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  • Chaohui Xu 1,
  • Xingtong Chen 2 and
  • Wei Dai 3,*

Reviewer 1: Jia Chen Reviewer 2: Cosimo Magazzino Reviewer 3: Ingrid Del Valle García Carreño

Round 1

Reviewer 1 Report

This paper studies the impact of digital transformation on environmental governance of mining enterprises, and deeply analyzes the internal mechanism of the two. This is interesting. However, the main shortcomings of the study are:

 

1）Chinese enterprises have special institutional backgrounds. It is suggested to distinguish the nature of enterprise property rights and observe whether the relationship between digital transformation and environmental governance is different between state-owned enterprises and non-state-owned enterprises.

2）In empirical analysis, we should not only analyze the relationship between explanatory variables and explained variables, but also analyze the relationship between control variables and explained variables.

3）In the robustness test, it is suggested that further test the impact of digital transformation on environmental governance of mining enterprises as a dummy variable.

4）There are few references in the past three years, so it is recommended to supplement the latest papers of this study.

5）There are some expressions are not native English, so it is suggested to edit language with professionals.

Author Response

Comments 1: Chinese enterprises have special institutional backgrounds. It is suggested to distinguish the nature of enterprise property rights and observe whether the relationship between digital transformation and environmental governance is different between state-owned enterprises and non-state-owned enterprises.

Responses and a summary of revisions:

Thank you for your suggestions. Heterogeneity analysis has been added in the paper, which considers the nature of enterprise property rights, enterprise life cycle and enterprise scale respectively.

Comments 2: In empirical analysis, we should not only analyze the relationship between explanatory variables and explained variables, but also analyze the relationship between control variables and explained variables.

Responses and a summary of revisions:

Thank you for your suggestions. In the benchmark regression analysis, the relationship between the control variables and the explained variable have been analyzed.

Comments 3: In the robustness test, it is suggested that further test the impact of digital transformation on environmental governance of mining enterprises as a dummy variable.

Responses and a summary of revisions:

Thank you for your suggestions. According to the requirements, whether the digital transformation of mining enterprises is set as a dummy variable, and the relationship between digital transformation and environmental governance is further analyzed.

Comments 4: There are few references in the past three years, so it is recommended to supplement the latest papers of this study.

Responses and a summary of revisions:

Thank you for your suggestions. In the introduction and literature review, references in the last three years have been added.

Comments 5: There are some expressions are not native English, so it is suggested to edit language with professionals.

Responses and a summary of revisions:

Thank you for your suggestions. The paper has been polished and modified by MDPI Press.

Reviewer 2 Report

The Abstract must report the aim of the study, the basic information on the sample (time span, countries analyzed), the empirical methodology used, the main findings, and the relevant policy implications. 

Introduction and Literature Review should be split into two different sections. 

The Introduction should highlight the relevance of the topic, the novelty of the results, the importance of policy implications, the sample’s choice, the methodology’s appropriateness, the data used, the contribution to the literature, and the limitations of the study. 

The literature review is partial and incomplete, and some recent and relevant contributions should be cited and discussed: i.e., 10.1016/j.retrec.2020.100947; 10.1016/j.jclepro.2020.123293; 10.1007/s11356-020-08180-x; 10.1016/j.renene.2020.11.050. 

Delete useless citations:  

The theoretical framework should be discussed more in detail. 

The estimated model must be justified in light of the literature on this specific topic. 

Descriptive statistics are absent. 

Diagnostic tests are absent. 

Robustness checks are absent. 

The results should be discussed more in detail. 

Comparisons with previous studies are absent. 

Conclusions are too short. 

Policy implications are weak. 

Further research should be indicated. 

Limitations of the study are not provided. 

Proofreading by a native speaker is required. 

The editing does not follow the journal’s guidelines. 

The originality value of the study is limited. 

This is a basic econometric exercise without a clear innovative intuition. 

How does the paper enrich the knowledge of the scientific community? 

Author Response

Comments 1: The Abstract must report the aim of the study, the basic information on the sample (time span, countries analyzed), the empirical methodology used, the main findings, and the relevant policy implications.

Responses and a summary of revisions:

Thank you for your suggestions.  According to the requirements, the aim of the study, sample time span, sample analysis country, research methods, research conclusions and policy significance have been completely supplemented in the summary (line 10-28).

Comments 2: Introduction and Literature Review should be split into two different sections.

Responses and a summary of revisions:

Thank you for your suggestions. According to the requirements, the introduction and literature review have been elaborated respectively, and the literature review has been supplemented (for literature review-line 151-238).

Comments 3: The Introduction should highlight the relevance of the topic, the novelty of the results, the importance of policy implications, the sample’s choice, the methodology’s appropriateness, the data used, the contribution to the literature, and the limitations of the study.

Responses and a summary of revisions:

Thank you for your suggestions. According to the requirements, the Introduction has been highlighted the relevance of the topic, the novelty of the results, the importance of policy implications, the sample’s choice, the methodology’s appropriateness, the data used, the contribution to the literature. The limitations of the study are described at the end of the paper.

Comments 4: The literature review is partial and incomplete, and some recent and relevant contributions should be cited and discussed: i.e., 10.1016/j.retrec.2020.100947; 10.1016/j.jclepro.2020.123293; 10.1007/s11356-020-08180-x; 10.1016/j.renene.2020.11.050. Delete useless citations.

Responses and a summary of revisions:

Thank you for your suggestions. According to the requirements, in the literature review section, a large number of literatures have been supplemented, especially those in the last three years. such as Cosimo & Marco (2020), Edmund et al. (2020), Marco & Cosimo (2020), Cosimo et al. (2020) (line 41, line 43, line 56).

Comments 5: The theoretical framework should be discussed more in detail. The results should be discussed more in detail.

Responses and a summary of revisions:

Thank you for your suggestions. A detailed study has been carried out as required, further considering such factors as the nature of enterprise property rights, size and life cycle of the enterprise, and discussing the conclusions (line 698-763).

Comments 6: The estimated model must be justified in light of the literature on this specific topic.

Responses and a summary of revisions:

Thank you for your suggestions. This paper mainly studies the impact of digital transformation on environmental governance, using a multiple linear regression model. In analyzing the mechanism of digital transformation on environmental governance, the intermediary effect model is used.

Comments 7: Descriptive statistics are absent. Diagnostic tests are absent. Robustness checks are absent.

Responses and a summary of revisions:

Thank you for your suggestions.  Descriptive statistics are listed and explained in table 2. Table 3 is Pearson correlation analysis, which is a diagnostic test and provides a basis for regression analysis in the following text. Robustness analysis is supplemented in Table 4.

Comments 8: Comparisons with previous studies are absent.

Responses and a summary of revisions:

Thank you for your suggestions. In the part of literature review, the existing literature is compared and analyzed, and the research direction of this paper is proposed.

Comments 9: Conclusions are too short. Policy implications are weak. Further research should be indicated. Limitations of the study are not provided.

Responses and a summary of revisions:

Thank you for your suggestions.  These issues are supplemented in the research conclusion (line 779-785, line 807-819).

Comments 10: Proofreading by a native speaker is required. The editing does not follow the journal’s guidelines.

Responses and a summary of revisions:

Thank you for your suggestions. The paper has been polished and modified by MDPI Press. The editing has been followed by the journal’s guidelines.

Comments 11: The originality value of the study is limited.  How does the paper enrich the knowledge of the scientific community? This is a basic econometric exercise without a clear innovative intuition.

Responses and a summary of revisions:

Thank you for your suggestions. In the introduction and literature review, the innovation points of this paper are described (line 86-150, line 227-238).

Author Response File: Author Response.docx

Reviewer 3 Report

Good morning

After a point, please leave 1 space. Line 142.

The introduction needs to have reference with informs and author. China is not a reference, also, there are sentences without references.

Theoretical part need to included information that is in methodology. 

You should include previously studies.

You wrote about purpose, but please make sure you have an objective.

Variables selection were not clear, too theoretical, but if you do a table they can see better. (line 219) You wrote 1. There is not 2.

Please include DOI in references.

Conclusions are about results or findings you should have discussion and also, mentioned authors from theoretical review.

Author Response

Comments 1: After a point, please leave 1 space. Line 142.

Responses and a summary of revisions:

Thank you for your suggestions. As required, the sentence end of line 142 has been left 1 space, similar issues in other parts have been revised also.

Comments 2: The introduction needs to have reference with informs and author. China is not a reference, also, there are sentences without references.

Responses and a summary of revisions:

Thank you for your suggestions. Some statements have added references as required. At the same time, the introduction mainly introduces the realistic background of China's mining enterprises' digital transformation and environmental governance, this part mainly states the facts, so there are few literatures cited (line 41, line 43, line 56, line 66).

Comments 3: Theoretical part need to included information that is in methodology.

Responses and a summary of revisions:

Thank you for your suggestions. In the mechanism inspection part, the intermediary effect model analysis method has been added (line 613, line 614, line 661, line 662).

Comments 4: You should include previously studies.

Responses and a summary of revisions:

Thank you for your suggestions. The research content of literature review has been added (line 151-238).

Comments 5: You wrote about purpose, but please make sure you have an objective.

Responses and a summary of revisions:

Thank you for your suggestions. The research objectives are described in the summary and introduction.

Comments 6: Variables selection were not clear, too theoretical, but if you do a table they can see better. (line 219) You wrote 1. There is not 2.

Responses and a summary of revisions:

Thank you for your suggestions. Variables have been classified and represented in tables as required. 1 of line 219 has been deleted (line 396).

Comments 7: Please include DOI in references.

Responses and a summary of revisions:

Thank you for your suggestions. According to the requirements of the journal 《International Journal of Environmental Research and Public Health》, DOI is not required.

Comments 8: Conclusions are about results or findings you should have discussion and also, mentioned authors from theoretical review.

Responses and a summary of revisions:

Thank you for your suggestions. The research conclusions have been supplemented and discussed (line 779-785, line 807-819).

Author Response File: Author Response.docx

Round 2

Reviewer 3 Report

Please include DOI in references

Author Response

Thank you for your valuable suggestions.  The doi has been added to the references, but there are a few documents that can't find doi.

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