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Core Content, Experience and Enlightenment of CSR in the J-League

Sustainability 2022, 14(21), 14058; https://doi.org/10.3390/su142114058
by Shaojie Zhang, Xiannan Yang * and Junren Cai
Reviewer 1:
Reviewer 2: Anonymous
Reviewer 3:
Sustainability 2022, 14(21), 14058; https://doi.org/10.3390/su142114058
Submission received: 11 September 2022 / Revised: 15 October 2022 / Accepted: 20 October 2022 / Published: 28 October 2022
(This article belongs to the Section Health, Well-Being and Sustainability)

Round 1

Reviewer 1 Report

The research conclusions of this study needs to be further improved and clarified.

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Reviewer 2 Report

This is an interesting paper and I enjoyed reading it. However, there are essential weaknesses that need to be addressed.

 

1) The introductory/opening section should communicate a little clearer the literature gaps, as well as the study's aims & objectives in order to facilitate the flow of the study.

 

2) Overall there are good arguments and well researched points made in this paper, but I feel that author needs to take to a further level.  

 

I strongly recommend that you include the following references focused on the target journal and on the paper’s topics:

 

Balon, V., Kottala, S. Y., & Reddy, K. S. (2022). Mandatory corporate social responsibility and firm performance in emerging economies: An institution-based view. Sustainable Technology and Entrepreneurship, 100023. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.stae.2022.100023

 

Bui, Q. T., & Lo, F. Y. (2022). Technology Multinational Enterprises from Emerging Markets: Competitive Interplay of International Entry Timing Decisions. Sustainable Technology and Entrepreneurship, 100019. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.stae.2022.100019

 

Li, T., Hao, L., Kubiczek, J., & Pietrzyk, A. (2022). Corporate social responsibility of sports club in the era of coronavirus pandemic. Zagłębie Sosnowiec case study. Economic Research-Ekonomska Istraživanja, 35(1), 2073-2092. https://doi.org/10.1080/1331677X.2021.1932547

 

Wang, C., Chupradit, S., Ajaz, T., Kanwal, S., & Suksatan, W. (2021). Dynamic effects of sports and physical activities and public health spending on sustainable environmental performance? New evidence from 50 US states. Economic Research-Ekonomska Istraživanja, 1-17. https://doi.org/10.1080/1331677X.2021.2016464

 

3) The research is well-developed.

 

4) At the end of the ´Conclusion´, the author should include clear statements as to where research should now go.

 

5) Carefully check the references, so as to make sure they are all complete and follow the Guidelines to Authors.

 

6) Finally, when you submit the corrected version, please do check thoroughly, in order to avoid grammar, syntax or structure/presentation flaws.

 

Thank you for the opportunity to read the paper.

 

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Reviewer 3 Report

The area of ​​CSR in sport is increasingly presented by the academic world, hence the idea of ​​presenting the J-League and the Chinese Super League is correct.

Unfortunately, the purpose, method of using the methods and the achieved results mean that the document presented for review is more of a "report / analysis" than a scientific article.

Method: - the author says that he used, among others (1) literature review and (2) expert interviews, in the case of 1. - the literature used includes only 41 sources, some of which are not scientific articles; (2) lack of information about the course of the interviews (what target group, what purpose). The author himself says in verses 569-570 that the results do not have to be consistent with reality due to the lack of detailed research.

The structure of the article is chaotic and you often get the impression that the content is the author's thoughts and not a solid scientific basis.

Summary, the structure and, most importantly, the content of the article are not suitable for publication in a scientific journal.

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Round 2

Reviewer 2 Report

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Reviewer 3 Report

Dear Authors,

thank you for making changes. Please expand the methodological part (describe the research methods in more detail). Scientific items have been added to the literature review, but there are no additional sentences (2 sentences have been added without specifying the source) - this part of the work should be strongly strengthened.

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Round 3

Reviewer 3 Report

Thank you for considering my comments. I hope that your article will be an inspiration for further research - both for you and your readers.

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