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Distributed Management Systems for Infocommunication Networks: A Model Based on TM Forum Frameworx

by Valery Mochalov *, Natalia Bratchenko, Gennady Linets and Sergey Yakovlev
Reviewer 1: Anonymous
Reviewer 2: Anonymous
Submission received: 13 March 2019 / Revised: 9 April 2019 / Accepted: 1 May 2019 / Published: 4 June 2019
(This article belongs to the Special Issue REMS 2018: Multidisciplinary Symposium on Computer Science and ICT)

Round 1

Reviewer 1 Report

This paper presents a model for distributed operational management systems.  The proposed model is novel and interesting.  The paper is well written, except that there are a few typos.  For example, "Frameworx" in the paper title should be "Framework".

Author Response

Good day.  Thank You so much for the recommendations.  We send the article file with a note about the changes.  Thank You.


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Reviewer 2 Report

The article looks good. However, the authors can perhaps add a section on limitations of the experiment. Also figure 4 needs improvement. the words in one of the boxes was not clear.


1) The very first sentence in the introduction section needs improvement due to wrong use of lists or commas. I would therefore advise improving English
2) The section 2 on results can be replace by objectives. Results must come at the end
3) It is better to have all equations numbered and referenced in the body
4) Just before the conclusion section the authors can write a section on limitations of the experiment or thesis

Author Response

Good day. 

Thank you very much for the recommendations. 

We send the article file with notes that highlight the changes made.

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