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  • Yossi Levi-Belz1,* and
  • Shai Birnbaum1,2

Reviewer 1: Anonymous Reviewer 2: Myoungjin Kwon

Round 1

Reviewer 1 Report

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Comments for author File: Comments.pdf

Author Response

Thank you very much for your valuable comments!

Attached are our answers and changes following these comments (see changes in the ms -  marked in yellow)

Author Response File: Author Response.docx

Reviewer 2 Report

The six-year longitudinal study was impressive.

1. Why aren't the variables measured at all times?

2. Why didn't you enter T4's suicidal ideation in 'Interpersonal effect on depression at T4'?

3. Why didn't you enter T4's depression in 'Interpersonal effect on suicide ideation at T4'?

4. Depression in Figure 1 is between 6 and 8, which is lower than expected. This needs further discussion.

5. Please describe more about the result in the discussion. (with reference to it)

Author Response

Thank you for your valuable comments! Attached are our answers (and see changes in ms - marked in yellow)

 

Author Response File: Author Response.docx