Implementation of the Telemetric Integration of the BIM-RFID in Context of Access Control
Round 1
Reviewer 1 Report
Comments and Suggestions for AuthorsThe article presents a unique process of connecting an RFID reader with BIM using a simple model that can be replicated in other contexts (e.g., gaining access to different parts of a construction site).
The abstract is confusing, paper contribution is scattered and not clearly written.
Introduction to long and should include clear explaination of the contribution of this paper.
At the end of the introduction section place a paragraph on the rest of the paper organization.
Explain how you categorized the RFID reader as IoT as it is not directly connected to internet.
Move code to appendix and if you want to show under text generate pseudo code for the most important and innovative part of code / function that you have developed not even the one by AI tools.
Rewrite conclusion section in a precise manner and write findings with the key numerical results.
Update the reference list with the recently published literature in the highly impact journals.
Comments on the Quality of English LanguageEnglish is fine, just all authors double check to remove any typos.
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Reviewer 2 Report
Comments and Suggestions for AuthorsWhat are the main challenges between two approaches to IoT sensor measurement and BIM models, and how have you addressed these challenges in your research?
How does the integration of RFID and BIM improve material handling, theft prevention and logistics on construction sites, as discussed in the paper?
In what ways does the proposed system address the limitations of one-way communication between IoT sensors and BIM models, especially real-time two-way measurement?
Can you provide more insight into real-time access to specific parts of a building or office using the administrator interface?
How does the use of IoT sensors in conjunction with BIM help to optimize the use of resources such as water and electricity, and advance sustainable development goals?
What are the implications of integrating BIM with advanced technologies such as IoT and RFID for both high-performance and management of buildings?
Comments on the Quality of English Language
moderate editing
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Reviewer 3 Report
Comments and Suggestions for AuthorsThe submitted paper studied a telemetry connection between the BIM model and a Radio-Frequency Identification (RFID) sensor in the context of gaining access to various parts of a building. Although the related technology and system development process are well explained, the followings should be improved.
1) The results in Chapter 3 seem to be insufficient to prove the effectiveness of the results of the developed system. Above all, it is unknown whether it operates efficiently in various situations and environments in the field. The current results show only those implemented in connection with BIM, but there is a need to include results based on actual application.
2) Chapter 5 does not seem to be a discussion of the research results. There is a need to focus on the results of the developed system.
3) The conclusion (Chapter 6) seems to describe general contents. It is necessary to be written based on the results developed in the study.
4) Chapter 4 (limitations and future work) should preferably be located after the conclusion.
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Round 2
Reviewer 1 Report
Comments and Suggestions for AuthorsAll the comments are appropriately addressed.
The minor enhancement that can additionally boost the paper's strength is to cite the most related recent papers as
https://scholar.google.com/scholar?as_vis=1&q=End-to-End%2Bsecure%2BIntelligent%2BIoT+Monitoring&hl=en&as_sdt=0,33
Comments on the Quality of English LanguageEnglish is fine, please double check to remove any typos
Author Response
Comments 1: The minor enhancement that can additionally boost the paper's strength is to cite the most related recent papers as
https://scholar.google.com/scholar?as_vis=1&q=End-to-End%2Bsecure%2BIntelligent%2BIoT+Monitoring&hl=en&as_sdt=0,33
Response 1: Thank you for this comment. Two references have been added and have enriched the manuscript.
Comments 2: English is fine, please double check to remove any typos
Response 2: Thank you English checked, after any approval the language editor will check the paper.
Reviewer 2 Report
Comments and Suggestions for AuthorsAll comments have been addressed. It can be accepted in the present form.
Comments on the Quality of English Languageminor editing
Author Response
Comments 1: minor editing (English)
Response 1: Thank you, minor corrections applied.
Reviewer 3 Report
Comments and Suggestions for AuthorsThe revised paper was modified according to the reviewer's comments.
Author Response
Comments 1: The revised paper was modified according to the reviewer's comments.
Response 1: Thank you for your kind words. The manuscript has become more mature thanks to your comments.
