Magnetic Fabrics and Petrography of Rocksalts Reveal Preferred Orientation of Anhydrites within a Halite Matrix
Round 1
Reviewer 1 Report
This is an interesting paper where the magnetic fabrics of rock salts are analyzed. This is also interesting because the analysis is done on diamagnetic material whose susceptibility is low and negative, where AMS analysis is not common.
I agree with the general finding where shape anisotropy of mineral grains is actually controlling the AMS fabric rather than the crystallographic anisotropy. The same is observed for magnetite grains (refer: Establishment of correlation between anisotropy of magnetic susceptibility and magma flow fabric: an insight from Nandurbar–Dhule dyke swarm of Deccan Volcanic Province, Das and Mallik, 2019, current science) where needle-shaped magnetite provides well defined magnetic fabric than fully grown euhedral magnetite crystals.
The major criticism that I have is on the number of cores drilled out from each sample. It seems only one !!!! I would like the authors to consider increasing the sample/core numbers so that the clustering of susceptibility axes is better tested.
Please provide a general table where all the AMS data are listed.
The other criticism is if quick microscopy can provide a clear idea on the direction of salt flow during deformation, what is the necessity of carrying out AMS at all? The point is if rock fabric can be figured out for direct observation, what is the necessity of any proxy like AMS at all?
The representation and resolution of some of the plots like Fig. 2b can be improved.
In fig.2f, please mention which one is the heating and which one is the cooling curve in the caption, also mark the major susceptibility drops. A higher resolution plot can be used.
In fig.6 the bottommost scale is unreadable.
Generally, the K1-K2 plane that is the magnetic foliation is parallel to the bedding plane, in this case, it is the K1-K3 plane, please provide your thoughts.
I gather VSM is used for rock magnetic analysis, did you figure out the domain state and whether it has any effect on magnetic fabric?
Author Response
This is an interesting paper where the magnetic fabrics of rock salts are analyzed. This is also interesting because the analysis is done on diamagnetic material whose susceptibility is low and negative, where AMS analysis is not common.
Reply: We thank the reviewer for his comments and positive response to the use of diamagnetic fabrics for studying rock deformation.
I agree with the general finding where shape anisotropy of mineral grains is actually controlling the AMS fabric rather than the crystallographic anisotropy. The same is observed for magnetite grains (refer: Establishment of correlation between anisotropy of magnetic susceptibility and magma flow fabric: an insight from Nandurbar–Dhule dyke swarm of Deccan Volcanic Province, Das and Mallik, 2019, current science) where needle-shaped magnetite provides well defined magnetic fabric than fully grown euhedral magnetite crystals.
The major criticism that I have is on the number of cores drilled out from each sample. It seems only one !!!! I would like the authors to consider increasing the sample/core numbers so that the clustering of susceptibility axes is better tested.
Reply: We think there was a misunderstanding. We collected 12 specimens from locality LS1 and 9 specimens from locality LS6. Initially we used the term samples for cores, which might be misleading, so in the revised version we edited the text to avoid confusion (lines 107-108).
Please provide a general table where all the AMS data are listed.
Done: we added Table 1.
The other criticism is if quick microscopy can provide a clear idea on the direction of salt flow during deformation, what is the necessity of carrying out AMS at all? The point is if rock fabric can be figured out for direct observation, what is the necessity of any proxy like AMS at all?
Reply: We agree that direct observations are superior, but inferring the 3D orientation using optical/SEM methods is very challenging and time consuming. We used the orientation of the AMS to cut coaxial thin-sections and schematically compared the microscopy images. The relations between AMS and microstructures in rocksalts advances our understanding on the nature of deformation. In order to strengthen this point, in the revised version we added photomicrographs of gamma-irradiated salt samples that highlight the origin of the AMS signals and their relation to the salt micro-deformation mechanisms.
The representation and resolution of some of the plots like Fig. 2b can be improved.
Done: High resolutions images are provided in the re-submission.
In fig.2f, please mention which one is the heating and which one is the cooling curve in the caption, also mark the major susceptibility drops. A higher resolution plot can be used.
Done: we added heating/cooling marks in the figure and in the caption.
In fig.6 the bottommost scale is unreadable.
Done.
Generally, the K1-K2 plane that is the magnetic foliation is parallel to the bedding plane, in this case, it is the K1-K3 plane, please provide your thoughts.
Done: we agree and added a discussion in lines 240-246. In LS1 site we recognize a magnetic lineation (clustered K1 axes and K2-K3 foliation) parallel to bedding strike. In a previous work we recognized this fabric in intra-salt clasts (Issachar et al., 2019) and interpreted it an indication for N-S folding at the subsurface. In LS6 site we recognize horizontal foliation oblique to bedding, and its relation to the rocksalt deformation is yet not so obvious. To better understand the deformation recorded by the AMS, and to correlate it with the salt wall kinematics, the fabric needs further study.
I gather VSM is used for rock magnetic analysis, did you figure out the domain state and whether it has any effect on magnetic fabric?
Reply: We couldn’t figure domain states as the hysteresis is very week, on the limit of the noise level, indicating that ferromagnetic minerals are very rare in the sample.
Reviewer 2 Report
This manuscript reports AMS results on diamagnetic rocksalts samples from the Sedom salt wall (Dead Sea basin). Several techniques were applied to study the magnetic properties, the magnetic fabric, and also the petrographic, chemical, and mineralogical characteristics of the samples. Several authors have applied AMS to rocksalts with (few) impurities, but this paper describes the application of AMS to “pure” diamagnetic rocksalt samples. The article presents valuable, original, and interesting data and shows that the studied rocksalts samples consisted mainly of halite crystals and needle-like anhydrite crystals. The ferro- and paramagnetic minerals are scarce and their contribution to the bulk magnetic properties was found to be negligible. The AMS reflects the preferred alignment of needle-like anhydrite crystals with their long axes parallel to K1 axes. Some appointments about the relation between AMS and regional deformation/ flow direction were also made. The authors suggest that the AMS of the rocksalts provides a textural proxy that reflects the deformation and flow processes of the rocksalts, despite their very low magnetic susceptibility.
In my opinion, the article can be accepted after minor revision.
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Comments for author File: Comments.zip
Author Response
We thank the reviewer for the support and review. We agree with all the comments and corrected the manuscript accordingly. We had problems with bolding the year in some of the references.
Reviewer 3 Report
See attached review and annotated manuscript.
Magnetic fabrics and petrography of rocksalts reveal preferred orientation of anhydrites within a halite matrix
Ran Issachar1,, Ram Weinberger and Tsafrir Levi
Summary
This manuscript presents results that bear on the interpretation of the AMS fabrics in diamagnetic materials with and without shape anisotropy. They conclude that despite the weak diamagnetic response (-13.3 × 10-6 SI) and the low degree of anisotropy the AMS results are reliable and reproducible, reflecting an intrinsic anisotropy within the rocksalts. This is a significant finding for the AMS community and should be highlighted by the editor.
General Comments
The #'s are keyed to the attached annotated manuscript.
Line 27: "Salt structures (diapirs) are generally associated with large amounts of deformation as the rheological properties of rocksalts enable them to flow under gravitational and tectonic forces [1,2]"
Change force to stress. The salt diapirs are flowing due to an applied stress such as tectonic, buoyancy, sediment facies distribution, and other processes. All these process impart or react to forces over an area; that is a stress.
#1 Line # 51: "Anhydrite and carnallite forms orthorhombic crystals, and are expected to have AMS co-axial to the crystallographic axes."
This statement bears further explanation. By analogy, in the Fe-Ti oxide magnetite phases; the body diagonal of the cubic crystal serves as the easy axis of magnetization. Please explain "co-axial to the crystallographic axes". Is this parallel to the crystal axis, i.e., a, b, c axis of the orthorhombic crystal? If so, all axis are of different lengths. Which axis does the AMS fabric align with; K1-max, K2-int, K3-min? Why??? Please elaborate.
#2 Line # 113: : This is an instrumentation settings question. The authors say "magnetic field of 750 A/m (peak field) and frequency of 1220 Hz". This seems to be a bit high. Standard settings are 200 A/m, 976 Hz. Please explain.
#3 Line # 147: : Why so few samples (n=2)? These experiments are quick and diagnostic of the mineral phases present in the sample. Given the level of effort on other aspects of the study, I am curious why the authors did not run a full suite of experiments on multiple samples.
#4 Line # 207: "Nevertheless, the AF curves indicate that the samples were fully demagnetized at 60 mT, suggesting the presence of low-coercivity ferromagnetic minerals that carry the remanence."
I recommend that you state here "The composition and domain state of the magnetic material is likely a multidomain, Fe-Ti oxide titanomagnetite grains of restricted composition". Also mention that the AF demagnetization data reveals, based on the MDF (medium destructive field) of the NRM at about 20 mT is consistent with MD grain size (see also comment #7 below).
#5 . Line # 238: The only comment is that the authors did a good job here demonstrating the repeatability of the AMS data from the diamagnetic materials. Good job.
#6 Line # 261: The optical properties of the halite grains are consistent with strain i.e., deformation of the crystal structure of the grains. The anhydrate grains are elongate essentially mimicking the fabric of the halite matrix of the salt deposit. The anhydrate grains likely grew under an applied stress and mimic the fabric. I recommend that the authors explore this possibility.
In addition, the authors state "In many cases these crystals appear along the edges of the halite crystals and mimic their original shapes, suggesting that the anhydrite corroded the halite crystals. Most importantly, there are clusters of needle-like anhydrite with a strong preferred alignment (Figure 5b)."
The statement that the "anhydrite corroded the halite crystals" is only one possible explanation. The orientation of the grains is more likely a response to stress (flowing salt) with grain growth occurring in low-stress orientations. I recommend that this section be expanded to discuss alternative interpretations.
#7 Line # 300: Origin of the magnetite grains - a likely source is aeolian dust grains of multidomain size (20 microns or larger ) blown into the deposit. The authors should include a brief discussion of the a likely source of the oxide grains. My guess is that the grains are aeolian in origin. Also see #4; Magnetic experiments show a MD grain size. Optically do you see any oxide crystal?
#8 Line # 319: I recommend that the authors make a clear statement that the AMS fabrics are carried by the CaSO4 elongate grains. You might want to reiterate the AMS consistency argument from #5 above. As this section reads, the authors hint at CaSO4 as the fabric origin but never actually say it clearly here and again on Line 358 (were it is stated).
#9 Line # 360: It might be interesting to do an experiment or at least recommend an experiment that measures the AMS fabric and rock magnetic properties of synthetic anhydrite mush. The material is deformed and you asses the fabrics.
Overall, this manuscript presents an excellent discussion of the caveats of using AMS fabrics in diamagnetic materials. The reviewer suggests that this manuscript should be published after only very minor revision. The suggestions attached are provided in the hopes that they will improve the overall quality of the manuscript and clarify a few points throughout the text. I have annotated the manuscript with numerous comments throughout. Please see the attached PDF files.
Comments for author File: Comments.pdf
Author Response
Summary
This manuscript presents results that bear on the interpretation of the AMS fabrics in diamagnetic materials with and without shape anisotropy. They conclude that despite the weak diamagnetic response (-13.3 × 10-6 SI) and the low degree of anisotropy the AMS results are reliable and reproducible, reflecting an intrinsic anisotropy within the rocksalts. This is a significant finding for the AMS community and should be highlighted by the editor.
We thank the reviewer for the support and review
General Comments
The #'s are keyed to the attached annotated manuscript.
Line 27: "Salt structures (diapirs) are generally associated with large amounts of deformation as the rheological properties of rocksalts enable them to flow under gravitational and tectonic forces [1,2]"
Change force to stress. The salt diapirs are flowing due to an applied stress such as tectonic, buoyancy, sediment facies distribution, and other processes. All these process impart or react to forces over an area; that is a stress.
Done: we changed to stress.
#1 Line # 51: "Anhydrite and carnallite forms orthorhombic crystals, and are expected to have AMS co-axial to the crystallographic axes."
This statement bears further explanation. By analogy, in the Fe-Ti oxide magnetite phases; the body diagonal of the cubic crystal serves as the easy axis of magnetization. Please explain "co-axial to the crystallographic axes". Is this parallel to the crystal axis, i.e., a, b, c axis of the orthorhombic crystal? If so, all axis are of different lengths. Which axis does the AMS fabric align with; K1-max, K2-int, K3-min? Why??? Please elaborate.
Done: we edited the text. For orthorhombic and hexagonal crystals, the easy magnetization direction is generally sub-parallel to the crystal symmetry axis, i.e. c-axis.
#2 Line # 113: : This is an instrumentation settings question. The authors say "magnetic field of 750 A/m (peak field) and frequency of 1220 Hz". This seems to be a bit high. Standard settings are 200 A/m, 976 Hz. Please explain.
Reply: We conducted several tests and choose these settings because (1) the results were more significant with a lower signal to noise ratio. (2) because we inferred that ferro/ferromagnetic contribution to the AMS is negligible we could increase the induced field without worrying on the non-linear effects.
#3 Line # 147: : Why so few samples (n=2)? These experiments are quick and diagnostic of the mineral phases present in the sample. Given the level of effort on other aspects of the study, I am curious why the authors did not run a full suite of experiments on multiple samples.
Reply: We choose a representative sample from each sampling site. As the susceptibility values were pretty similar between the samples we thought it is enough, aiming not to destroy many samples.
#4 Line # 207: "Nevertheless, the AF curves indicate that the samples were fully demagnetized at 60 mT, suggesting the presence of low-coercivity ferromagnetic minerals that carry the remanence."
I recommend that you state here "The composition and domain state of the magnetic material is likely a multidomain, Fe-Ti oxide titanomagnetite grains of restricted composition". Also mention that the AF demagnetization data reveals, based on the MDF (medium destructive field) of the NRM at about 20 mT is consistent with MD grain size (see also comment #7 below).
#5 . Line # 238: The only comment is that the authors did a good job here demonstrating the repeatability of the AMS data from the diamagnetic materials. Good job.
Thanks.
#6 Line # 261: The optical properties of the halite grains are consistent with strain i.e., deformation of the crystal structure of the grains. The anhydrate grains are elongate essentially mimicking the fabric of the halite matrix of the salt deposit. The anhydrate grains likely grew under an applied stress and mimic the fabric. I recommend that the authors explore this possibility.
In addition, the authors state "In many cases these crystals appear along the edges of the halite crystals and mimic their original shapes, suggesting that the anhydrite corroded the halite crystals. Most importantly, there are clusters of needle-like anhydrite with a strong preferred alignment (Figure 5b)."
The statement that the "anhydrite corroded the halite crystals" is only one possible explanation. The orientation of the grains is more likely a response to stress (flowing salt) with grain growth occurring in low-stress orientations. I recommend that this section be expanded to discuss alternative interpretations.
Reply: We agree with the comment. In order to have some more robust insights regarding micro deformation in the rock salts we added results of gamma irradiated photomicrographs (new Figure 8). We accordingly revised this chapter and deleted the mentioned sentence.
#7 Line # 300: Origin of the magnetite grains - a likely source is aeolian dust grains of multidomain size (20 microns or larger ) blown into the deposit. The authors should include a brief discussion of the a likely source of the oxide grains. My guess is that the grains are aeolian in origin. Also see #4; Magnetic experiments show a MD grain size. Optically do you see any oxide crystal?
Reply: We didn’t find any Fe-oxides in the SEM. Although the presence of ferromagnetic phase is evident by AF demagnetization experiments, the samples has no NRM and the contribution of these phase to the AMS in negligible. For this we see no point to add a deep discussion regarding the origin of the ferromagnetic phase. Nevertheless, these rocks are lake sediments (the Sedom lagoon in the Dead Sea region), which sample a large region and also trap Saharan dust and thus can be the source of magnetic minerals.
#8 Line # 319: I recommend that the authors make a clear statement that the AMS fabrics are carried by the CaSO4 elongate grains. You might want to reiterate the AMS consistency argument from #5 above. As this section reads, the authors hint at CaSO4 as the fabric origin but never actually say it clearly here and again on Line 358 (were it is stated).
Reply: Here we just discuss the reliability of the measurements. In the Discussion section we state clearly that the AMS is carried by the anhydrite (lines 331-332).
#9 Line # 360: It might be interesting to do an experiment or at least recommend an experiment that measures the AMS fabric and rock magnetic properties of synthetic anhydrite mush. The material is deformed and you asses the fabrics.
Done: We appreciate this idea and include this suggestion in lines 333-334 for further study.
Overall, this manuscript presents an excellent discussion of the caveats of using AMS fabrics in diamagnetic materials. The reviewer suggests that this manuscript should be published after only very minor revision. The suggestions attached are provided in the hopes that they will improve the overall quality of the manuscript and clarify a few points throughout the text. I have annotated the manuscript with numerous comments throughout. Please see the attached PDF files.
Thanks
Reviewer: Petronis
Round 2
Reviewer 1 Report
The authors have addressed all the concerns raised.