestions.
Author Response File: Author Response.docx