Mai kāpae i ke a‘o a ka makua, aia he ola ma laila: Shifting Power through Hawaiian Language Reclamation
Round 1
Reviewer 1 Report
Comments and Suggestions for AuthorsI enjoyed reading your paper and have learned much from it. You could embed it better into ongoing discussions, and I gave you some references that you can refer to.
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Author Response
Aloha, and mahalo for your thoughtful review of our paper, and for providing us with useful references to help us improve it. Please see the attachment with our point-by-point responses to comments offered by all reviewers.
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Reviewer 2 Report
Comments and Suggestions for AuthorsI find this paper very interesting. From a formal point of view, words in Ōlelo Hawaiʻi are sometimes highlighted using quotation marks (" "), while sometimes they are just written in plain text. For a non-Ōlelo Hawaiʻi speaker, I would suggest highlighting them consistently, unless guidelines state otherwise. Furthermore, all the links to web pages are not working: I don't know if this was done on purpose for the blind peer review, or if it is something that needs to be fixed.
Finally, but this is just a personal consideration, it would be interesting to know how the 9 new terms in Table 2 have been accepted by native speakers. If the author(s) already have these data, I would consider adding a paragraph; otherwise, I would suggest that the author(s) conduct such research in the future, as it would provide important information on the reliability of the process used to create these new words.
Author Response
Aloha, and mahalo for your thoughtful review of our paper, and for providing us with useful references to help us improve it. Please see the attachment with our point-by-point responses to comments offered by all reviewers.
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Reviewer 3 Report
Comments and Suggestions for AuthorsSee attached comments.
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Minor editing is needed to address some verb agreement issues or other details, but nothing significant here.
Author Response
Aloha, and mahalo for your thoughtful review of our paper, and for providing us with useful references to help us improve it. Please see the attachment with our point-by-point responses to comments offered by all reviewers.
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