Emotional Experience and Depth of Reflection: Teacher Education Students’ Analyses of Functional and Dysfunctional Video Scenarios
Round 1
Reviewer 1 Report
Comments and Suggestions for AuthorsThe study is well conceived and a detailed report is attached
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Author Response
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Reviewer 2 Report
Comments and Suggestions for AuthorsThe article is very interesting and sound. There is substance in the theoretical framework, the purpose of this study is clearly outlined and the abstract highlights what the study found. The results are presented in a consistent order and the limitations are well described.
However, there are a few points in the article which needs refinement and/or additional information, such as:
- Introduction:
- The introduction is well supported; however it needs more information regarding the subject that this research focuses on. This is of great importance because the readers must understand what subject this is referring to. In the way that it is now, it is very vague, and I believe that, for example, videos of a science class may be different than videos of a physical education class.
- Methods:
- Can you please provide more information regarding the reflection task and the questionnaire provided to the participants?
- Page 7, line 323: I believe that calling the participants “participants” is more humanising than calling them “sample”
- Can you please provide more information regarding the videos and what behaviours were being analysed?
- Discussion:
- The discussion is very sound. I believe, however, that more emphasis should be given to the specific subject, as I feel that while reading the manuscript this is somewhat missing.
- Inconsistencies:
- References. The references are not always written in the same reference. For example: sometimes, citations in parethesis of two authors appear as “Lenkse & Lohse-Bossenz, 2023” and other times appear as “Lenkse and Lohse-Bossenz, 2023”.
- Revise the manuscript for passive voice. It is better writing to use active voice, rather than passive voice.
Author Response
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