Medical School Students’ Preferences for and Perceptions of Teacher Written Corrective Feedback on English as a Second Language Academic Writing: An Intrinsic Case Study
Abstract
:1. Introduction
2. Literature Review
2.1. WCF
2.2. EFL Students’ Preferences for and Perceptions of WCF
3. Methodology
3.1. The Case
3.1.1. Participants
3.1.2. The Course
- Activate background knowledge relevant to the content of academic texts;
- Preview the content and organization of texts before starting in-depth reading;
- Read actively by asking themselves questions and monitoring comprehension as they read;
- Focus on understanding the main ideas in paragraphs;
- Read for details to establish connections among them and the main ideas of texts;
- Practice new reading, writing, and vocabulary-building skills and strategies;
- Learn academic vocabulary, especially those from the academic word list (AWL);
- Understand the meaning of unknown words encountered in texts by using their surrounding context;
- Focus on the meaning of key words in texts by connecting their meaning to familiar words and phrases;
- Recognize different word forms to quickly and efficiently increase receptive vocabulary knowledge;
- Paraphrase texts;
- Engage in thoughtful, reflective, and independent thinking to make sense of texts;
- Write main idea sentences and detail sentences to support those main ideas;
- Undertake some research on global health topics;
- Develop a deeper understanding of global health topics and become adept at using global health vocabulary to write about these topics;
- Critically discuss global health topics;
- Write academic essays on global health topics;
- Engage in dialogue journal writing with the teacher to increase writing fluency;
- Recognize the cohesion of vocabulary, structural features, and organization of global health research articles.
3.1.3. The Context
3.2. Research Instruments
3.2.1. Open- and Closed-Ended Questionnaire
3.2.2. In-Depth Semi-Structured Interviews
3.3. Data Analysis
4. Results and Discussion
4.1. RQ1: What Types of WCF Do EFL Medical Students Prefer to Receive?
4.2. RQ2: What Types of WCF do EFL Medical Students Perceive as Helpful?
4.3. RQ3: Why do EFL Medical Students Prefer Certain Types of WCF?
4.4. RQ4: Why do EFL Medical Students Perceive Certain Types of WCF as Helpful and Others as Unhelpful?
5. Conclusions
Author Contributions
Funding
Institutional Review Board Statement
Informed Consent Statement
Data Availability Statement
Conflicts of Interest
Appendix A
- Please explain how you feel about the writing feedback given by the teacher. Do you like it or dislike it? Do you think it helped? Please think about what kind of feedback you like and which kind of feedback you dislike. Please express your feelings in as much detail as possible.
- Please answer the following questions based on your preferences for teacher written corrective feedback.
- 3.
- Based on your opinions and experience, please rate the importance of the following feedback types:
- 4.
- Please explain your choice based on the above question, or give other comments about writing feedback.
- 5.
- Do you value teachers’ feedback on concepts or ideas? Yes/No/No comment
- 6.
- Do you value teachers’ feedback on grammar? Yes/No/No comment
- 7.
- What kind of feedback do you value? Content or Idea/Grammar/Both
- 8.
- Have your thoughts about written corrective feedback changed after taking this course? If so, please explain.
Appendix B
- Could you please introduce the academic “reading to write” course that you taught?
- Did you provide writing feedback to your students?
- When and how did you provide writing feedback to your students?
- What types of writing feedback did you provide in the course?
- Why did you provide certain types of writing feedback?
- What types of writing feedback did the students prefer to receive?
- Why did they prefer certain types of writing feedback?
- When receiving teacher feedback in the classroom, what aspects did the students like most and why?
- When receiving teacher feedback in the classroom, what aspects did students dislike most and why?
- Do you think students’ thoughts about WCF changed after taking that course? Why or why not?
- Could you provide some basic information about the school’s English program?
- How do you feel about the school’s policy about English language education?
- How do you feel about the school’s curriculum and instruction about English language education?
- Do you think this group of students are involved in a unique English language learning situation?
- Why did the EFL medical students prefer certain types of WCF?
- Why did the EFL medical students prefer indirect feedback on writing content?
- Why did the EFL medical students prefer direct feedback over indirect feedback for writing mechanics?
- Why did the EFL medical students prefer direct feedback over indirect feedback for writing structure?
- Why did the EFL medical students perceive certain types of WCF as effective or ineffective?
- What kind of feedback was most helpful or effective for EFL medical students?
- What kind of feedback was least helpful or ineffective for EFL medical students?
- Did the EFL medical students show you positive or negative feelings about the WCF?
Appendix C
Coding categories | Abbreviation |
Category 1: Student-teacher interactions | STI |
Category 2: Students’ self-expression | SS |
Category 3: Second language writing instruction | SLWI |
Category 4: Language development | LD |
Category 5: Writing improvement | WI |
Category 6: Peer comparison | PC |
Category 7: Emotional satisfaction | ES |
Category 8: Heavy workload | HW |
Category 9: Inadequate comments | IC |
Category 10: Unclear policy | UP |
Category 11: Ineffective communication | ICN |
Coding themes | Abbreviation |
Theme 1: Influencing factors of students’ preferences | IFSP |
Theme 2: Perceived benefits from the WCF | PB |
Theme 3: Perceived challenges from the WCF | PC |
Appendix D
- 1.
- Direct correction (n = 10)Example: “Direct pointing out the grammatical and content faults.”
- 2.
- Direct corrections with examples or explanations (n = 3)Example: “Direct corrections of our problems with some examples as references.”
- 3.
- Suggestions (n = 3)Example: “The teacher provides us many suggestions on the grammar and sentence. During high school time, we practice the diversification of sentences by English writing exercises, for instance, inversion of a sentence and participle clause etc.. But it is not the same in academic English writing. It takes long to refine complicated sentences and prepositions.”
- 4.
- Encouragement (n = 3)Example: “In the way of encouragement.”
- 5.
- Open-ended questions (n = 3)Example: “The feedback in the way of reflection to our ideas and rhetorical questions are of great help, which can inspire me to think more deeply.”
- 1.
- Open-ended questions (n = 6)Example: “Open-ended questions confuse me a lot.”
- 2.
- Indirect feedback or general comments without details, examples, or explanations (n = 5)Example: “General descriptions without details.”
- 3.
- Unclear handwriting (n = 2)Example: “I cannot figure out what the teacher writes because of the unclear handwriting.”
- 4.
- Provide scores (n = 1)Example: “The teacher only gives us the score but doesn’t explain strengths and weaknesses of our writing.”
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Types | Examples |
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Direct feedback for content | “You have written that women tend to have longer life expectancy than men. You should provide some details to support this statement and explain why this might be.” |
Direct feedback for structure | “In this paragraph you should have explained why life expectancy is generally increasing throughout the world and then in the following paragraph you should have used the information from your research article(s) to explain what is happening to life expectancy in the country you selected.” |
Direct feedback for mechanics | “This is the first use of the acronym WHO, [and] so you should write it out in full as World Health Organization (WHO). All subsequent mentions can use the abbreviation WHO.” |
Indirect feedback for content | “I can’t understand the cause and effect relationship that you are trying to make here. Consider rewriting/revising this sentence.” |
Indirect feedback for structure | “Should this be where you describe the disease?” |
Indirect feedback for mechanics | “In 1967, the WHO became concered with the eradication a of smallpox.” |
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Reynolds, B.L.; Zhang, X. Medical School Students’ Preferences for and Perceptions of Teacher Written Corrective Feedback on English as a Second Language Academic Writing: An Intrinsic Case Study. Behav. Sci. 2023, 13, 13. https://doi.org/10.3390/bs13010013
Reynolds BL, Zhang X. Medical School Students’ Preferences for and Perceptions of Teacher Written Corrective Feedback on English as a Second Language Academic Writing: An Intrinsic Case Study. Behavioral Sciences. 2023; 13(1):13. https://doi.org/10.3390/bs13010013
Chicago/Turabian StyleReynolds, Barry Lee, and Xiaofang Zhang. 2023. "Medical School Students’ Preferences for and Perceptions of Teacher Written Corrective Feedback on English as a Second Language Academic Writing: An Intrinsic Case Study" Behavioral Sciences 13, no. 1: 13. https://doi.org/10.3390/bs13010013
APA StyleReynolds, B. L., & Zhang, X. (2023). Medical School Students’ Preferences for and Perceptions of Teacher Written Corrective Feedback on English as a Second Language Academic Writing: An Intrinsic Case Study. Behavioral Sciences, 13(1), 13. https://doi.org/10.3390/bs13010013