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Predictors of Hypertension in Mauritians with Normotension and Prehypertension at Baseline: A Cohort Study

Int. J. Environ. Res. Public Health 2018, 15(7), 1394; https://doi.org/10.3390/ijerph15071394
by Sudhirsen Kowlessur 1,2, Zhibin Hu 1,*, Jaysing Heecharan 2, Jianming Wang 1, Juncheng Dai 1, Jaakko O. Tuomilehto 3, Stefan Söderberg 4, Paul Zimmet 5 and Noël C. Barengo 6
Reviewer 1: Anonymous
Reviewer 2: Anonymous
Reviewer 3: Anonymous
Int. J. Environ. Res. Public Health 2018, 15(7), 1394; https://doi.org/10.3390/ijerph15071394
Submission received: 30 April 2018 / Revised: 26 June 2018 / Accepted: 27 June 2018 / Published: 2 July 2018

Round 1

Reviewer 1 Report

The methodology of physical activity (PA) assessment should be clarified and the criteria for classifying into low, medium and high PA should be presented.

The main limitation of the manuscript is inappropriate statistical analysis. The authors emphasize that this is a cohort study, present risks and predictors of hypertension but they do not use survival analysis. Why? Only odds ratios at different times are presented while they are not taking into account individual time of follow-up.

Analysis should be repeated using Kaplan-Meier survival tables/survival probability plots and Cox regression for adjusting RRs for covariates. Study sample could be analyzed in separate subgroups of normotensives and prehypertensives, in men and women separately due to possible interaction of gender on RRs, also, if authors prefer, RRs could be presented in different periods of follow-up (eg. after 5, 11 years…). Incident hypertension could be classified as cohort event, whereas study sample could be divided into more levels of BP to assess the dose-response effect or just the baseline systolic and diastolic BP could be entered as predictive factor for developing hypertension. Please update your analyses with methods suitable for cohort with long term of follow-up!

Author Response

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Manuscript ID: ijerph-304588

 

Editor’s   and Reviewer’s Comments

 

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Reviewer   #1



The   methodology of physical activity (PA) assessment should be clarified and the   criteria for classifying into low, medium and high PA should be presented.

We have provided more information about the   assessment of physical activity at baseline in the methodology section. The   description reads now as follows:

 

Physical activity was determined by a self-administered   questionnaire following the recommendations of World Health Organization Multinational Monitoring   of Trends and Determinants of CVD (WHO MONICA) project protocol [21,23]. Both   leisure time and occupational physical activity were categorized on a   four-level scale (sedentary, light, moderate, and heavy) based on usual   patterns over the past year. Interviewers were given guidelines for   allocating activity levels for both leisure time and occupational physical   activity scales. Occupational physical activity was classified as sedentary   for office workers and the unemployed, light for shop assistants and general   housework, moderate for trade workers such as carpenters, and heavy for   building laborers and sugarcane cutters. Leisure   time physical activity was graded as sedentary for those generally housebound   with no regular outside activity; light for regular but relaxed pursuits such   as gardening and walking; moderate for active sports such as jogging,   volleyball, or cycling for >=30 min 1-2 days/week; and heavy for active   sports undertaken >+ 3 days/week.

 

Following reference has been added:

 

Dowse, G.K.; Zimmet, P.Z.; Gareeboo, H.; Alberti, G.   M.M.; Tuomilehto, J.; Finch, C.F.; Chitson, P.; Tulsidas, H. Abdominal obesity and physical inactivity as risk factors for NIDDM and   impaired glucose tolerance in Indian, Creole, and Chinese Mauritians. Diabetes Care 1991,   14(4), 271-82.

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The   main limitation of the manuscript is inappropriate statistical analysis. The   authors emphasize that this is a cohort study, present risks and predictors   of hypertension but they do not use survival analysis. Why? Only odds ratios   at different times are presented while they are not taking into account   individual time of follow-up

Our study is a cohort study following up individuals free   of hypertension at baseline with the outcome of incident hypertension. As we   do not have follow-up time of the study participants, we were not able to use   Cox regression models or present survival curves. All stud participants were   re-examined after 5- and 11 –years at the same time point. Thus, if they had   hypertension at the follow-up examination, we would not know at which time   point they developed hypertension. Using the same follow-up time (5 yrs,   respectively 11 yrs) for survival time would inaccurate survival times for   people who developed hypertension. Furthermore, follow-up times will be the   same and lead to similar estimated as odds ratios. Therefore, we decided to   use logistics regression models, a perfectly valid statistical method to   calculate associations if survival times are not available.

 

We have addressed this in the limitations of the study   section adding the following text:

 

“Moreover,   we were not able to analyze the data using survival analysis as information   on the outcomes were only assessed at the 5-year and 11-year examination   visits, and individual times-to-event information was not available for the   study participants who developed the outcome event.”

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Analysis should be repeated using Kaplan-Meier survival   tables/survival probability plots and Cox regression for adjusting RRs for   covariates. Study sample could be analyzed in separate subgroups of   normotensives and pre-hypertensives, in men and women separately due to   possible interaction of gender on RRs, also, if authors prefer, RRs could be   presented in different periods of follow-up (eg. after 5, 11 years…).   Incident hypertension could be classified as cohort event, whereas study   sample could be divided into more levels of BP to assess the dose-response   effect or just the baseline systolic and diastolic BP could be entered as   predictive factor for developing hypertension. Please update your analyses   with methods suitable for cohort with long term of follow-up!

Our study is a cohort study following up individuals free   of hypertension at baseline with the outcome of incident hypertension. As the   follow-up time of every study participant was identical, Cox regression analysis   (which takes into account variable follow-up times) will not be appropriate   method.. All study participants were re-examined after 5- and 11 –years at   the same time point. Thus, if they had hypertension at the follow-up   examination, we would not know at which time point they developed hypertension.   Using the same follow-up time (5 yrs, respectively 11 yrs) for Kaplan-Meier survival   time would give inaccurate data on survival times for people who developed   hypertension. Furthermore, follow-up times will be the same for each   individual and lead to similar estimated as odds ratios. Therefore, we   decided to use logistics regression models, a perfectly valid statistical   method to calculate associations if survival times are not available.

 

We have addressed this in the limitations of the study section   adding the following text:

 

“Moreover, we were not able to analyze the data using   survival analysis as information on the individual times-to-event was not   available for the study participants who developed the outcome event.”

 

We   did not find any evidence of bias or interaction by participants’ sex.   Therefore, we present data for sexes combined to increase the power of the   study. We have added the following sentence to the statistical methods   section:

 

“As no evidence of bias or interaction was found by   participants’ sex, the data were analyzed combining men and women.”

 

We   agree that another research question may be to assess the dose-response   effect of both systolic and diastolic blood pressure on future risk of   hypertension. As for clinical decision making in primary health-care the use   of hypertension categories are more common and recommended by international   guidelines, we prefer to analyze the associations in this manuscript   according to BP categories. However, we will address the issue of   dose-response in a future work of these data. Also, it is not possible to   extend the length of this manuscript and to address this important topic in   depth which would require several tables/figures and much more text for   Introduction, methods, results and discussion sections.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Reviewer 2 Report

1.      It is based on an interesting issue.

2.      The rationale for the introduction is good.

3.       The methodology is appropriate.

4.       The results are accurate and sound.

5.      The discussion is discussed in detail.

6.       The supporting information in the manuscript is reliable and validated.

7.      The manuscript contains innovations.


Author Response

Please note that there were no queries for Reviewer 2

Reviewer 3 Report

This is an nteresting study describing the evolution f BP values in a general population sample of Mauritian Island.


It is not clear whether some individuals in the prehypertensive Group were treated or not , please clarify


Is the presence of diabetes a predictor of hypertension in prehypertensive individuals ? or after adjustment the statistical significance of increased risk is  lost ?



Author Response

Response to Reviewer’s comments

Manuscript ID: ijerph-304588

 

Editor’s   and Reviewer’s Comments

 

Our   Response

 

Location   of edits

Reviewer   #3



It   is not clear whether some individuals in the pre-hypertensive group were   treated or not , please clarify

Participants with prehypertension at baseline did not   receive antihypertensive treatment. Any person treated with antihypertensive   drugs at baseline were considered as hypertensive, and excluded from the   cohort as indicated in the methods section.

 

We have added following sentences to the methodology   section:

 

A systolic blood pressure of 120 to 139 mmHg or a   diastolic blood pressure of between 80 and 89 mmHg and free-of anti-hypertensive medication was considered as   prehypertension.

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Is the   presence of diabetes a predictor of hypertension in pre-hypertensive   individuals? or after adjustment the statistical significance of increased   risk is  lost ?

The association between diabetes mellitus and future   hypertension was not statistically significant after adjustments for the   covariates (Table 3). Therefore, it was eliminated from the model. Only   covariates that were significantly associated with the outcome and improved   the model remained in the adjusted logistic regression model. The significance   of diabetes was lost in the multivariable model due to fact that some other   factors were confounders between diabetes at baseline and hypertension   incidence at follow-up.


 


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Round 2

Reviewer 1 Report

The authors improved the quality of the manuscript and explained the limitations and reasons, why survival analyses couldn’t be performed. This version of the manuscript can be accepted. My suggestion is to present these limitations at the end of the manuscript.

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