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PM2.5-Associated Hospitalization Risk of Cardiovascular Diseases in Wuhan: Cases Alleviated by Residential Greenness

Int. J. Environ. Res. Public Health 2023, 20(1), 746; https://doi.org/10.3390/ijerph20010746
by Haomin Yang 1,†, Jianpeng Liao 1,†, Jing Wang 1, Can Yang 1, Kuizhuang Jiao 1, Xiaodie Wang 1, Zenghui Huang 1, Xuxi Ma 1, Xingyuan Liu 2, Jingling Liao 3 and Lu Ma 1,*
Reviewer 1: Anonymous
Int. J. Environ. Res. Public Health 2023, 20(1), 746; https://doi.org/10.3390/ijerph20010746
Submission received: 29 November 2022 / Revised: 23 December 2022 / Accepted: 27 December 2022 / Published: 31 December 2022
(This article belongs to the Special Issue Advances in Airborne Pollution and Human Exposure Research)

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The effort of the authors are duly appreciated, and the manuscript has been improved substantially. Moreover, the authors have addressed the comments adequately. However, further language editing is required as many linguistic inconsistencies are persistent.
Specific comment
L97: “Wuhan, a megacity in central China, had a land area of 8,569.15 km2 and a population 97 of more than 10 million” Replace “had” with “with”
L118: “previous study.” Which study/studies?
(3) Many abbreviations, such as CCO, DF, df, etc., remain undescribed

Author Response

Thank you for your valuable comments on the language and abbreviation, which will help improve the clarity and readability of our manuscript. In the latest version, we have revised the corresponding contents specified in your comments. Besides, we have carefully checked and revised some language and grammar problems to improve the readability. (Line 35, 36, 50, 73, 76, 84, 85, 96, 101, 115, 119, 124, 146, 179, 187, 192, 196, 205, 206, 260, 269, 283, 285, 289, 303, 309, 313, 323,325,326, 341, 344, 379, 399).

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