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Ion Charge Influence on the Molecular Structure of Polyethylene Terephthalate Films after Irradiation with Swift Heavy Ions

Crystals 2020, 10(6), 479; https://doi.org/10.3390/cryst10060479
by Adil Z. Tuleushev 1, Maxim V. Zdorovets 2,3,4,*, Artem L. Kozlovskiy 2,3 and Fiona E. Harrison 2
Reviewer 1:
Reviewer 2: Anonymous
Reviewer 3: Anonymous
Crystals 2020, 10(6), 479; https://doi.org/10.3390/cryst10060479
Submission received: 29 April 2020 / Revised: 30 May 2020 / Accepted: 3 June 2020 / Published: 4 June 2020

Round 1

Reviewer 1 Report

The paper describes the possibility to modify the PET structure by ion beam irradiation. An X-ray diffraction dataset is used to support the discussion.

The work is deeply technical and difficultly accessible for the general reader. Figure 1 is of difficult interpretation in the present version (a few suggestions about are reported in the following) and only the first column of figure 2 provides any information.

The reference [2] is reported several time and therefore is essential for the interpretation/understanding of the present work (i.e. line 69: As shown in [2]).

In my opinion, these data are complementary to those reported in the reference [2] submitted to the same journal and therefore I suggest to the author and editor to consider to merge the two works.

 

In the following some comment:

  • Line 117: clear anisotropy in the intensity of the peak at 2θ=26°, with a greater anisotropy at the higher flux à what is the meaning of “greater anisotropy”
  • line 126: This is despite the increases in both ion charge and flux, and consequent increase in  energy density in the latent tracks. à what is the meaning of “energy density in the latent tracks”
  • The author uses the word flux instead of fluence when the talk about of ions/cm2, this is not properly correct. I suggest the change
  • Line 77-80: concerning the comparison of the effect induced by Xe and Ar. Could the different masses and therefore the different amount of induced defects affect the observed effect?
  • Fig1: substitute titles instead of letters and numbers and it is impossible to read the scales (low resolution). Add some marker/ arrows directly into the graph in order to help the reader in the data interpretation

Author Response

The authors would like to thank the reviewer for the comment. We have tried to make the introduction and the experimental part much more detailed, with a large number of detailed explanations that can help a general reader perceive our problem statement and the experiment itself. Figure 1 is divided into component parts according to the text, and the scale is increased for better perception.

Our previous paper, which has the citation of [30] in the paper under discussion, was accepted for publication on 25.05.2020 with the title "Induced Spirals in Polyethylene Terephthalate Films Irradiated with Ar Ions with an Energy of 70 MeV" and the DOI number https://doi.org/10.3390/cryst10060427. In that paper, we reported the appearance of a new type of structural ordering of the spiral type with an increase in the irradiation exposure and the beginning of overlap of latent tracks along with cylindrical type ordering for single latent tracks.

In this paper, we used the found induced helical conformations as a tool for studying the effect of swift heavy ion charge on the post-radiation state of the molecular structure of the irradiated PET film, which is scientifically different from the purpose of the second work.

 

Here, anisotropy refers to the change in the intensity of the diffraction maximum at θ=26°, when sweeping in a circular azimuthal angle φ=0-2π.  In order to make the meaning of this term clearer, we have introduced Figure 1 in the paper, which shows the X-ray diffraction pattern for the pristine PET film. It shows that the peak intensity at θ=26° has a constant value at all angles φ=0-2π. In contrast to Figure 1, Figure 2C shows that the peak intensity at θ=26° changes depending on the azimuthal angle φ, which directly indicates anisotropy in the intensity of the reflection. 

 

In Line 117, we qualitatively summarized the results of our experiment, bearing in mind that the increase in fluence in general leads to an increase in azimuthal changes in the peak intensity at θ=26°, that is, its anisotropy. 

This is despite the increases in both ion charge and fluence, and consequent increase in energy density in the latent tracks. We deleted this phrase. Now this is: This is despite the increases in both ion charge and fluence.

The authors made changes to the text of the manuscript according to the reviewer's comment.

The authors would like to thank the reviewer for the question, the answer to which may become the goal of one of the works in future. 

Figure 1 is corrected. The reviewer's suggestion to use markers and arrows in the drawings in order to help a reader understand the material presented has been accepted where it was convenient.

Author Response File: Author Response.doc

Reviewer 2 Report

Manuscript ID: crystals-804118

The Authors report experimental results concerning induced ordering in polyethylene terephthalate (PET) films irradiated with 147 MeV Kr ions being in three different initial charges of 13+, 14+, and 15+.  Five irradiation fluxes of 5x1010, 7.5x1010, 1x1011, 2.5x1011 and 5x1011 ions/cm2 were used in the study. Utilizing the X-ray diffraction method the Authors obtained the X-ray diffraction patterns of  PET polymer films and azimuthal variations in the intensity of diffraction reflections. Authors show that post-irradiation structural changes in PET films are affected by the initial charge of the irradiating heavy ions and lead to overlapping latent tracks. The experimental results are original and are compared with other studies of this group. The interpretation seems to be a little vague. The title and abstract sufficiently describe the results presented. The results may be cited in the future and are potentially interesting for the physicists and chemical engineers who read the Crystals journal. Thus the paper deserves publication in the Crystals journal. However, I have a few suggestions for improving the manuscript, which should be given serious consideration by the Authors.

(1) I guess that some of the readers are not familiar with the polyethylene terephthalate Hence, the schematic view of its structure and the electron configuration in the ground electronic state would be helpful.

(2) On what basis was the statement in lines 37-39 written?

(3) Why was the thickness of 12 μm of A PET film chosen?

(4) Line 52: IS” 84Kr ions with an energy of 147 MeV were chosen, so as to permit clean ion beams at three different ion charges,” Could the Authors explain it in detail?

(5) In general, the experimental section is laconic (lines 50-57). From such a concise description, the reader will learn nothing.

(6) Figure 1 is not clear even when enlarged. I could not read what is on the axes and what the individual curves look like. The Authors should think about reprocessing this diagram so that it is readable (maybe dividing it into several charts).

(7) The empty spaces in the diagrams of figure 2 also give no information. The reader would like to see the individual curves in detail.

(8) Can the Authors estimate the residual electric fields of latent tracks (line 129)?

(9) On what basis was the statement in lines 129-131 written?

(10) Schematic drawings of the structures of emerging rotamers would allow understanding the interpretation of the results.

(11) Did the Authors estimate any experimental errors?

Author Response

 

2.3 Study of the PET structure

Studies of structural changes in the irradiated PET films were performed by X-ray diffraction (D8 Advance Eco, Bruker, Karlsruhe, Germany) in the Bregg-Brentano geometry (coupled TwoTheta/Theta) in the angular range of 2θ=3-30°, step 0.01° and azimuthal sweep φ=0-2π in increments of 10°, X-ray radiation Cu-Kα, λ = 1.54 Å, Voltage – 40 kV, Current – 20 mA, spectrum acquisition time 2 s. Each of the X-ray images presented in this work contains 37 slices where slice 1 coincides with slice 37. This φ overlap was performed to confirm the absence of changes in the molecular structure of the test sample during a 360-degree survey.

Analysis of the degree of crystallinity as well as the phase composition of the initial sample was determined using the TOPAS v.5.0 (Diffraction Suite, Bruker AXS GmbH 2014) software code based on the Rietveld method [41]. A schematic layout of the survey geometry is shown in Figure 1b. The X-ray diffraction pattern of the pristine PET sample in a φ=0-2π sweep is shown in Figure 1c, where two individual regions can be distinguished: the amorphous part of the PET at 2θ=3-15° and the crystalline part characterized by two diffraction reflections (-110) at 2θ=23° and (100) at 2θ=26°.

We note that the coordinate φ is polar: the constant intensity of the peak for all angles φ in Figure 1c demonstrates the polar isotropy of the test sample. The X-ray diffractometry of chain molecules has its own nomenclature: the direction along the texture is called the "meridian" and is indicated by a red line in X-ray diffraction images, while the direction perpendicular is called the "equator" and is indicated by a blue line [42]. For this reason, X-ray slices with angles 0º, 180º and 360º in Figure 1c are highlighted in red and coincide with the direction of the meridian, and X-ray slices with angles 90º and 270º are indicated in blue and coincide with the direction of the equator.

We believe that the material of the published article [30] provides an answer about the justification of the statement made on lines 37-39. 

The authors would like to thank the reviewer for the comment. Figure 1 is divided into component parts according to the text, and the scale is increased for better perception.

The authors would like to thank the reviewer for the comment. Figure 2 is brought to a single y-axis scale for a better understanding of structural changes.

X-ray diffraction, which we use to determine the post-radiation structure of the PET film, cannot give information about the magnitude of the active electric fields in the zone of latent tracks. The ordering of the carboxyl benzene subunits are acting only as nanoindicators of the gradient of the electric field.

Figure 8 shows schematically a visualisation of the process of induced ordering in the residual electric field. Thin blue horizontal lines indicate the axes of chain molecules, lying mainly along the direction of movement of the film during its production. As mentioned above (Section 2.1), in the amorphous phase of the pristine film, benzene-carboxyl units are oriented in a random manner around the axes of chain molecules, as shown in Figure 8a by different projections of benzene rings with carboxyl units.

   

a)

b)

 

Figure 8. Schematic representation of the orientation of benzene-carboxyl units of the amorphous phase of the PET film: a) pristine; b) in the residual electric field of the latent track.

 

Figure 8b shows the rotational ordering of benzene-carboxyl subunits under the influence of the cylindrical residual electric field E (red arrow) of the latent track. These units are bound within the chain molecule by covalent forces and are not able to make linear movements (except for slow creep-like movements [30]), but, being linked to the chain by σ-hinges, they can rotate around the axis of the molecule. The combination of kinematic restrictions and rotation leads to the benzene-carboxyl units tending to move so as to maximise the projections of the dipole moments of the carboxyl groups onto the direction of the electric field vector E. This results in the carboxyl groups becoming generally oriented in the same direction, as shown in Figure 8b.

The appearance of helicoid structures occurs through self-assembly of repeat units of PET [47]. Another example of self-assembly of chain molecules with the formation of nanopores is shown in [48]

The experimental error in the case of X-ray radiography of maximum intensities at 2θ=23° and 2θ=26° was no more than 100-150 cps, which is no more than 1%. 

Author Response File: Author Response.doc

Reviewer 3 Report


This is not an research article ... The manuscript looks like a technical report on one particular experiment without any motivation, analysis of the available literature, it is not clear what has been done before, there is no comparison with other data, why Kr ions, and so on, and so on. ..
A lot of work on swift heavy ion effects on polyethylene has been done in GANIL, GSI, Japan, Dubna, but  in this manuscript there are only 14 references, most of which are more than 20 years old ... This makes it difficult to understand whether this study is a hot topic or not ...
My recommendation is a very serious revision of Introduction part  and discussion of the results (which is actually absent)

Author Response

We do not agree with the reviewer's opinion that the presented manuscript is a technical report, since we are providing results that have not been published anywhere before. In our experiment, it is shown that the initial charge of swift heavy ions has a qualitative effect on the post-radiational molecular structure of the polymer under study.

However, we considered this remark and did our best to show more clearly the scientific nature of our manuscript, therefore, we significantly changed the presentation of our results, starting with the title, expanded introduction with an indication of the latest achievements of the leading scientific centers (GANIL, GSI, Japan, Dubna) in the study of latent tracks in the polymer films, indicating the motivation and relevance of this study. The description of the experimental part has also been significantly expanded.

In total, we consider all changes and additions made to the original manuscript constitute a very serious revision and hope that the reviewer will agree.

Author Response File: Author Response.doc

Round 2

Reviewer 1 Report

The authors implemented several changes improving significantly the quality of the manuscript.

 

The paper can be published in the present form.

Reviewer 2 Report

The authors did hard work to improve the article
and basically responded to all my remarks.
Therefore, the article is suitable for publication.

Reviewer 3 Report

I am quite satisfied as the authors took into account all the previous comments. This  revised version can be ACCEPTED as it is.

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