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Showering Thermal Sensation in Residential Bathrooms

Water 2022, 14(19), 2940; https://doi.org/10.3390/w14192940
by Ling-Tim Wong, Kwok-Wai Mui * and Yiu-Wing Chan
Reviewer 1:
Reviewer 2:
Water 2022, 14(19), 2940; https://doi.org/10.3390/w14192940
Submission received: 1 August 2022 / Revised: 5 September 2022 / Accepted: 16 September 2022 / Published: 20 September 2022
(This article belongs to the Section Water and One Health)

Round 1

Reviewer 1 Report

This study examines the influence of the thermal environment in a bathroom on the thermal sensations of the showering subjects. This manuscript describes an original and interesting work. Before it is accepted and published, following suggestions were given to improve the quality of the manuscript.

1.    Please describe the relationship between the interview responses in Table 2 and the experimental design. What conclusions were drawn from the interview responses and how did the survey conclusions contribute to the design of the experiment

2.    According to the data in Table 3, only 38.8℃ was set as the shower water temperature in the experiment. How is the conclusion in Figure 3(b) reached? Is there a lack of relevant data to support it.

Author Response

Dear Reviewer, 

Thank you very much for your valuable comments and the reply to reviewers is attached for comments. Thanks!

Author Response File: Author Response.docx

Reviewer 2 Report

The article presents an interesting point of view on thermal comfort in bathroom against water temperature, however, only one water temperature value was measured.

My 19 comments are highlighted in the text.  Some aspects need clarification.

 

The most important aspect  is the questions test just after showering and use a typical  comfort scale which in common studies is used after 20 minutes of adaptative time. In my opinion, it should be proven that the TSV scale is appropriate for this study. Please consider if it better is to conduct a survey before and after the shower.  

In the references is the publication with no. 4 necessary? 

Comments for author File: Comments.pdf

Author Response

Dear Reviewer,

Thank you very much for your valuable comments and I submit the response to comments as attached document. Thanks!

Author Response File: Author Response.docx

Reviewer 3 Report

The paper "Showering thermal sensation in residential bathrooms" falls within the scope of Water Journal and shows some relevance.

 

In this paper, the authors present an interesting work that focuses on examining the influence of the thermal environment in a bathroom on the thermal sensations of the showering subjects.

 

This work, with the necessary transformations, could become publishable but requires some improvement. In this sense, there are some suggestions on the paper attached that should be attended before publishing.

 

Suggestion 01

The abstract should be partially rewritten to adjust its length to the key concepts. The research gap is not clearly described.

 

Suggestion 02

This introduction section lacks a better contextualisation of the problem. In this sense a more extensive and grounded introduction is missed. A clear definition of the real problem, challenges, or research gaps, the main objectives of the study, and its limitations as well as the structure of the manuscript should also be included in this section.

 

Suggestion 03

Novelty unclear: What is the original contribution of the study? The methodology is not very enlightening on the subject. Novelty should be made as clear as possible.

 

Suggestion 04

The number of surveys is considered too limited, the criteria for determining it should be justified. Furthermore, the survey is not attached as supplementary information. Without this document the replicability of the experiment cannot be guaranteed.

 

Suggestion 05

Main data found in the results must be presented in the conclusion section in order to strengthen the proposed joint method.

 

Suggestion 06

This reviewer does not feel it necessary to add any further comments regarding the content of the other sections of the manuscript.  Overall, it is an interesting work, as discussed above.

Author Response

Thank you very much for the valuable comments, the reply to reviewers are listed in attached document.

Author Response File: Author Response.pdf

Round 2

Reviewer 1 Report

In view of the first review comments, the author has revised the reply and has no further comments.

Reviewer 2 Report

Thank you for considering all of my comments. In my opinion Table 3 should be amended to beeing more readable/visible, I mean values for Male and Female are not clear when reading text. 

Author Response

Thank you very much for the valuable comments, the reply to reviewers are listed in attached document.

Author Response File: Author Response.pdf

Reviewer 3 Report

The manuscript, in its current version, is suitable for publication.

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