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Grazing Management Targets for Tangolagrass Pastures

Agriculture 2022, 12(2), 279; https://doi.org/10.3390/agriculture12020279
by Nemora Guliane Mocelin 1, Daniel Schmitt 1,*, Guilherme Doneda Zanini 2, Pedro Antonio Garzón Camacho 1 and André Fischer Sbrissia 1
Reviewer 1: Anonymous
Reviewer 2: Anonymous
Agriculture 2022, 12(2), 279; https://doi.org/10.3390/agriculture12020279
Submission received: 11 January 2022 / Revised: 7 February 2022 / Accepted: 10 February 2022 / Published: 16 February 2022

Round 1

Reviewer 1 Report

The manuscript "Grazing management targets for tangolagrass pastures" shows dry matter accumulation and the nutritional quality results of a tangolagrass pasture with different defoliation managements. The work is well written and meets the standards of a scientific work.

Some comments on the text are:

Line 29-30: Review the correct use of parentheses

Line 75: Table 1. Delete line under February

Line 77: Table 2. Add under the table meaning of the abbreviations. Soil analysis methods should be mentioned in the table or text.

Line 120: TPD. This abbreviation has apparently not been mentioned before in the text.

Line 140: DM ha-1 d. Add the -1 to d

Line 151: Remove line under TDP.

Line 178: Table 5. Delete line under NDF

Lines 94-96: In determining the yield components (leaves, pseudostem, stem, dead material),  stem+pseudostem are added together as one component. From the morphological point of view the components are leaves, formed by lamina (blade) and sheath, plus stem. Apparently in this work it is used as a synonym leaves and laminae and sheath is included as part of stem. This aspect should be better explained. Additionally, the samples to determine these components were taken at ground level. This represents the total biomass, but not what is potentially consumed by the animals. This aspect I believe should also be considered in the discussion, since sampling at "grazing high" could generate different results

Author Response

The manuscript "Grazing management targets for tangolagrass pastures" shows dry matter accumulation and the nutritional quality results of a tangolagrass pasture with different defoliation managements. The work is well written and meets the standards of a scientific work.

 

Some comments on the text are:

 

Line 29-30: Review the correct use of parentheses

Done

 

Line 75: Table 1. Delete line under February

Done

 

Line 77: Table 2. Add under the table meaning of the abbreviations. Soil analysis methods should be mentioned in the table or text.

Done

 

Line 120: TPD. This abbreviation has apparently not been mentioned before in the text.

Done

 

Line 140: DM ha-1 d. Add the -1 to d

Done

 

Line 151: Remove line under TDP.

Done

 

Line 178: Table 5. Delete line under NDF

Done

 

Lines 94-96: In determining the yield components (leaves, pseudostem, stem, dead material),  stem+pseudostem are added together as one component. From the morphological point of view the components are leaves, formed by lamina (blade) and sheath, plus stem. Apparently in this work it is used as a synonym leaves and laminae and sheath is included as part of stem. This aspect should be better explained. Additionally, the samples to determine these components were taken at ground level. This represents the total biomass, but not what is potentially consumed by the animals. This aspect I believe should also be considered in the discussion, since sampling at "grazing high" could generate different results

Done

Author Response File: Author Response.docx

Reviewer 2 Report

The presented study consists the original research results. The aim of the research was to identify pre-grazing canopy heights that do not compromise both leaf lamina production and nutritive value of tangolagrass pastures and test whether lower canopy height could decrease stolon elongation process.

In the ‘Abstact’ abbreviations should be clarified.

The ‘Introduction’ section is short and superficial. There should be more information about this grass, which is little known, and the journal Agriculture is internationally recognized.

The ‘Materials and Methods’ section

Table 2 - please explain the abbreviations below the table

Line 102-106 - separate patterns in single lines and check units. There are different in patterns and different in Fig. 2. And what does d mean?

The ‘Results’ section

Table 3 - please explain the abbreviations SEM below the table

Table 5 - confused letters denoting homologous groups in CP

The “Discussion” section

The Latin names of the cited species are necessary.

The references are properly selected but doi numbers are missing.

Author Response

The presented study consists the original research results. The aim of the research was to identify pre-grazing canopy heights that do not compromise both leaf lamina production and nutritive value of tangolagrass pastures and test whether lower canopy height could decrease stolon elongation process.

 

In the ‘Abstact’ abbreviations should be clarified.

Done

 

The ‘Introduction’ section is short and superficial. There should be more information about this grass, which is little known, and the journal Agriculture is internationally recognized.

We agree that more information about tangolagrass at the introduction section would be nice. However, scientific information about tangolagrass is very scarce. In this way, we have added a little more information about tangolagrass and added a phase relating the scarcity of information about tangolagrass.

 

The ‘Materials and Methods’ section

 

Table 2 - please explain the abbreviations below the table

Done

 

Line 102-106 - separate patterns in single lines and check units. There are different in patterns and different in Fig. 2. And what does d mean?

We are sorry, but we did not understand what it was suggested here. Anyway, we have revised the units., and d is a standard abbreviation for “days”.

 

The ‘Results’ section

 

Table 3 - please explain the abbreviations SEM below the table

Done

 

Table 5 - confused letters denoting homologous groups in CP

Actually CP was different among treatments. We have rephrased that at the discussion section for more clarity. Thanks for noticing!

 

The “Discussion” section

 

The Latin names of the cited species are necessary.

Done

 

The references are properly selected but doi numbers are missing.

We have checked some of the latest publications at Agriculture-MDPI and doi numbers are not mentioned. Thus, we ask to keep without such information just to meet the standards of the journal.

Author Response File: Author Response.docx

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