The Effect of Foliar Application of Magnetic Water and Nano-Fertilizers on Phytochemical and Yield Characteristics of Fennel
Round 1
Reviewer 1 Report
Dear Authors
Please improve the manuscript especially in Results& Discussion, materials and methods. The manuscript must be revised by native English language.
Regards
Comments for author File: Comments.pdf
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Yazad or Hamedan? (33)
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Corrected=line 92 Bistgani, Z. E., Siadat, S. A., Bakhshandeh, A., Pirbalouti, A. G., Hashemi, M., Maggi, F., &Morshedloo, M. R. (2018). Application of combined fertilizers improves biomass, essential oil yield, aroma profile, and antioxidant properties of Thymus daenensisCelak. Industrial Crops and Products, 121, 434-440. |
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N (%) (126) P (%) K (%)
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0.2 g is really small to determine chlorophyll (155)
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Please describe the steps of analysis of essential oil compounds completely. The specifications of the GC and GC-MS devices are fully described. (169)
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You can also add below reference Influence of chitosan concentration on morpho-physiological traits, essential oil and phenolic content under different fertilizers application in Thymus daenensis. author(197) MasoudHashemiZohrehEmamiBistgani , Seyed Ata Siadat , AbdolmehdiBakhshandeh , AbdollahGhasemiPirbaluti
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EmamiBistgani, Z.; Siadat, S.A.; Bakhshandeh, A.; GhasemiPirbaluti, A.; Hashemi, M. Influence of chitosan concentration on morpho-physiological traits, essential oil and phenolic content under different fertilizers application in Thymus daenensis. J. Medi. Herb. 2016; 7, 117-125. |
Please discuss in detail how the metabolism of dry matter increases by organic fertilizers (199)
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You should note what percentage increase or decrease compared to the control treatment or other treatments. (212)
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Please describe the mechanism of how foliar application led to the increase (227)
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Why did you say seed yield? (278)
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Are you talking about essential oil yield or essential oil percentage? (283)
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I'm talking about essential oil yield and the following is the about essential oil. Cosge et al. [76]is deleted |
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The results of essential oil compounds are not enough at all, please explain in detail. (351)
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Author Response File: Author Response.docx
Reviewer 2 Report
The authors have demonstrated a comprehensive study on the effects of magnetic water and nano, organic, and chemical fertilizers on phytochemical and yield parameters of different landraces of the fennel plants. I have the following suggestions to enhance the scientific soundness and quality of the presentation of this article:
Please use uppercase for title, subtitles and headings, and subheadings. Also, I suggest the title be shortening as
The Effect of Foliar Application of Magnetic Water and Nano-fertilizers on Phytochemical and Yield Characteristics of Fennel
Line 17 to 21: Please rewrite this section, it is a very long sentence in the current format.
Line 27 and 28: This is so general and unclear, please be specific that the mentioned parameters increased after foliar application of all treatments compared to the non-treated check?
Line 34: Author(s) should add a straightforward takeaway message on the future perspective of these nano-fertilizers as sustainable plant growth promoters.
Line 35-36 please use ";" to separate the keywords instead of ","
Also, again the keywords are too long example “systematic literature mapping of self-adaptive system test”
Line 38: Suggestion: Just use “medicinal plants”
line 106: Please edit as follow: comparison with the local landrace (Urmia) of Fennel.
Please edit Line 210: 3.2. Fruit Yield and Biological Yield
Line 232: years.
Line 386-387: Better to avoid repeated use of the same word in the same paragraph e.g. influential
Line 384: Please answer the following questions in the conclusion section:
what are the directions for the future? 
what are the research gaps?
what is the novelty or what’s new to this article?
Line 399: what is RMC? Please add the full name
Line 403: Please reformat the references according to the journal guidelines
Examples:
The journal names should be abbreviated and in italic
the years of articles should be bold also please add the DOI link if available for each reference
Comments for author File: Comments.pdf
Author Response
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Please use uppercase for title, subtitles and headings, and subheadings. Also, I suggest the title be shortening as
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Line 17 to 21: Please rewrite this section, it is a very long sentence in the current format.
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Line 34: Author(s) should add a straightforward takeaway message on the future perspective of these nano-fertilizers as sustainable plant growth promoters.
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Line 35-36 please use ";" to separate the keywords instead of "," Also, again the keywords are too long example “systematic literature mapping of self-adaptive system test”
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Line 386-387: Better to avoid repeated use of the same word in the same paragraph e.g. influential
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1-The aim to identify high- yielding compatible ecotypes and introduce them to farmers for alternative planting 2- There was no particular problem and all ecotypes showed relative compatibility 3- Use of foliar spraying of magnetic water and comparison of several ecotypes, especially Turkish ecotype with Iranian ecotypes. |
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The authors would like to thank RMC |
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Author Response File: Author Response.docx
Round 2
Reviewer 2 Report
The quality of this manuscript is greatly enhanced after revision and I only have some minor comments on keywords & tables that I add as a note.
You may use a regular font instead of bold
The keywords, you may use lower case
Tables heading, please use . at the end of each heading
Comments for author File: Comments.pdf
Author Response
Reviewer 2 Round 2 Report
Comments and Suggestions for Authors
The quality of this manuscript is greatly enhanced after revision and I only have some minor comments on keywords & tables that I add as a note.
- You may use a regular font instead of bold
Authors response: Agreed and corrected in Tables 2, 3, 11 and 12
- The keywords, you may use lower case
Authors response: Agreed and corrected. Line 41
- Tables heading, please use . at the end of each heading
Authors response: Full stop added at the end of headings of all the Tables.