Festivals and Youth: An Educational Cultural Route to Festivals
Round 1
Reviewer 1 Report
Comments and Suggestions for AuthorsThank you for submitting this interesting article on a topic (festivals) that is very important for youth. The importance of the study is clearly described in the introduction. Nice the musicology is interested in this phenomenon now.
In line 72 you use the word GIS tools. You describe in lines 65 to 72 what GIS is without explicitly using the word GIS. This might not be clear to everyone.
The anthropology and history of festivals in general and specifically those in the city of Caceres is interesting to read.
The materials on which this study is based are are organized in clear tables. What is less clear to me is how these materials are analyzed. What method has been used and how is the method applied in this study. It would be nice to read a little more about that.
Line 321 refers to figure 5. Shouldn't this be figure 4?
On 3 spots the term values-based education is used. How do you define values-based education?
Author Response
Thank you very much for your review and constructive comments on our manuscript. We appreciate your positive feedback on the significance of our study on festivals and their importance to youth, as well as the recognition of the musicology field's interest in this phenomenon.
We have taken your comment regarding the use of "GIS tools" in line 72 into consideration. To address this, we have revised the text in the section encompassing lines 65 to 72. We now explicitly introduce the term "GIS" at the beginning of this discussion, ensuring that the context and meaning of GIS are clearly established for all readers before delving into its application in our study. This revision aims to enhance the manuscript's clarity and accessibility,
In response to your request for a clearer explanation of the analytical methods used in our research, we have carefully revised the manuscript to incorporate a more detailed description of the methods employed. We have added a new section dedicated to explicating the analytical methods applied in our study.
Upon reviewing the section you mentioned, we have confirmed that the reference to "Figure 5" in line 321 was indeed incorrect. This reference should have been to "Figure 4," as you rightly suggested. We have corrected this error in the manuscript to ensure that the text accurately reflects the figures and the data they represent.
In response to your comment, we have revised the manuscript to include a specific definition of "values-based education." Furthermore, we have enriched our text with additional bibliographic references that offer a comprehensive overview of this educational approach, its principles, and its significance in the contemporary educational landscape.
Thank you once again for your valuable feedback, which has guided us in strengthening this aspect of our manuscript. We are grateful for the opportunity to clarify and enrich our discussion on values-based education.
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Reviewer 2 Report
Comments and Suggestions for AuthorsAll concepts (festivals, cultural heritage, music itinerary etc.) are treated superficially and are approached by impressions. There are very few references and none of them is not from music area, and even them are not treated adequately. This is article has no academic value.
Author Response
1. Point-by-point response to Comments and Suggestions for Authors |
Comments 1: All concepts (festivals, cultural heritage, music itinerary etc.) are treated superficially and are approached by impressions. |
Response 1: Thank you for your comments on our article. We have taken into consideration your observation regarding the perceived superficial treatment of the concepts such as festivals, cultural heritage, and music itinerary, which you noted were approached through impressions. To address this concern, we have included additional bibliographic references that support and enrich our analysis of these concepts: Small, C. (1998). Musicking: The Meanings of Performing and Listening. Wesleyan University Press. DeNora, T. (2000). Music in Everyday Life. Cambridge University Press. MacAloon, J. J. (1984). Rite, Drama, Festival, Spectacle: Rehearsals Toward a Theory of Cultural Performance. Institute for the Study of Human Issues. Kahn, D. (1999). Noise, Water, Meat: A History of Sound in the Arts. MIT Press. Hesmondhalgh, D. (2005). The Cultural Industries. SAGE. We think that these references provide additional perspectives and solid theoretical grounding that support our approach to the mentioned concepts. We believe that the inclusion of these works strengthens the theoretical framework of our study and helps to address any perception of superficiality in our treatment of the topics. |
Comments 2: There are very few references and none of them is not from music area, and even them are not treated adequately. Response 2: Thank you for your feedback on the limited number and scope of references, particularly noting the absence of specific music area literature and its adequate treatment within our article. I appreciate your insights and recognize the importance of integrating relevant musical references to enrich our discussion. However, we want to clarify that our article aims to provide an interdisciplinary perspective, especially from the field of education, on festivals and musical routes. Our goal is to explore the creation of an educational path for inclusion and diversity, drawing upon cultural and musical heritage. This approach intends to broaden the conventional understanding of these topics by integrating insights from various disciplines, thereby contributing to a more comprehensive discussion on educational strategies for promoting inclusivity and diversity through cultural practices, as musical itineraries. Following your comments, we have sought to expand the specific references in the field of music, including mentions of the following works: a) to enhance the chapter "1.1. Musical Routes" we added references and insights focusing on the impact of music in educational and intercultural contexts, as well as the role of music festivals in fostering community engagement and cultural understanding. Here's specific references included from the field of music: Turino, T. (2008). Music as Social Life: The Politics of Participation. University of Chicago Press. Stokes, M. (1994). Ethnicity, Identity, and Music: The Musical Construction of Place. Berg Publishers. Shelemay, K. K. (2001). Soundscapes: Exploring Music in a Changing World. W. W. Norton & Company. Feld, S. (1994). Acoustic Ecology and the Soundscape. In S. Feld (Ed.), Yearbook for Traditional Music, Vol. 26, pp. 10-23. b) To enhance the chapter 1.2. History and Anthropology of festivals we’ve added references strengthen the theoretical framework with examples of the importance of festivals in contemporary culture and their contribution to cultural heritage: Bennett, A., Taylor, J., & Woodward, I. (Eds.). (2014). The Festivalization of Culture. Getz, D., & Page, S. J. (2016). Event Studies: Theory, research and policy for planned events. Routledge. Gibson, C., & Connell, J. (2012). Music Festivals and Regional Development in Australia. Ashgate. We are grateful for your thorough review and hope that these changes address your concerns. |
2. Additional clarifications |
Response: We would like to emphasize that our article aims to provide a comprehensive and interdisciplinary exploration of musical itineraries and festivals, with a particular focus on their educational value and impact on cultural heritage. We have addressed the reviewer's concerns by integrating a broader spectrum of scholarly references that underline the significance of music in fostering intercultural dialogue and understanding. These enhancements not only enrich our study but also contribute to the academic discourse on music's role in society. We believe that the modifications and additions to our manuscript now offer a more thorough examination of the topics at hand, supported by a solid theoretical framework and diverse perspectives from the field of music and cultural studies. |
Reviewer 3 Report
Comments and Suggestions for AuthorsThe article is original and contains the essential elements to be published. The topic is interesting and can provide valuable information in the field of musicology.
Author Response
Thank you very much for your positive feedback on our article. We are grateful for your recognition of its originality and the relevance of its topic to the field of musicology. Your acknowledgment that our work contains the essential elements for publication and can offer valuable insights into musicology is highly encouraging. We are committed to contributing to academic discourse in this area and hope our research will foster further studies and discussions on similar topics. Thank you once again for your supportive comments.
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Round 2
Reviewer 2 Report
Comments and Suggestions for AuthorsThe arguments are improved.