Raman Spectroscopic Algorithms for Assessing Virulence in Oral Candidiasis: The Fight-or-Flight Response
Round 1
Reviewer 1 Report
Comments and Suggestions for AuthorsThis paper is a very well written report on a comprehensive study of Raman spectroscopy and imaging of oral fungi. The authors explored a range of possible markers and despite some setbacks eventually found a useful relationship that could have diagnostic value and that is relevant because it relates to pathogenicity.
Only minor revisions are needed.
1. Please include a brief statement about the limitations of the study not already mentioned and point out directions for future work, e.g. (1) comparing the 3 Raman parameters, RGα3/α6, RCyt, and RClys, before and after various treatments (such as topical or systemic antifungal medicines, biocides etc), (2) comparing the 3 Raman parameters for C. albicans from health subjects with no oral fungal disease, and (3) comparing local microenvironments, e.g. fungi from dentures/appliances versus from the tongue or other oral mucosal sites of infection.
2. In the first paragraph of the introduction, please revise this sentence as follows: "In contrast, standard Candida strains are isolated and long-term cultured without exposure to external factors or stessors, so they exist in a conspicuously stress-free state."
3. In table 2 for sample 4 please correct the spelling from C alhicans to C. albicans.
4. In the references, there are superfluous numbers at the start of each reference that can be removed.
Author Response
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Reviewer 2 Report
Comments and Suggestions for AuthorsThe article “Raman spectroscopic algorithms for assessing virulence in oral candidiasis: The fight-or-flight response” is interesting. I have some considerations to make in order to improve the manuscript and attract its reading
- Title is not very appropriate for a research article
- Concisely outline the objectives and conclusion
- The manuscript should be restructured, differentiating between material and method, results and discussion. The discussion is not consistent with the results section. Results and discussion are mixed.
- There are paragraphs that can be eliminated, for example some related to reference 7. It is not necessary to explain findings from previous research. - The authors should control self-citations, for example 7, 15, 34….
- The 2nd and 3rd paragraph of point 4.1 is a major limitation of the study.
- Where do the 8 patients with candidiasis come from? Do you have the permission of an Ethics Committee?
Thank you very much
Author Response
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Round 2
Reviewer 2 Report
Comments and Suggestions for AuthorsThe answers are partially relevant.
Thank you very much