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Mesenteric Ischemia in a Splenectomized Patient with Auto-Immune Hemolytic Anemia: Case Report

Medicina 2023, 59(7), 1325; https://doi.org/10.3390/medicina59071325
by Sinthia Vidal-Cañas *, Cristian Zuñiga-Jaramillo, Esteban Artunduaga-Cañas, Valentina Pérez-Garay and Yamil Liscano *
Reviewer 1:
Reviewer 2: Anonymous
Medicina 2023, 59(7), 1325; https://doi.org/10.3390/medicina59071325
Submission received: 25 May 2023 / Revised: 2 July 2023 / Accepted: 13 July 2023 / Published: 18 July 2023

Round 1

Reviewer 1 Report

Title

Mesenteric ischemia in a splenoctomized patient with auto-immune hemolytic anemia: Case report

Comments

This manuscript is discussing an interesting topic .Some points need to be addressed.

The abstract is too long.

The author should stress the new information that is added to the literature by this case.

According to the abstract this is a common association. So, what can this manuscript add?

29.. from 5% to 50%, and early diagnosis and treatment can decrease its mortality rate from 5% to 0%. ...English editing and grammar revision are needed.

Appropriate citing of references is mandatory as much knowledge without references.

37…  Some studies ...some studies and only one reference at the end  

50.. significant splenectomy.…. What is meant by this strange term?

148.. There have been a few reports....it will be better to add references.

149…hemolytic disease…it is a strange term ..the authors meant hemolytic anemia

152.. In the case of our patient. English editing and grammar revision are required.

217.. There is little information in the literature on patients with splenectomy who present 217 mesenteric ischemia…this can be considered as a research gap and will be better to be transported to the end of the introduction section .

 

 

Comments for author File: Comments.docx

 Moderate editing of English language required

Author Response

We appreciate your comments and corrections, which have been taken into account to improve the manuscript.

This manuscript is discussing an interesting topic. Some points need to be addressed.

The abstract is too long.

Response: abstract was modified.

Abstract: The author should stress the new information that is added to the literature by this case.

Response: line 14-18 it is emphasized.

29.. from 5% to 50%, and early diagnosis and treatment can decrease its mortality rate from 5% to 0%. ...English editing and grammar revision are needed

Response: corrected on line 26.

Appropriate citing of references is mandatory as much knowledge without references.

Response: It was corrected.

37…  Some studies ...some studies and only one reference at the end  

Response: It was corrected.

50.. significant splenectomy.…. What is meant by this strange term?

Response: It was corrected in line 51.

148.. There have been a few reports....it will be better to add references.

Response: It was corrected

149…hemolytic disease…it is a strange term ..the authors meant hemolytic anemia

Response: It was corrected  on line 144

152.. In the case of our patient. English editing and grammar revision are required.

Response: It was corrected  

217.. There is little information in the literature on patients with splenectomy who present 217 mesenteric ischemia…this can be considered as a research gap and will be better to be transported to the end of the introduction section .

Response: It was corrected  

Author Response File: Author Response.pdf

Reviewer 2 Report

Per attached file

Comments for author File: Comments.pdf

Substantial editing needed to improve the reading.

Author Response

We appreciate your comments and corrections, which have been taken into account to improve the manuscript.

Science

 

The authors present the various lab tests in Table 1. What is surprising is that apparently

no coagulation or hemostatic tests are reported. Not even the PT (prothrombin time) or

aPTT (activated partial thromboplastin time). For a patient who is likely to be put on

anticoagulants, one would expect such information to be routinely sought, and to be

presented.

 

Response: included in the table and in the interpretation in the text.

 

It seems reasonable to ask why it is that some patients with history of splenectomy

following hemolytic anemia have subsequent thrombotic complications while others do

not. Is it possible that the vulnerable patients have additional predisposing factors? Some

such examples may include: APC resistant Factor V (aka: Factor VLeiden), TFPI deficiency

(± Protein S deficiency), Prothrombin G2021A mutation ( prothrombin),  PAI-1, etc.

While it may well be difficult for some clinical labs to identify all known thrombophilic

conditions, that doesn’t make them any less real. It would be helpful to include at least

some mention of these in the discussion of potential added contributing factors.

 

 

Response: added on lines 191 -195.

 

 

Presentación

 

  1. Change “ischemia in a splenoctomized patient” to “ischemia in a splenectomized

patient”

 

Response: corrected

43-45: Change “case report was De-identified patient specific information, meaning that all  data that could individually identify the patient were removed.” to “case report was deidentified. All patient-specific information, that could individually identify the patient, was removed.”

Response: corrected

 

50-54: Change “A 33-year-old Colombian man with a history of significant splenectomy  seven years ago due to autoimmune hemolytic anemia and insulin-requiring diabetes  mellitus type 2 three years ago, was referred to our institution on February 4, 2023, for  presenting a clinical picture of one month of evolution consisting of colicky abdominal  pain in the right hypochondrium associated with consumption of cholecystokinin food.” to “A 33-year-old Colombian man was referred to our institution on February 4, 2023. Over  the past month he has been developing colicky abdominal right hypochondrium pain, associated with consumption of cholecystokinin-rich food. His prior history includes: a) as  a result of autoimmune hemolytic anemia he had a splenectomy seven years ago, and b) he  was diagnosed with insulin-requiring diabetes mellitus type 2 three years ago.”

Response: corrected

54-57: Change “However, two days before, he began to present colicky abdominal pain in  the upper hemiabdomen, not irradiated, with a pain assessment scale of 10/10,  accompanied by nausea and multiple emetic episodes of bilious content.” to “Two days  previously, he began to have intense (10/10) non-radiating colicky abdominal pain in the upper hemiabdomen, accompanied by nausea and multiple emetic episodes of bilious content.”

Response: corrected

65: Change “As for his surgical history, he had a successful splenectomy” to “He had a successful splenectomy”

Response: corrected

66-68: Change “the patient showed signs of viability with BP 115/82 mmHg, HR 102 bpm,  FR 16 rpm, T° 36.4 °C, and was diaphoretic.” to “the patient was diaphoretic with these  physical signs: BP 115/82 mmHg, HR 102 bpm, FR 16 rpm, T° 36.4 °C

Response: corrected

82: Change “ketone bodies within normal limits and negative blood and urine cultures,” to  “ketone bodies were within normal limits. Blood and urine cultures were negative.”

Response: corrected

 

83-84: Change “Coprological: coffee of liquid consistency, positive occult blood, increased  bacterial flora, no intestinal parasites are observed, lipase 0.55 (see Table 1.)” to  “Coprology: coffee-colored with liquid consistency, positive for occult blood, increased  bacterial flora, negative for intestinal parasites, lipase 0.55 (see Table 1).”

Response: corrected

154-155: Change “Mesenteric vein thrombosis has a predilection for the small intestine  rather than the colon.” to “Mesenteric vein thrombosis tends to affect the small intestines  more frequently than the colon.”

Response: corrected

 

221: Change “that a series of abdomen is a diagnostic support,” to “that an abdominal  series is helpful for diagnostic support.”

Response: corrected

 

222: Change “and in these patients, after hours, they will present ascites due to  extravasation of liquid.” to “After some hours, these patients will present with ascites due  to fluid extravasation.”

Response: corrected

Table 1: i. ‘Blood count’ is an appropriate heading for the various blood cells. However, it is not appropriate for bilirubin, electrolytes, blood gasses, cultures (blood/urine) or coprology. These should have their more appropriate headings. ii. Change “Keton bodies” to “Ketone bodies”

Response: corrected

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