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Telemedicine in the Management of Patients with Rheumatic Disease during COVID-19 Pandemic: Incidence of Psychiatric Disorders and Fibromyalgia in Patients with Rheumatoid Arthritis and Psoriatic Arthritis

Int. J. Environ. Res. Public Health 2022, 19(6), 3161; https://doi.org/10.3390/ijerph19063161
by Rosario Foti 1, Giorgio Amato 1, Ylenia Dal Bosco 1, Antonio Longo 2, Caterina Gagliano 2, Raffaele Falsaperla 3, Roberta Foti 1, Sergio Speranza 1, Francesco De Lucia 1 and Elisa Visalli 1,*
Reviewer 1: Anonymous
Reviewer 2: Anonymous
Int. J. Environ. Res. Public Health 2022, 19(6), 3161; https://doi.org/10.3390/ijerph19063161
Submission received: 25 January 2022 / Revised: 1 March 2022 / Accepted: 2 March 2022 / Published: 8 March 2022
(This article belongs to the Special Issue Telemedicine in the Era of COVID-19)

Round 1

Reviewer 1 Report

This paper proposes a telemedicine in the management of patients with rheumatic disease during Covid-19 pandemic. Concretely, the incidence of psychiatric disorders (depression and anxiety) and fibromyalgia in patients with rheumatoid arthritis and psoriatic arthritis is evaluated. Moreover, a telemedicine in the management of these patients using indexes (scales) that can be corrected by the clinimetric questionnaires is proposed.

This paper is important for the clinical management of patients with rheumatic disease during Covid-19 pandemic. However, there are some insufficient explanations, that should be added and/or corrected, as shown in the followings.

(1) About the evaluation of patients with rheumatic disease using RAID and PSAID (3. Results)

There are no correlations between scores of RAID, PSAID using in the telemedicine and those of DAS28, DASPSA using in the face-to-face medicine after detected Covid-19 pandemic. If this is true, are RAID and PSAID considered reasonable for evaluating patients with rheumatoid arthritis and psoriatic arthritis? If so, the reason should be clearly described.

(2) About the clinical management using telemedicine (2. Materials and Methods)

・In section 2 (Materials and Methods), the clinical management for patients with rheumatic disease is difficult to understand, because the telemedicine and the face-to-face medicine are described together. Indexes (scores) of telemedicine and those of face-to-face approach should be shown separately.

・Moreover, the conditions separating the telemedicine and the face-to-face approach should be described, if possible.

(3) The following expressions, such as abbreviations, should be reconsidered.

・For example, if rheumatoid arthritis is expressed as RA, psoriatic arthritis as PsA, in line111- line136, AR→RA and AP→PsA.

・line127- line136 and Table 1, STAIⅠ→ STAI-S ?, STAIⅡ→ STAI-T ?

・line18; fibromyalgia → fibromyalgia (FM)

・line38; RCTs → remote communication technologies(RCTs) ?

etc.

Author Response

 

Dear Editor and Reviewers

In our review we have revised english language and style and clarified research design.

 In particular we have added and corrected as follows.

(1) About the evaluation of patients with rheumatic disease using RAID and PSAID (3. Results) There are no correlations between scores of RAID, PSAID using in the telemedicine and those of DAS28, DASPSA using in the face-to-face medicine after detected Covid-19 pandemic. If this is true, are RAID and PSAID considered reasonable for evaluating patients with rheumatoid arthritis and psoriatic arthritis? If so, the reason should be clearly described.

Regard this consideration,  we reviewed the role in clinical practice regarding use of  RAID and PSAID and supporting our result with literature that has been included in discussion.

 (2) About the clinical management using telemedicine (2. Materials and Methods)

・In section 2 (Materials and Methods), the clinical management for patients with rheumatic disease is difficult to understand, because the telemedicine and the face-to-face medicine are described together. Indexes (scores) of telemedicine and those of face-to-face approach should be shown separately.・

In section 2 (Material and Method) we have described the clinical management for patients with rheumatic disease during pandemic period which provided for  use of  telemedicine and in particular the use of questionnaires described.   Face to  face medicine was used only for patients who had disease flare  assessed by telemedicine. During the visit were used composite clinimetric indices such as  DAS 28 e DAPSA.  

Moreover, the conditions separating the telemedicine and the face-to-face approach should be described, if possible.

 Face to  face medicine was used only for patients who had disease flare  assessed by telemedicine and face to face approach has been described

 

(3) The following expressions, such as abbreviations, should be reconsidered.

・For example, if rheumatoid arthritis is expressed as RA, psoriatic arthritis as PsA, in line111- line136, AR→RA and AP→PsA.

・line127- line136 and Table 1, STAIⅠ→ STAI-S ?, STAIⅡ→ STAI-T ? This data has been corrected

・line18; fibromyalgia → fibromyalgia (FM) This data has been corrected

 

・line38; RCTs → remote communication technologies(RCTs) ? This data has been corrected

 

etc.

 the manuscript  was reviewed and corrected

Author Response File: Author Response.docx

Reviewer 2 Report

improve and revise english language in the abstract and introduction sections (lines 16,17, 37,38).

line 72 tsDMARDS ( transitional synthetic disease modifying agents).

is there an open name for the VAS pain scale ( line 102).

 

results section:

please revise RA and PsA abbreviations, (AR and AP has been used instead in some places in the results section, line 111, 114 and others, unless you are referring to something else).

capitalize (first) in line 111

please report differences in numerical and statistical significance . it is not very clear from the results to the conclusion section whether the comparison was made between psA and RA patients or each group compared to the pre-pandemic stats? make sure to clarify.

results section, second paragraph line 113, what was the pre-pandemic numbers in jan and feb? can you specify the date range, can you extend to 3 months since the pandemic results were based on 3 month duration (march-may).)

please specify the duration in which the pre pandemic items were investigated? 

discussion:

line 177: rheumatoid arthritis

 line 183-185, here the comparison is between RA and PsA rather than RA pre and during pandemic and PsA pre and during pandemic.

 

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overall great idea,

in table 1, please provide the pre-pandemic results as well, and clarify the duration in which those test were done.

please improve the reporting of the results section and reflect in the discussion and conclusion. 

Author Response

 

Dear Editor and Reviewers

In our review we have revised english language and style and clarified research design.

 In particular we have added and corrected as follows.

 

 

  • Improve and revise english language in the abstract and introduction sections (lines 16,17, 37,38); This data has been corrected

line 72 tsDMARDS ( transitional synthetic disease modifying agents). This data has been corrected

is there an open name for the VAS pain scale ( line 102). This data has been corrected

 

Manuscript has been reviewed and corrected

  • Results section:

please revise RA and PsA abbreviations, (AR and AP has been used instead in some places in the results section, line 111, 114 and others, unless you are referring to something else). This data has been corrected

 

Capitalize (first) in line 111 this data has been corrected

 

please report differences in numerical and statistical significance . it is not very clear from the results to the conclusion section whether the comparison was made between psA and RA patients or each group compared to the pre-pandemic stats? make sure to clarify.

 

pre pandemic period in which items were investigated was January 11th 2020 to February 11th 2020 and  items during pandemic was investigated  from March 11th 2020 to May 11th 2020.

During this period were collected data on Fibromyalgia, RAID, PSAID, DAS 28 e DAPSA with comparison between Fibromyalgia Pre e during pandemia, RAID and DS 28  pre e during pandemia and  PSAID and DAPSA pre e during pandemia. The results section has been modified.

 

results section, second paragraph line 113, what was the pre-pandemic numbers in jan and feb? can you specify the date range, can you extend to 3 months since the pandemic results were based on 3 month duration (march-may).)

pre pandemic period in which items were investigated was January 11th 2020 to February 11th 2020, items during pandemic was investigated  from March 11th 2020 to May 11th 2020.

please specify the duration in which the pre pandemic items were investigated?  Pre Pandemic items were investigated from January to February 2020.

  • discussion: line 177: rheumatoid arthritis

 line 183-185, here the comparison is between RA and PsA rather than RA pre and during pandemic and PsA pre and during the pandemic.

Here the comparison is between RA and PsA during the pandemic, no data on anxiety and depression are available in the pre-pandemic period.

 

overall great idea,

in table 1, please provide the pre-pandemic results as well, and clarify the duration in which those tests were done.

In table 1 only data relating to telemedicine during the pandemic period were reported ( FIRST, STAI and BDI). In the pre-pandemic period were collected data on Fibromyalgia, RAID, PSAID, DAS 28 e DAPSA with the comparison between Fibromyalgia Pre e during pandemic ( values reported in the results). Comparison between RAID and DAS 28 during pandemic and  PSAID and DAPSA during pandemic were reported in figure 1. Comparison between RAID and DAS 28 pre-pandemic and  PSAID and DAPSA during pandemic were reported following (Can another figure be included in the manuscript?).

 

In AR patients, a significant correlation was found between RAID and DAS 28 (r=0.572, p<0.001)

 

 

In PA, patients, a significant correlation was found between PSAID and DAPSA (r=0.231, p=0.008)

 

 

 

please improve the reporting of the results section and reflect in the discussion and conclusion. 

The manuscript has been reviewed and improved

 

 

Author Response File: Author Response.docx

Round 2

Reviewer 1 Report

This paper proposes a telemedicine in the management of patients with rheumatic disease during Covid-19 pandemic. The incidence of psychiatric disorders (depression and anxiety) and fibromyalgia in patients with rheumatoid arthritis and psoriatic arthritis is evaluated. Then, a telemedicine in the management of these patients using indexes (RAID, PSAID, etc.) that can be corrected by the clinimertic questionnaires is proposed.

The proposed telemedicine seems to be useful especially during Covid-19 pandemic, and this paper is acceptable. However, it is advised to correct the careless mistakes such as the followings.

 

For example,

・line 83 and line 230 ; PsAID → PSAID

・line 110 ; as DAS28 and (DAPSA) → as DAS28 and DAPSA

・line 152 ; PSAI score → PSAID score

・line 158 ; in in PsA patients → in PsA patients

 

Author Response

Dear Editor and Reviewer

Thank you for your comments and suggestions. We have revised and corrected the reported  careless mistakes  and in particular:

line 83 and line 230 ; PsAID → PSAID

line 110 ; as DAS28 and (DAPSA) → as DAS28 and DAPSA

line 152 ; PSAI score → PSAID score

line 158 ; in in PsA patients → in PsA patients

 

Kinds regards

Dott ssa Visalli Elisa

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