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Assessing the Attitudes and Clinical Practices of Ohio Dentists Treating Patients with Dental Anxiety

Dent. J. 2016, 4(4), 33; https://doi.org/10.3390/dj4040033
by Kristin A. Williams *, Sarah Lambaria and Sara Askounes
Reviewer 1: Anonymous
Reviewer 2: Anonymous
Dent. J. 2016, 4(4), 33; https://doi.org/10.3390/dj4040033
Submission received: 7 July 2016 / Revised: 16 August 2016 / Accepted: 7 September 2016 / Published: 30 September 2016

Round 1

Reviewer 1 Report

SEE ATTACHED FILE 

Comments for author File: Comments.docx

Author Response

L37-44 Paragraph needs re-writing, refs missing.

             Background: Second paragraph was reworded with references added.


L46-47 & L47-48 define CBT better and define BT

            Bot CBT and BT were clearly defined. References were added.


L52 ref is irrelevent- Tell Show do needs justification

           Tell-show-do is defined and justified with new pediatric journal reference added. Previous 

           reference is removed.

L53 Old N2O reference is irrelevant

            Reference has been changed and N2O statement rephrased

L58-59 & L106-115 Since this is only Ohio... & Ohio's required training?...          

            Added statement from Ohio Dental Practice Act from the State Dental Board addressing p

            permit requirements and education/training requirements for N2O use. Reference cited.

L204-214 References are missing

            Reference list corrected and amended to reflect above changes.


Attached is the revised manuscript with changes tracked. 

Author Response File: Author Response.docx

Reviewer 2 Report

Dear Auhtors;

I think the manuscript is well written. However, minor revisions are required including:


In introduction:

The maintenance of dental anxiety is problematic since DA has been linked to a number of negative outcomes:  explain more about what negative outcomes??


In discussion:

Dental anxiety not only affects patients, it affects dentists entrusted with their care :

it should change to:   it also affects dentists ........


last paragraph of discussion:

and decreased dental utilization compared to their peers:  dental utilization should change to dental care


this sentence should be corrected : Male dentists were more likely to perceive treating anxious patients as a challenge as compared to female dentists :

 correction: needs to be change to aschallenging as......


Thank you





Author Response

Revisions were completed in the introduction and discussion as noted.

Attached is the manuscript with changes tracked.Thank-You.


Author Response File: Author Response.docx

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