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Evaluation of Half-Cell Potential Measurements for Reinforced Concrete Corrosion

Coatings 2022, 12(7), 975; https://doi.org/10.3390/coatings12070975
by Yousef Almashakbeh 1,*, Eman Saleh 2 and Nabil M. Al-Akhras 3
Reviewer 1: Anonymous
Reviewer 2:
Reviewer 3: Anonymous
Coatings 2022, 12(7), 975; https://doi.org/10.3390/coatings12070975
Submission received: 2 June 2022 / Revised: 25 June 2022 / Accepted: 6 July 2022 / Published: 9 July 2022
(This article belongs to the Special Issue Effective Coating Barriers for Protection of Reinforced Concrete)

Round 1

Reviewer 1 Report

Manuscript ID: coatings-1777481

Title: Evaluation of half-cell potential measurements for reinforced concrete corrosion

Journal: Coatings

 

Comments to authors:

General: This study evaluates the performance of half-cell potential measurements in detecting corrosion of reinforced concrete. Reinforced concrete beams were cast and then exposed to an accelerated corrosion procedure utilizing impressed current. The effect of corrosion on reinforced concrete was determined through a four-point loading test on reinforced concrete beams and a non-destructive half-cell potential test.

 

Recommendation: This manuscript can be accepted after a major revision. The authors are requested to address the following comments:

ü  The Abstract should be enriched with the brief details of the methodology.

ü  The authors should also add problems to be resolved in the Abstract.

ü  English proofreading should be done for grammar and typos such as “100 ×150 ×1000mm” should be written as “100 ×150 ×1000 mm”, in Table 1, Fy and Fu should be in small letters, etc…

ü  The novelty, scope, and significance of the present work should be highlighted in the last paragraph of the Introduction section.

ü  More literature review should be added.

ü  What is the need for this work?

ü  “Twelve reinforced concrete beams with dimensions 15 ×10 ×100 cm3 were tested.” Please check the units of dimensions.

ü  Is this work helpful for practical applications? Which applications?

ü  The literature review should be improved by adding latest references and discussion.

ü  Results and discussion section must be improved by adding more details and more discussion.

ü  Results section should be defended using technical reasons and relevant references. More discussion should be added.

ü  Crack patterns of tested beams must be added and discussed.

ü  Conclusions should be refined and briefly presented. Some numerical results should be added.

ü  The authors should add the future recommendations based on the present study.

Author Response

please see the attachments

Author Response File: Author Response.pdf

Reviewer 2 Report

1 The abstract should be revised. The significances in engineering field should be highlighted.

2 The authors are suggested to explain the novelty of the paper.

3 In Section 2, the authors are suggested to add a diagram or picture of the flow chart of the procedure.

4 For the analysis in Section 3, further step analysis should be added. The authors are suggested to add comments as well as the references below. They are closely related with the present research. Mechanical Systems and Signal Processing, 2022, 168: 108624. Tribology International, 2021, 164: 107105 .

5 For the conclusions, it is a little long. Several brief points of conclusions are enough. The authors are suggested to rewrite the conclusions.

6 The English should be improved considerately.

Author Response

Evaluation of half-cell potential measurements for reinforced concrete corrosion

Response to comments and suggestions  

 

Dear Editor and Reviewers,

We would like to thank you for your helpful comments and suggestions that have improved our manuscript. Please find below a point-by-point response to the raised comments. We hope our response is satisfactory.

 

  • Response to Reviewer 2

 

 

Comment 1

The abstract should be revised. The significances in engineering field should be highlighted. The authors are suggested to explain the novelty of the paper

Response

Thank you for this comment. The reviewer is correct in the sense that the major findings are not explicitly mentioned in the manuscript. Thus, the abstract, results, discussion, and conclusion sections were altered to include the findings more explicitly.

Changes

The major findings of the study were added to the manuscript to reflect the contribution of the study. Please check the abstract, results, and conclusion sections. The modified lines are highlighted in Yellow and Blue in the manuscript

 

Comment 3

In Section 2, the authors are suggested to add a diagram or picture of the flow chart of the procedure.

Response

Comment considered. Thank you.

Changes

A flow chart that illustrates the process followed in the study was added (see Fig. 2)

 

 

 

Comment 4

For the analysis in Section 3, further step analysis should be added. The authors are suggested to add comments as well as the references below. They are closely related with the present research. Mechanical Systems and Signal Processing, 2022, 168: 108624. Tribology International, 2021, 164: 107105 .

Response

Comment considered.

Changes

Further analysis and the suggested reference have been added. The changes are highlighted in Blue in the results section

 

 

Comment 5

For the conclusions, it is a little long. Several brief points of conclusions are enough. The authors are suggested to rewrite the conclusions.

Response

Comment considered, thank you.

Changes

The conclusion has been rewritten completely to present the results in a better way. The changes are highlighted in Blue in the conclusion section

 

 

Comment 6

The English should be improved considerately.

Response

Comment considered. Thank you

Changes

The manuscript has been proofread and English has been improved considerably

 

 

 

 

 

Author Response File: Author Response.pdf

Reviewer 3 Report

 

Manuscript coatings-1777481  evaluates the performance of half-cell potential measurements in detecting corrosion of reinforced concrete. The results presented are not of sufficient novelty and importance to be considered for publication in Coatings in the current form. Below I provide my specific comments that will help the authors to improve the paper:

Comments:

1.       The introduction part should be improved.

2.       Figures are insufficiently described, for example, Figure  3 describes the above steps – it is not enough explained (very laconic explanation).

3.       The poor quality of the image report, some images are not visible clearly.

4.       The abbreviations are explained in the wrong places.

5.       In the manuscript, a lot of mistakes were found, for example, in line 111, brackets without reference.

6.        How many times were conducted measurements?

7.       In the discussion part is no references to literature.

Author Response

Evaluation of half-cell potential measurements for reinforced concrete corrosion

Response to comments and suggestions

 

 

Dear Editor and Reviewers,

We would like to thank you for your helpful comments and suggestions that have improved our manuscript. Please find below a point-by-point response to the raised comments. We hope our response is satisfactory.

 

  • Response to Reviewer 3

 

 

Comment 1

The introduction part should be improved.

Response

Thank you for this comment. The reviewer is correct in the sense that the major findings are not explicitly mentioned in the manuscript. Thus, the abstract, results, discussion, and conclusion sections were altered to include the findings more explicitly.

Changes

The major findings of the study were added to the manuscript to reflect the contribution of the study. Please check the abstract, results, and conclusion sections. The modified lines are highlighted in Yellow  and Blue in the manuscript

 

Comment 2

Figures are insufficiently described, for example, Figure  3 describes the above steps – it is not enough explained (very laconic explanation).

Response

Thank you for this comment. Comment considered.

Changes

All figures have been described in detail. Please see modifications highlighted in Blue in the manuscript 

 

Comment 3

The poor quality of the image report, some images are not visible clearly.

Response

Comment considered. Thank you.

Changes

The images quality has been improved

 

 

Comment 4

The abbreviations are explained in the wrong places.

Response

Comment considered

Changes

All the abbreviations were reviewed and modified accordingly.

 

 

Comment 5

 In the manuscript, a lot of mistakes were found, for example, in line 111, brackets without reference.

Response

Comment considered. Thank you

Changes

The manuscript has been extensively reviewed and all the mistakes have been corrected

 

 

Comment 6

How many times were conducted measurements?

Response

Thank you for this comment. The reviewer is correct in the sense that the number of measurements should be reported in the manuscript. Therefore, how many times the measurements have been performed has been added

Changes

Each beam was split into ten sections. The half-cell potential equipment was used to collect three readings at each test location per the ASTM C876 requirements

 

 

Comment 7

In the discussion part is no references to literature.

 

Response

Comment considered. Thank you

Changes

The discussion part has been modified and literature references have been added. The changes are highlighted in Blue in the results and discussion section

 

Author Response File: Author Response.pdf

Round 2

Reviewer 1 Report

No comments

Reviewer 2 Report

Accept

Reviewer 3 Report

I accept paper in present form.

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