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Choice Modeling of Laundry Detergent Data for Sustainable Consumption

Sustainability 2023, 15(24), 16949; https://doi.org/10.3390/su152416949
by Marina Kholod 1, Nikita Mokrenko 1, Alberto Celani 2,* and Valentina Puglisi 2
Reviewer 1: Anonymous
Reviewer 2: Anonymous
Reviewer 3: Anonymous
Reviewer 4: Anonymous
Reviewer 5: Anonymous
Reviewer 6:
Sustainability 2023, 15(24), 16949; https://doi.org/10.3390/su152416949
Submission received: 16 October 2023 / Revised: 23 November 2023 / Accepted: 29 November 2023 / Published: 18 December 2023
(This article belongs to the Section Economic and Business Aspects of Sustainability)

Round 1

Reviewer 1 Report

Comments and Suggestions for Authors

The research issues are very interesting and important. I have no objections to the method used. However, the method is the dominant component of this article. What is the contribution to the theory of this research? There is a lack of clear indication of the research hypotheses and the basis for their formulation. What contribution to practice does this research make? Can industry benefit from them? What are the limitations of the research? What are the implications? What should be improved to enhance the quality of the research in the future?

Author Response

Response 1: Thank you for pointing this out. We agree with this comment. Therefore, we have rewritten the abstract to clarify that.

Abstract [Consumer choice modeling takes center stage as we delve into understanding how personal preferences of decision makers (customers) for products influence demand at the level of the individual. The contemporary choice theory is built upon the characteristics of the decision maker, alternatives available for the choice of the decision maker, the attributes of the available alternatives and decision rules that the decision maker uses to make a choice. The choice set in our research is represented by 6 major brands (products) of laundry detergents in the Japanese market. We use the panel data of the purchases of 98 households to which we apply hierarchical probit model, facilitated by Markov Chain Monte Carlo simulation (MCMC) in order to evaluate the brand values of 6 brands. The applied model also allows us to evaluate the tangible and intangible brand values. These evaluated metrics help us to assess the brands based on their tangible and intangible characteristics. Moreover, consumers choice modeling also provides a framework for assessing the environmental performance of laundry detergent brands as the model uses the information on components (physical attributes) of laundry detergents. Through a comprehensive evaluation of product performance, including brand tangible estimation, we shed light on the sustainability attributes of laundry detergents, offering a roadmap for consumers and manufacturers alike to make more informed, environmentally responsible choices of laundry detergents based on their physical attributes. Knowing the estimates of the attributes for the laundry detergent products, manufacturers can modify their physical attributes, e.g. decrease the amount of the detergent needed for one laundry while increasing the total weight of the laundry powder in the package. This way more ecology- and consumer-friendly decisions can be made by manufacturers of laundry detergents.]

 

Comments 2: There is a lack of clear indication of the research hypotheses and the basis for their formulation.

Response 2: Agree. We have added the formulation of the hypothesis at the end of 3.1

to emphasize this point.

 

[The main hypothesis that motivates our model that we are developing in this paper is that the choice of the brand is explained by physical attributes of products, social characteristics of the consumer herself and situational factors (such as promotions).]

 

 

Comments 3: What contribution to practice does this research make? Can industry benefit from them?

Response 3: Thank you for pointing this out. We agree with this comment. Therefore, we have added the “Applications” and “Contribution” sections to our paper. The possible benefit for the industry is also outlined in par.6 of the Introduction.

[Sustainable detergents are often marketed with claims of reduced environmental impact. Product choice models can be utilized to assess and communicate these environmental benefits effectively. Through comprehensive analysis, including life cycle assessments and ecological footprint evaluations, brands can provide consumers with transparent information about the ecological advantages of choosing sustainable detergents. This, in turn, empowers consumers to make informed choices aligned with their environmental values. Choice modeling, through its intricate analysis of consumer preferences, offers a systematic approach to understanding the intricate decision-making processes that govern product selection. By incorporating factors such as environmental consciousness, ingredient transparency, and packaging preferences, choice modeling enables the identification of critical attributes that influence consumers towards sustainable choices.The comprehensive insights derived from choice modeling can inform the development of targeted marketing strategies and product formulations that align with consumer values, fostering the adoption of more environmentally friendly detergent options. Additionally, choice modeling allows for the exploration of trade-offs within consumer decision dynamics, providing a nuanced understanding of the factors that may hinder or promote the acceptance of sustainable detergent alternatives. In essence, the hypothesis rests on the premise that choice modeling provides a robust analytical framework to unravel the complexities of consumer decision-making in the context of laundry detergent sustainability, thereby offering valuable insights for industry stakeholders and policymakers seeking to enhance the ecological footprint of household cleaning products]

Comments 4: What are the limitations of the research? What are the implications? What should be improved to enhance the quality of the research in the future?

Response 4: Thank you for pointing this out. We agree with this comment. To answer your question, we have added “Applications” and “Limitations” to our paper.

 

[One of the fundamental applications of product choice models is in shaping educational and awareness campaigns. By identifying the factors that drive consumer preferences, marketers can develop targeted messaging that educates consumers about the benefits of choosing sustainable detergents. This proactive approach aids in demystifying the misconceptions surrounding eco-friendly products and encourages widespread adoption.

 

The methods and conclusions presented in the study offer valuable insights that can be practically applied in the business realm, particularly within the laundry detergent industry. The research, which involves analyzing consumer preferences and behaviors, can guide companies in developing sustainable laundry detergent products that align with consumer values. By understanding the factors that influence consumer choices, businesses can tailor their marketing strategies to highlight the sustainable aspects of their products. Moreover, the findings may inform product innovation, helping companies design environmentally friendly formulations or packaging that appeal to eco-conscious consumers. Implementing the insights gained from choice modeling can also aid in optimizing pricing strategies, ensuring that consumers perceive the value of sustainable features in relation to the cost. Ultimately, the practical application of these methods can enhance a company's competitive edge by aligning their laundry detergent offerings with the growing demand for sustainable and environmentally friendly products in the market.]

 

Limitations

 

[The present study is not immune to certain methodological limitations that warrant acknowledgment and consideration in the interpretation of the findings. Firstly, a notable limitation arises from the relatively modest size of the dataset under examination. The small sample size may constrain the generalizability of the study outcomes to broader consumer populations, necessitating caution in extrapolating the observed trends and behaviors. Furthermore, the dataset is characterized by a limited inclusion of marketing parameters, which may curtail the comprehensiveness of the analysis. The absence of a more extensive array of marketing variables could potentially restrict the depth of insights into the multifaceted determinants of consumer choices in the context of sustainable laundry detergent consumption. It is imperative to recognize these constraints when contextualizing the study's outcomes and to consider them as avenues for future research endeavors aimed at enhancing the robustness and applicability of findings within a broader empirical landscape.]

 

 

 

 

4. Response to Comments on the Quality of English Language

Point 1:

Response 1:    (in red)

5. Additional clarifications

[Here, mention any other clarifications you would like to provide to the journal editor/reviewer.]

 

Author Response File: Author Response.pdf

Reviewer 2 Report

Comments and Suggestions for Authors

Thank you for the opportunity to review this paper. Below are my comments to the authors.

1. The Introduction section is way too long. Please streamline this section by focusing on the importance of this study, research gaps, methods, and this study's contributions. Some parts in the Introduction section can be moved to the literature review section.

2. It is unclear how the authors selected the sample used in the analysis. Please clarify this.

3. If I am not mistaken, there are six products used in the analysis. However, the estimation results show that there are six intercepts for each brand. This is confusing because when you estimate a Probit model, the number of intercepts should be one less than the number of products for identification purposes.

4. The important part of this study is to show how product attributes explain the heterogeneity of the parameters among consumers. However, I feel the presentation of these results is unclear. Please consider refining this part.

Comments on the Quality of English Language

Please consider using a professional English editing service to improve the readability of this manuscript.

Author Response

Comments 2: There is a lack of clear indication of the research hypotheses and the basis for their formulation.

Response 2: Agree. We have added the formulation of the hypothesis at the end of 3.1

to emphasize this point.

 

[The main hypothesis that motivates our model that we are developing in this paper is that the choice of the brand is explained by physical attributes of products, social characteristics of the consumer herself and situational factors (such as promotions).]

 

 

Author Response File: Author Response.pdf

Reviewer 3 Report

Comments and Suggestions for Authors

A very interesting publication describing the analysis of consumer behavior on the detergent market. The authors attempted to assess and analyze buyer behavior, their choices through selected product features and their impact on the environment. Mathematical models based on available literature were used in the analysis process. The partially adapted models were verified and conclusions were formulated based on their evaluation. An interesting way of presenting the use of modeling in assessing market behavior of buyers. The analyzes were conducted on a sample of 98 households. There is no information about the sample and how the data was collected: where, in what country? in what period? what was the sampling method for these households? what was the structure, who was it? This is quite important information in the context of recent events, such as Covid-19, inflation or military aggression by Russia for Ukraine. Additionally, conclusions or recommendations should be extended with information on how the presented methods and conclusions can be applied in practice (in business).

Author Response

Comments 3: What contribution to practice does this research make? Can industry benefit from them?

Response 3: Thank you for pointing this out. We agree with this comment. Therefore, we have added the “Applications” and “Contribution” sections to our paper. The possible benefit for the industry is also outlined in par.6 of the Introduction.

[Sustainable detergents are often marketed with claims of reduced environmental impact. Product choice models can be utilized to assess and communicate these environmental benefits effectively. Through comprehensive analysis, including life cycle assessments and ecological footprint evaluations, brands can provide consumers with transparent information about the ecological advantages of choosing sustainable detergents. This, in turn, empowers consumers to make informed choices aligned with their environmental values. Choice modeling, through its intricate analysis of consumer preferences, offers a systematic approach to understanding the intricate decision-making processes that govern product selection. By incorporating factors such as environmental consciousness, ingredient transparency, and packaging preferences, choice modeling enables the identification of critical attributes that influence consumers towards sustainable choices.The comprehensive insights derived from choice modeling can inform the development of targeted marketing strategies and product formulations that align with consumer values, fostering the adoption of more environmentally friendly detergent options. Additionally, choice modeling allows for the exploration of trade-offs within consumer decision dynamics, providing a nuanced understanding of the factors that may hinder or promote the acceptance of sustainable detergent alternatives. In essence, the hypothesis rests on the premise that choice modeling provides a robust analytical framework to unravel the complexities of consumer decision-making in the context of laundry detergent sustainability, thereby offering valuable insights for industry stakeholders and policymakers seeking to enhance the ecological footprint of household cleaning products]

Author Response File: Author Response.pdf

Reviewer 4 Report

Comments and Suggestions for Authors

Dear Authors,

your article raises an important issue related to sustainable development. I agree that detergents significantly damage the environment, therefore all actions, including scientific research, that can solve this problem are desirable. It is worth specifying the goals, methods, and results more precisely in the abstract. I don't see information on contemporary scientific research regarding detergents in the text. It would be best if you informed the reader to what extent your research is pioneering and to what extent it enriches existing literature. I propose to emphasize the importance of your research for theory and practice. The article will undoubtedly benefit if you add more references, including the newest ones. Currently, the bibliography contains only 21 items, most of which come from the 20th century.

Author Response

Comments 4: What are the limitations of the research? What are the implications? What should be improved to enhance the quality of the research in the future?

Response 4: Thank you for pointing this out. We agree with this comment. To answer your question, we have added “Applications” and “Limitations” to our paper.

 

[One of the fundamental applications of product choice models is in shaping educational and awareness campaigns. By identifying the factors that drive consumer preferences, marketers can develop targeted messaging that educates consumers about the benefits of choosing sustainable detergents. This proactive approach aids in demystifying the misconceptions surrounding eco-friendly products and encourages widespread adoption.

 

The methods and conclusions presented in the study offer valuable insights that can be practically applied in the business realm, particularly within the laundry detergent industry. The research, which involves analyzing consumer preferences and behaviors, can guide companies in developing sustainable laundry detergent products that align with consumer values. By understanding the factors that influence consumer choices, businesses can tailor their marketing strategies to highlight the sustainable aspects of their products. Moreover, the findings may inform product innovation, helping companies design environmentally friendly formulations or packaging that appeal to eco-conscious consumers. Implementing the insights gained from choice modeling can also aid in optimizing pricing strategies, ensuring that consumers perceive the value of sustainable features in relation to the cost. Ultimately, the practical application of these methods can enhance a company's competitive edge by aligning their laundry detergent offerings with the growing demand for sustainable and environmentally friendly products in the market.]

 

Limitations

 

[The present study is not immune to certain methodological limitations that warrant acknowledgment and consideration in the interpretation of the findings. Firstly, a notable limitation arises from the relatively modest size of the dataset under examination. The small sample size may constrain the generalizability of the study outcomes to broader consumer populations, necessitating caution in extrapolating the observed trends and behaviors. Furthermore, the dataset is characterized by a limited inclusion of marketing parameters, which may curtail the comprehensiveness of the analysis. The absence of a more extensive array of marketing variables could potentially restrict the depth of insights into the multifaceted determinants of consumer choices in the context of sustainable laundry detergent consumption. It is imperative to recognize these constraints when contextualizing the study's outcomes and to consider them as avenues for future research endeavors aimed at enhancing the robustness and applicability of findings within a broader empirical landscape.]

Author Response File: Author Response.pdf

Reviewer 5 Report

Comments and Suggestions for Authors

When reviewing scientific papers for publication, I usually start with a general overview in terms of a structure, abstract, literature review, methodology, findings of the research, discussion, conclusions, as well as limitations of the study.

In the assessment of the paper submitted for the review, I specifically focussed on the discussed issues, applied research methods and the scope of analysis of research results, as well as substantive content of the article and its structure.

The manuscript is interesting and original.  It deals with an interesting topic which is currently of interest among researchers.

To improve the quality of the work I would recommend:

1.Please identify the research theory and explain the main research methods and procedures. Or, if the relevant content is not clearly presented, the structure of the article can be re-determined.

2.The study carried out a large number of follow-up experiments, which is worthy of recognition. Is there specific tracking content, photos of the scene, or other relevant content?

3.Involving a large number of human experiments, is there an ethical review report? Or corresponding permission certificate?

4.There are too few references in the literature。

5.Separate discussion, conclusion, and limitation sections.

Comments on the Quality of English Language

I don't have much objection to the English part

Author Response

See the attached file

Author Response File: Author Response.pdf

Reviewer 6 Report

Comments and Suggestions for Authors

This paper suggested Consumer choice modeling takes center stage as we delve into understanding how personal preferences for sustainable products influence demand.  However, some areas need to be strengthened:

1.      This paper aims to outline the key modes for evaluating Product Equity. However even though the author(s) mentioned offering a roadmap for consumers and manufacturers alike to make more informed, responsible choices, it needs to explain the main necessity and meaning of this paper compared with other papers in detail. The roadmap also needs to explain how to use it in practice in detail as an example.

2.      On page 5, if BV is Brand Value, you need to write what BIV and BTV mean. For example, it needs to explain I means image, and T is trust in add.

3.      This study suggests that BTV values are not included as choice shares. Consumers choose based on non-physical product-related attributes such as price and advertising. It needs to be specific about how to use these key points in practice and explain through examples.

 

 

4.       This study was examined through the framework proposed by Kamakura, and Russell (K-R), but we need to explain in more detail how to utilize these results and why these results are important. Especially it needs to be supplemented a practical and theoretical implications as the results of the paper.

 

 

Comments on the Quality of English Language

Please check and correct the spelling overall. For example, the article title’s spelling is wrong “…Sustainble…” 

Author Response

see the attached file

Author Response File: Author Response.pdf

Round 2

Reviewer 5 Report

Comments and Suggestions for Authors

I think the authors have answered my questions

Comments on the Quality of English Language

I think the English language needs some minor corrections

Reviewer 6 Report

Comments and Suggestions for Authors

The requested revisions have been sufficiently reflected, rendering it suitable for publication.

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