Analysis of Lipid Metabolism in Adipose Tissue and Liver of Chinese Soft-Shelled Turtle Pelodiscus sinensis During Hibernation
, Yunfei You 2, Junliang Wan 2, Huaiyi Zhu 2, Kou Peng 1, Zhenying Hu 2, Qi Zeng 1, Beijuan Hu 1, Junhua Wang 1, Jingjing Duan 2,* and Yijiang Hong 1,*Round 1
Reviewer 1 Report
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Reviewer 2 Report
Comments and Suggestions for AuthorsAnalysis of Lipid Metabolism in Adipose Tissue and Liver of Chinese Soft-Shelled Turtle Pelodiscus sinensis During Hibernation
Dear Authors,
The manuscript is very interesting, and very well prepared. Minor revision is required from point of view edition of text, order of sections in manuscript, more precise description of Statistical analysis subsection and some corrections in References section.
Below I add some suggestions helpful in this process:
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Maybe better is to use capital letters in case of title:
Analysis of Lipid Metabolism in Adipose Tissue and Liver of Chinese Soft-Shelled Turtle Pelodiscus sinensis During Hibernation
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In text of manuscript is P. sinensis, lack of italics.
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Space required after tolerance and before [9].
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Order of sections must be changed, Materials and Methods after Discussion.
11. Introduction.
22. Results (numeration of subsections must be also adapted).
33. Discussion.
44. Materials and Methods (numeration of subsections must be also adapted).
55. Conclusions.
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Information about normality of distribution in case of each seasonal treatment required (Shapiro-Wilk’s test) and homogeneity of variance conducted by Levene’s test.
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In case of significant differences post-hoc test is required. Tukey’s test is the best choice in this case.
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p-value instead of P-value must be used (sample from population).
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Description in form of sentence can be added for asterixis applied in charts N-U.
I.e.:** Differences between seasons significant at p<0.01.
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P. sinensis
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References section
Doi links required on the end of each reference.
Number of volume must be also italicized.
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Abbreviations in case of Journal’s name are required.
Author Response
Dear Reviewer,
We would like to express our heartfelt gratitude for your valuable suggestions and comments. We have included our responses in the attached document. Please see the attachment.
Author Response File: Author Response.pdf
