Treatment of Coal Fly Ash and Environmentally Friendly Use with Rubber in Cable Wires as Insulation Material
Round 1
Reviewer 1 Report
Dear authors,
Please consider some comments from my side:
- As presented, the English of your manuscript must be improved before resubmission. There are problems with sentence structure, verb tense, and clause construction.
- I think the figures in your manuscript are not clear enough, and there are some numbers cannot be seen clearly, especially in Figure 1, 2, 3.
- We have noticed that there was Chinese appeared in the background of Figure 1, please re-submit Figure 1. And it is recommended that you list the data of recent years in Figure 1, instead of the data before 2013.
Author Response
Response to Reviewer 1 Comments
Point 1: As presented, the English of your manuscript must be improved before resubmission. There are problems with sentence structure, verb tense, and clause construction.
Response 1: Thank you for your comment. We rechecked the manuscript and improved the English grammar of the manuscript.
Point 2: I think the figures in your manuscript are not clear enough, and there are some numbers cannot be seen clearly, especially in Figure 1, 2, 3.
Response 2: Thank you for good response, I checked the figures and changed with good clear result in Figure 1, 2, 3, 4, 5 and 6.
Point 3: We have noticed that there was Chinese appeared in the background of Figure 1, please re-submit Figure 1. And it is recommended that you list the data of recent years in Figure 1, instead of the data before 2013.
Response 3: We have changed the figure 1 as your comment and there is no Chinese appeared in the background of the figure and we separated the figure according to data.
Reviewer 2 Report
Manuscript ID: Sustainability-830298
Treatment of coal fly ash and environmentally friendly use with rubber in cables wire as insulation material
There is a lot of chaos in the technical parameters units. This needs improvement. An article file is attached. Correct it carefully. According to the rules for writing units.
Comments for author File: 
Comments.pdf
Author Response
Response to Reviewer 2 Comments
Point 1: D97=3-75 µm as use D97=3-75 m
Response 1: Thank you for your comment, this is coal fly ash small particle measurement, I measured in µm unit not in m.
Point 2: Need corrections in units.
Response 2: Thank you for your response, I have changed the units in the following line No. 176-181, 213, 214. 286 and in 341.
Point 3: Need correction in units.
Response 3: Thank you for your comments, I have corrected this mistake in units in line No. 350-371, 393, 406-425, 433, 434, 498, 511, 513, 517, 519, 524-530, 537-539, and in line No. 525.
Point 4: 20℃?
Response 4: Thank you for your nice comment, correction has been done in line No. 328.
Point 5: Need correction in unit in table 3 and in figure 8B, 8D, 8E
Response 5: Thank you for your comments, I have corrected the mistake in table 3. And in figure 8B, 8D and in figure 8E.
