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The Effect of Foliar Application of Magnetic Water and Nano-Fertilizers on Phytochemical and Yield Characteristics of Fennel

Horticulturae 2021, 7(11), 475; https://doi.org/10.3390/horticulturae7110475
by Shahin Faridvand 1, Reza Amirnia 1,*, Mehdi Tajbakhsh 1, Hesham Ali El Enshasy 2,3,4 and R. Z. Sayyed 5
Reviewer 1: Anonymous
Reviewer 2: Anonymous
Horticulturae 2021, 7(11), 475; https://doi.org/10.3390/horticulturae7110475
Submission received: 12 September 2021 / Revised: 25 October 2021 / Accepted: 26 October 2021 / Published: 8 November 2021

Round 1

Reviewer 1 Report

Dear Authors

Please improve the manuscript especially in Results& Discussion, materials and methods. The manuscript must be revised by native English language. 

Regards

Comments for author File: Comments.pdf

Author Response

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Reviewer 1

 

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Bistgani, Z. E., Siadat, S. A., Bakhshandeh, A., Pirbalouti, A. G., Hashemi, M., Maggi, F., &Morshedloo, M. R. (2018). Application of combined fertilizers improves biomass, essential oil yield, aroma profile, and antioxidant properties of Thymus daenensisCelak. Industrial Crops and Products121, 434-440.‏

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Arnon, D.T. Copper enzymes in isolated chloroplasts polyphenol oxidase in Beta vulgaris. Plant. Physiol.1949, 24, 1-15.

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Influence of chitosan concentration on morpho-physiological traits, essential oil and phenolic content under different fertilizers application in Thymus daenensis.

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MasoudHashemiZohrehEmamiBistgani , Seyed Ata Siadat , AbdolmehdiBakhshandeh , AbdollahGhasemiPirbaluti

 

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EmamiBistgani, Z.; Siadat, S.A.; Bakhshandeh, A.; GhasemiPirbaluti, A.; Hashemi, M. Influence of chitosan concentration on morpho-physiological traits, essential oil and phenolic content under different fertilizers application in Thymus daenensis. J. Medi. Herb. 20167, 117-125.‏

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Are you talking about essential oil yield or essential oil percentage? (283)

 

 

 

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Author Response File: Author Response.docx

Reviewer 2 Report

The authors have demonstrated a comprehensive study on the effects of magnetic water and nano, organic, and chemical fertilizers on phytochemical and yield parameters of different landraces of the fennel plants. I have the following suggestions to enhance the scientific soundness and quality of the presentation of this article:

Please use uppercase for title, subtitles and headings, and subheadings. Also, I suggest the title be shortening as 

The Effect of Foliar Application of Magnetic Water and Nano-fertilizers on Phytochemical and Yield Characteristics of Fennel 

Line 17 to 21: Please rewrite this section, it is a very long sentence in the current format.

Line 27 and 28: This is so general and unclear, please be specific that the mentioned parameters increased after foliar application of all treatments compared to the non-treated check? 

Line 34: Author(s) should add a straightforward takeaway message on the future perspective of these nano-fertilizers as sustainable plant growth promoters.

Line 35-36 please use ";" to separate the keywords instead of ","

Also, again the keywords are too long example “systematic literature mapping of self-adaptive system test”

Line 38: Suggestion: Just use “medicinal plants”

 

line 106: Please edit as follow: comparison with the local landrace (Urmia) of Fennel.

Please edit Line 210: 3.2. Fruit Yield and Biological Yield

Line 232: years.

Line 386-387: Better to avoid repeated use of the same word in the same paragraph e.g. influential 

Line 384: Please answer the following questions in the conclusion section:
what are the directions for the future? 
what are the research gaps?
what is the novelty or what’s new to this article?

Line 399: what is RMC? Please add the full name

Line 403: Please reformat the references according to the journal guidelines 

Examples: 
The journal names should be abbreviated and in italic 
the years of articles should be bold also please add the DOI link if available for each reference

 

 

 

 

Comments for author File: Comments.pdf

Author Response

Reviewer 2

 

Please use uppercase for title, subtitles and headings, and subheadings. Also, I suggest the title be shortening as 

 

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Line 17 to 21: Please rewrite this section, it is a very long sentence in the current format.

 

 

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Line 35-36 please use ";" to separate the keywords instead of ","

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what are the directions for the future? what are the research gaps? what is the novelty or what’s new to this article?

 

1-The aim to identify high- yielding compatible ecotypes and introduce them to farmers for  alternative planting

2- There was no particular problem and all ecotypes showed relative compatibility

3- Use of foliar spraying of magnetic water and comparison of several ecotypes, especially Turkish ecotype with Iranian ecotypes.

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The authors would like to thank RMC

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Author Response File: Author Response.docx

Round 2

Reviewer 2 Report

The quality of this manuscript is greatly enhanced after revision and I only have some minor comments on keywords & tables that I add as a note.

You may use a regular font instead of bold

The keywords, you may use lower case 

Tables heading, please use . at the end of each heading

 

Comments for author File: Comments.pdf

Author Response

Reviewer 2 Round 2 Report

Comments and Suggestions for Authors

The quality of this manuscript is greatly enhanced after revision and I only have some minor comments on keywords & tables that I add as a note.

 

  • You may use a regular font instead of bold

Authors response: Agreed and corrected in Tables 2, 3, 11 and 12

  • The keywords, you may use lower case 

Authors response: Agreed and corrected. Line 41

  • Tables heading, please use . at the end of each heading

Authors response: Full stop added at the end of headings of all the Tables. 

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